The Pirate Flag That Never Falls

If you don't do evil things, you won't call them pirates or adventurers.

I would like to ask which chapter everyone started to abandon the article? I am revising the article now, and I know that there are many problems ahead, so I want to know where a friend who gave up the book saw what made him give up. This will also make it easier for me to find the problems in time. After all, I have already written the entire outline and details of this book from the beginning to the end. Many seemingly unreasonable places are actually pitfalls I deliberately dug. Just because I know the follow-up content, I instinctively do not think there is a problem there. However, this can easily misunderstand the readers' senses. I hope you can help me put forward your own opinions. It's not easy for a new author, and many aspects are not as comprehensive as those experienced authors have considered. I don't want to just earn perfect attendance every month, so I hope to get help from everyone. I don't ask for direct subscriptions, but I just ask for your valuable opinions when the quality of this book is not good. Here, I would like to thank everyone who has helped me

The protagonist is Long Aotianxiang, who is willing to work hard and has talent, but he is not favored by God. The slightest dissatisfaction will make him defy heaven. The opponent is not only a mere sidekick, but the character's IQ is not weak, at least not so much that just a plan full of loopholes can make everyone praise him after seeing it. It looks very smooth, especially in the later stages. Coupled with the plot setting of 'pirate flow'. It reminds people of the passion of student days and the flying days of youth. . . For a new author, what more can you ask for! One word, come on! Two words, worthy of appreciation and encouragement!

As the title states, I am a new author, and I have a lot of shortcomings in controlling some content. I also ask that you please bear with me and leave your valuable comments. Thank you.

I haven't read the book, but the author said that many readers like dark protagonists. Oh, if it's really dark, I'm sorry, I'll spray you to death. I read a novel where I felt happy killing a little girl. Oh my god! I can understand the protagonist and the author, because no matter how big the pit is, it can be filled, and no matter how bad the protagonist's character is, it can be explained. What I can't tolerate is why readers become happy one by one. Slowly, this chapter is full of fun. I posted a comment to refute, hehe, how many people greet my family. The people at Qidian are becoming more and more amazing, really

Why does it feel like there is a shadow of the pirate system? The pirate system is an old book from 2011. I just finished reading Pirate System and was looking for a pirate-type book. I saw that the plot settings in this book are quite similar to Pirate System.

Does this kid have a problem in his head? To put it bluntly, his mother and sister died because of him. Why do you hate his father so fiercely? When manpower is finally exhausted, hate yourself with so much hatred. He committed suicide in front of his mother's grave. He is insane.

Looking at those glorious pirates at the starting point makes me want to vomit. A pirate does not kill, rob, smuggle, or kidnap. I also like to do reverse operations, uphold justice and take risks everywhere... Why don't you call yourself an adventurer?

It's a very attractive book. I hope the author can continue writing. I'd love to read the follow-up content.

It can be seen that Chen Cheng, this arrogant thing, will be killed, otherwise Sawdgers wouldn't have that weird smile at the end. However, as a novel, the first chapter is a bit slow before the protagonist is completely clear, but it is still within the acceptable range. Since it is a pirate, will it turn into a fantasy novel in the guise of a pirate? For example, One Piece, although it is called the "Pirate" King, the main battles take place on land. Moreover, pirate novels are different from other novels in that they require a huge world view. The world view of Pirates of the Caribbean is relatively small. However, this work is a movie after all. The plot of the movie moves quickly, so if the world view is too big, it will become a series. This is not the case in the novel. The pirate world in the novel must have this huge world background. The world background is too small and it is not satisfying to watch. Even if the protagonist really becomes the pirate king, it will not be that great, but the world is too big and cannot be grasped. Therefore, I look forward to the follow-up content. If the above four problems are solved, then this book will be a masterpiece. I hope the author will continue to work hard.