Hanguang Great Sage

Your introduction really makes people laugh to death. Hasn't what you wrote fallen into the so-called "mentally retarded" cliche that you yourself said? People like Sanqing, Jingyin Zhunti, Nuwa, and Hongjun have become saints. Are saints reflected in this book? I see that they are just intrigues and various power-seeking, so-called big-heartedness? The so-called magnanimity? There are also various twists and turns in the plot, and the promotion is really inexplicable. Taiyi is immortal, but he ends up dead in piles. Taiyi's third step is immortal, but he is slapped to death. Daluo is immortal, but he still ends up dead. You are slapped in the face again and again, but you still have the face to write it down! Does the protagonist have any meaning? What do you want to express? You are just rewriting the story based on some legends. It is still a story without your own ideas. Most of it is plagiarism and has no original ideas of your own! Sticking to the existing things and knowing the final outcome, what is the significance of She Yu's existence? Are you just here to witness the stories you told about the Dharma-ending era there? And since the Fourth Master of Xihuang owed She Yu a favor, why didn't he take action? Not to mention that Jie Yin is so fond of Zhong Xihuang! There are too many self-contradictions in your book, and many plots make no sense at all. I originally thought that the protagonist was not the kind of cliché who climbs to the top of cultivation, and that he would be interesting or want to express his own things. But now it seems that it may be worse than those novels that are just clichés! I have already tested the poison, so I suggest you don't fall into the trap.

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Let me talk about my thoughts after watching this. I don't talk about the plot, just my feelings. First of all, the concept of this novel is very good. It is far better than most prehistoric novels. It is not a cool novel. You will see the advantages of the protagonist, and you will also see many of his shortcomings. For example, the protagonist is obsessed with the snake tribe. This may make many readers unhappy. They think that the protagonist should fight for the luck of the world and create a force that sweeps the prehistoric world. But this is the highlight of this novel. There is no blind coolness. The persistence of the protagonist and the persistence of the immortals. Each creature and immortal has its own ideas and characteristics. Together they form a magnificent ancient world. Instead of thousands of people being the same, all the saints want to compete for luck and incense. No matter how big the ancient world described, in my opinion, it is just a vegetable market, with a group of aunts snatching Chinese cabbage. This book is no longer like the traditional prehistoric book. It opens with Pangu creating the world, and then dragons and phoenixes fight for hegemony, Hongjun preaches, and the Lich Catastrophe... The routine is so routine that I know what will happen next without even reading it. Although the author's writing skills still need to be improved, the writing style can be improved, but inspiration is hard to come by. I hope the author will work hard!

Full subscription support to the author. The writing is very good and there are no major flaws so far. It is recommended that the author always ask for recommendation votes. After all, your data is a bit miserable. If you don't subscribe, you will have no motivation to write a good book. If you have time, try to correct typos. The first chapters are okay, but the later chapters are a bit too much.

Speculation: In the Battle of the East China Sea, both Ao Jun and the Lord of the East China Sea died, the Dragon Mother abdicated, the daughter of Jellyfish Lingji became the heir of the Dragon Clan, the protagonist reconciled with the Dragon Clan (is there any possibility of becoming allies in the future?) 🤫

The protagonist keeps saying that Taiyi is getting less and less. Wasn't it the protagonist who killed him? It's said that the Five Saints don't like the demon clan. Isn't it because the protagonist forced them to do so? The more I watch, the more I feel that the protagonist is both right and proper

I really regretted spending the money. I wanted to be fed a shit. The battle ahead was long and smelly. I had to play about 20 chapters each time. In the end, it turned out to be a sad ending. I deserved to be thrown into the street.

If this book becomes popular, God will not tolerate it

From chapter 67 to chapter 100, a total of 33 chapters, the author is writing a small scene. Yes, it is a long-winded 33 chapters! ! !

It's a good beginning, but it's just a beginning! What a waste of my recommendation votes!