Reborn in a Mythical World

In the early stage, a group of female characters surround the protagonist, which makes book fans feel that this is a harem stallion novel. In fact, these are just passers-by. . . . Especially in this book, before his ascension, he was involved with many women in the mortal world, like a romantic, but after his ascension, he became a stranger. Moreover, the introduction of the book is completely different from the content of the book. Mythology has not been published and Journey to the West has not been published. It is thought that Nie Xiaoqian is the heroine, but in fact she is just a passerby who has appeared a few times. I feel like two people wrote Before Ascension and After Ascension. In short, I feel that the outline has changed a lot.

To comment, although the writing style is very good, the author basically writes blindly. He just writes wherever he thinks without considering the context. He is so excited that he can't understand it at all. The new book Nine-Headed Insect jumped to an unknown place after reading five chapters. You can't write blindly like this.

Chunyang Dao copied Dao Zhengfeng from Chunyang Dao Zhengfeng. With Dao Zhengfeng as a template, what I wrote couldn't go far. I think it's okay. As a result, I opened a new book and let myself go all at once. This book might as well have been promoted. I read dozens of chapters and just pushed through to the end. The protagonist is called Yi Shun. And the protagonist is not idle for a minute. This person has just finished causing trouble for the protagonist, and the next one comes immediately, sometimes in series. The protagonist is not idle for a moment, giving people the feeling of being hanging all the time, and there is no danger at all. Just like using a clipper to get a haircut, push it all the way, one wave after another. Moreover, Yin Shen has no weaknesses at all according to what you wrote. Even Qi practitioners and martial arts masters have been bulldozed by you. You started killing the gods when you were a child. Moreover, the gods found you guilty and had something to do with you becoming a scholar. If you become a scholar, you will immediately be exempted from the crime of murder? Moreover, it is said that gods cannot enter people's houses and will immediately kill them if they enter your home. Why do you go to the court to establish gods, and why do you ask gods to invigilate exams? The gods in your place have become worse than chickens. The rights you have in your place are just scholars, and people can become gods after their death. What about the forces in the Yang world? The whole world is about to be bulldozed by you. You push such a trivial article all the time, and you are not pretending to be a slap in the face, but you are still looking at it with a bit of hatred, and you just keep pushing it without saying anything. No need to show hatred.

Each chapter begins with a large section of scenery, and the author's characteristics are highly identifiable.

The author is Wen Qing, and a lot of useless modifiers seem annoying. A chaotic system is not promising. It doesn't make sense that the protagonist's life experience, so many awesome things, was killed by an old witch. Confucianism and Taoism are popular, and the world that has been playing with literature for tens of thousands of years will be surprised by a small poem. It's just the author's own pleasure.

There are four different works, with various settings cobbled together here and there. It seems that he wants to learn from the divine machine "Yang Shen", but unfortunately he is not as decisive as Hong Yi in killing, and he cannot learn the violent spirit of the divine machine. I wanted to write for a scientific examination, so I wrote a Wenzhaogong. When I want to write about a monk, it seems like a constant slap in the face, but it doesn't make people think clearly. He has an air of airs, but without his steel frame, he is always frustrated and unable to vent his frustrations.

The plot is really flawed. I can tolerate the clichés at the beginning. I can tolerate lowering the character's IQ in order to forcibly establish conflicts, but I can't tolerate turning the protagonist into a lunatic for the sake of the plot. An elder of a sect accidentally discovers that the protagonist's maid is a very good buddhist monk, and wants to accept her as a disciple (this arrangement is already extremely cliché). For normal people, this is considered a good thing. Even if you don't want her to leave, you want to make arrangements by yourself, show off your cultivation and talk about it, or you can be tough and do it. After all, you are also a person with a background. As a result, the protagonist chopped people up like a psycho. Inexplicably, he became enemies with a big sect. Later, he introduced that this elder was the son of some big boss, and he seemed to want to destroy everyone in his family. You are still cultivating Taoism. People who cultivate demons are more sophisticated than you.

I read one chapter and wasted a bar of electricity.

I am on the first floor, I am on the first floor, congratulations to Yunyan... The hard work of the past three years has finally paid off! 🤭🌹

If it doesn't work, I have to complain about it. Promotion requires foreign objects. It's really outrageous.