Investiture of the Gods: Dragon Tendons Torn Out from the Start

Now I understand why I removed this book from my bookshelf. 🙂🙂🙂 Let me clarify: I only read up to chapter 19 before I died from poisoning. I deleted the book because the protagonist used cannibalism as a pretext to execute prisoners in the Dragon Palace.

I've noticed that regardless of the main characters, Nezha, Lady Yin, or the author's narrative style, no one seems to care about the people of Chentang Pass except Li Jing. Only Li Jing truly cares about them; he's willing to sacrifice his own son to protect Chentang Pass and its inhabitants. Even if the author portrays Li Jing negatively, I still think he's far better than Nezha.

Enough said, just see for yourself. This helps the author filter readers in advance.

First, the chapter on water has very little substance; it feels like the author is just trying to meet the daily word count requirement and has become a tool for piling up words. Secondly, the author likes to suppress the protagonist's level, creating scenarios of challenging opponents of higher levels to make the protagonist seem incredibly powerful. In reality, it's just trash.

It's tasteless, but a pity to throw it away. Something's getting increasingly off. They've even got mecha now. Unbelievable.

Here's a suggestion: stop using so many ranks and levels; it really lowers the overall quality! Use more impressive terms like Human Immortal, Earth Immortal, Celestial Immortal, Golden Immortal, or Grand Luo Immortal. Add a few lines of poetry, and the level of sophistication instantly rises.

Can this protagonist be resurrected indefinitely? It seems like they're indifferent to their own lives, just focusing on the task at hand. Or it's just a robot that only cares about the mission and how to activate it, regardless of any danger. It's no longer human.

I'm getting a little annoyed. The villain keeps causing trouble, but the protagonist isn't dealing with it, or is dealing with it very slowly. It makes me uncomfortable.

After the book is released, could you please remove the main character's panel? It's been like this for several chapters in a row, constantly using the panel to pad the word count, with half a chapter being repetitive content. This is outrageous! We paid for this; supporting the official version isn't easy for working people! 😓😓😓

This time, the writing really suited my taste. I enjoy reading novels about time travel and the Investiture of the Gods. The writing style is excellent, especially some of the settings that really caught my eye. Keep it up!