
Investiture of the Gods: Dragon Tendons Torn Out from the Start
封神:开局被抽龙筋
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I finally know why I removed this book from my bookshelf in the first place 🙂🙂🙂 Let me first explain that I only read chapter 19 before I died of poison. The book was originally deleted because the protagonist executed the prisoners in the Dragon Palace on the charge of cannibalism. It was because the protagonists who traveled through time and became monsters during the Great Desolate River returned fire, harming the interests of their own race to promote the development of the human race. At that time, I was poisoned and died. Because this triggered bad memories for me, I removed the book from my bookshelf. The reason why I am here to post a chapter review now is because the protagonist is building a good relationship with Nezha. Nezha almost killed you back then. I can't stand it when you are still there to be Nezha's licking dog. Of course I can understand why the protagonist did this, but I don't feel comfortable with it at all. The value of online articles is for most people a place to release their emotions. This is also the reason why refreshing articles are so popular. Today's online articles are basically not unpleasant. Even those platinum masters will not write plots that are frustrating but are in line with human feelings. They will all create refreshing points, but the refreshing points are not the same. After all, life is so tiring. In reality, it is all about those frustrating human relationships, but it is still the same in the novel. Why do I still read it 🙂🙂🙂 Also, don't say that the early stage is a bit toxic like some authors do, just endure it in the middle stage. With so many articles on the Internet, why don't I look for a book that won't make me depressed and aggrieved throughout? Why do you have to endure this early stage of your life?🙂🙂🙂 The above is just my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.
I found that no matter the protagonist, Mrs. Nezha Yin or the author's presentation tendency, no one cares about the people of Chentangguan, only Li Jing. Only Li Jing cares about the people of Chentangguan. He can give up his own son, but he also wants to protect Chentangguan and the people. Even if the author says that Li Jing is not good in terms of presentation, I still think Li Jing is much better than Nezha.
It's a good saying that the matter of one's predecessor has nothing to do with oneself.
No more, just read it yourself and help the author select readers in advance
First, water. There is not much practical information in one chapter. It feels like in order to complete the task of updating the word count every day, I have become a tool to pile up the word count. Second, I like to lower the protagonist's level and do some level-skipping challenges to show how powerful the protagonist is. In fact, it's just contempt. I write about how awesome the protagonist's golden fingers are, what awesome skills, foundation, etc., But this is not perfect, that is not perfect, and the level is not improved. It's so difficult for you even if you have a golden finger, so wouldn't it be true that the other great talents without golden fingers are just as talented and talented as the protagonist? It seems that the protagonist himself is just a loser who can only play games Thirdly, for the villain Wu De who appeared at the beginning, it is enough to drag it out for hundreds of chapters, and the treatment is too awkward. It has been paved the way for so long and you are waiting for you to have a good time. , The result is that you are a stinker Fourth, the plot before the end of Fengshen is given 8 points. The plot after the end of Fengshen is variously stitched, and the stitches are very stretched, so I can only give 4 points. Even if you use the plot of Journey to the West to connect it?
It's tasteless to eat, and it's a pity to abandon it. It feels more and more wrong, even the mechas have come out, and I've taken it.
I would like to give you a suggestion: don't rush to a different level or you'll feel like your level is being lowered! If you use a combination of human, earthly, celestial, golden, celestial, great, and so on, and then add a few lines of poetry, the style will instantly come to you. Just like those days when I was reading articles on cultivating immortals, you, who is in the golden elixir stage, would like to say: You have finally broken through to the third level. How low grade. A master wrote: Once a golden elixir is swallowed, my fate will be decided by me from now on! Don't you think the strong character will come out?
Can this protagonist be resurrected infinitely? Why do I feel so indifferent to my own life that I keep focusing on the task? Either it is a robot, it just knows how to keep an eye on tasks, how to activate tasks, and does not care about any dangerous robots. It is no longer a human being.
I feel a little uncomfortable. The villain keeps causing trouble and the protagonist just doesn't deal with it or is slow to deal with it. I feel uncomfortable.
Don't cheat money
Can you collect the main character panel after it is put on the shelf? How many chapters have it been in a row? The word count is kept low in the panel. Half of one chapter contains repeated content. It's too much. It costs money. It's not easy to support the original version by workers. 😓😓😓
The writing this time really suits my appetite. I like reading novels about time-traveling and becoming gods. The writing is very good, especially some settings that made my eyes light up. Come on