Online Gaming: The Grand Collector

Overall rating 82. Orthodox holographic online game text, with novel setting, interesting plot, clear main line and careful attention to details. Although there are some unsatisfactory aspects, the flaws are not concealed. It is a complete and rigorous novel worth reading. (The important point is that the author still has the manuscript saved) The opening game is a public beta, and you can enter the game directly. There is no irrelevant content, the rhythm is appropriate, and it is entertaining enough. The game setting is novel and the professions are quite satisfactory, but the character setting is relatively innovative, and it feels like a bright spot. At the same time, there are also many unexpected ideas in terms of specific equipment tasks, such as "+15 epic necklace", "high auspicious number rewards", "hatred lock", monster names and skill names, etc. When reading, you will have the feeling of "Hey, this setting is very interesting", I suggest the author to continue to maintain it. The protagonist has a clear goal. He enters the game as a professional player and has a small group. He can exchange information offline and so on. The setting is relatively complete and self-consistent. You can look forward to the subsequent development. The golden finger should be regarded as luck, coupled with a little skill, it will bring good skills and equipment tasks, a normal routine. The overall focus is on data flow and technology flow. All upgrades, equipment, skills and even monster attributes have clear data support. When the protagonist fights the boss, the details will be carefully designed (the author said), and (should) stand up to scrutiny and appear to be very rigorous. The villain is pretty average, just a small boss in the big guild who fights against others, and with the addition of a white lotus, there is generally nothing outstanding about it. At the same time, I think another advantage of this novel is that the author is very sincere. This sincerity includes but is not limited to having a saved manuscript, being able to reply to this chapter, and commenting in the book review area. He often talks about the thoughts he put into writing, the hard work he put into this book, etc. In the writer's remarks. Personally, I think this will attract the most fans. Then it's time to make suggestions. The first is the "la" at the beginning of the article. I also read that some book friends have reported this issue, and the author also said that changes have been made in subsequent chapters, but I still want to express my opinion. "La" looks very cute and cute, but it is still a bit unserious and dramatic when used in a serialization, especially since the overall writing style is not so colloquial. If the author really prefers this word, he may consider putting it in the dialogue. Secondly, I feel that the author's plot for the protagonist to withdraw money is not particularly appropriate. It feels like it is just starting out and everything has not been settled yet. At the same time, I live at home and don't need money urgently. Especially the later plot also involves the protagonist buying a lot of things and being short of money, so if there is no foreshadowing here, it would always feel a bit strange for the protagonist to sell money in such a hurry. Then, the protagonist encounters several hidden tasks in the novel. Most of the time, the author will give an explanation. The main idea is that the triggering conditions of this hidden task are actually very harsh. It is not easy for the protagonist to encounter this hidden task. I personally feel that this kind of content is a bit too frequent at present. It can be written less directly, or it can be included in the author's remarks. At present, it is a bit tired of aesthetics. Finally, I read other people's comments that I could tell the main plot of the novel from the title. I looked at the title, Master of Collection... Why didn't I see what the main plot was, and it wasn't a card game or a special profession? It was a bit embarrassing. Finally, I saw the author interacting with readers about the number of female protagonists, and I would like to share my views. There are several girls in the novel who have a crush on the male protagonist. This is normal. But if the male protagonist is hesitant and hesitant, or half-heartedly wants to open a harem and rushes to the stallion road, it will be a bit poisonous and shocking. I personally don't like this style of painting - of course this is just a personal whim and has nothing to do with the actual situation of the novel, so you can just ignore it.

After seeing the book list and leaving a message, here are my thoughts after finishing the meal: What I like: 1. Cheerful and cheerful: No matter the writing style, characters or NPCs in the game are very lively and cheerful, it is easy and interesting to read. 2. Small setting and small surprise: +15 epic necklace? Do you need 888 to hunt rabbits? In short, there are many things that make you want to shout at the author: I'll let you go! 3. Unpredictable direction: This may be a mixed bag of advantages and disadvantages. Seeing that the latest chapter is still unable to imagine the next direction, I am a little excited, but also a little impatient. What I personally dislike: 1. Self-pleasure: The protagonist is currently very powerful, so powerful that he has no opponents and almost no friends. Chapter 80 is almost a solo show for the protagonist, but it is also clearly stated that in the future it will be a team or a guild. Looking at it, you will feel like, how long do you have to be happy before entering the theme? 2. Too fast and too slow: There are only a bunch of artifacts in the Novice Village, and the protagonist's arming speed is a bit alarming, but it feels like the game is only 2% in progress. How should we strengthen the protagonist in the remaining 98%? It reads like a teenager's triumph... 3. Regarding women: This is really a very personal preference. In this close to real urban background, I don't really like hugging, or being ambiguous. However, there is nothing in this book that offends me so far. Summary: Although there is still some distance between it and the masterpiece, it is worth reading. The book is enjoyable and not depressing. There is no obvious point of dissatisfaction. The updates are stable. The author is very willing to interact with readers. Personally, I will be willing to subscribe if it is published.

Come, come, the gathering that was bombarded by Bai Yinmeng 😁 (The author's recording posts are very inspiring, I have followed the posts for a long time, and I am very impressed)

I heard that the collection of this book has increased a lot in the past two days, but there are no people in the comment area. Brother Gou, I will come here and say a few words 1. In the front of this book, Brother LJ Lanxiang always uses "LA" for "LA". Brother Gou, I almost vomited 😰 2. The plot of this book is reallybloody! Extremelycruel! Brother Dog, Ican't stand it! It's normal that you can't stand it either. Brother Dog, I understand. However, why don't you spit on such a ** book before leaving? 3. As a deputy leader who doesn't read this book, Brother Dog, I welcome you to scold Brother Lanxiang and this book, but please pay attention to your wording and be careful not to be banned by the system! 4. The last option for post classification in the book review area isFuck Lan Xiang!

Judging from the current chapters of this book, there is nothing poisonous about it. The plot and settings look normal. However, it has a problem, that is, it lacks attractions. Nowadays, there are countless online game novels. Why do you want to stand out? The most important thing is that you need to be different from other books and need some unique ideas. But unfortunately, I haven't seen it yet. Except for the language barrier in the previous system, which was a bright spot when it was required to be entered by a real person, the rest seemed to be ordinary. A very familiar routine, starting from the village elder... Giving the protagonist some adventures. The protagonist's parents in the book are a key point. Currently only the mother appears. Could the father be a hidden boss? In fact, the author must handle the protagonist's game and real life well. Otherwise, readers will feel nondescript and abandon the book. Finally, I wish the author will write better and better^_^

It's been almost a year since I finished the book, and I'm still doing this. This wave of starting point is making a lot of money.

I read this book after receiving a tip for a large reward. I found it to be complete and very pleased with it. After reading more than 80 chapters, I really can't help but vomit: You must read this book without thinking, without thinking, without thinking, and saying it three times shows its importance. The writing in this book is fairly fluent, and the plot is uninspiring, so I can't comment on it. The point is, author, you are writing about a game, and Chapter 80 has made you write: someone else is level 3 and you are level 10, you can get gold or god-level equipment casually, a level-1 pet can help you withstand more than 10,000 fatal attacks, and the equipment attributes can double your skill attack... "The whole world is yours, why are you playing a game!" A game written by you is so unbalanced, what else is there to see, just challenge the final boss to complete the book...

Qin Yan's Q-version vertical painting [Officially customized], so handsome! 😍

After reading the first few chapters, you can tell that the author is taking things for granted. How could a player who makes a living by playing equipment and selling them not understand the background information of the game in advance? How could he choose his career randomly?

This is the level that future platinum writers should have. I bet that if this book is not popular, the author of this book will lose ten years of his life, and he will never eat instant noodles without seasoning packets. Put up a sticker to prove it!