Pure Pond

The pain at the beginning of "Chi Jing" made me feel it even through the screen (however, the connection between flesh and blood in the chapter made me lose my mind for a second). As the heroine of this book, Chi Jing, as soon as she traveled back in time, the word "slave" was branded on her face. In ancient times, tattooing was a form of tattooing on the face. Although the area of ​​the wound was very small, it brought not only physical pain to the victim, but also mental humiliation and torture. There is no woman in the world who does not love beauty - no matter whether she is born with a pleasing face or not - even if she has an acne, she will feel awkward and uncomfortable until it disappears. The owner of Chi Jing is a naturally beautiful person, and because of her good looks, she was jealous of her owner and had the word "slave" branded on her face. But the heroine whose soul comes from the 21st century didn't care about this. After escaping from the Tang family, she covered herself with a veil just to avoid scaring others. This shows that she is really different from ordinary women. The most gifted thing is that Chi Jing can see the scene when others die. As an atheist, I don't know much about supernatural things. My superficial understanding is that Chi Jing has opened his eyes and can predict the death of others. This is the golden finger of the heroine of this book. Qidian's online articles all have the term "Three Golden Chapters". Although I don't know much about it, in this book, Chi Jing's life experience and personality, the experience of the body owner and his relationship with the owner's family, the description of the golden finger, and the relationship between Chi Jing and his younger brother are all established by the author in just three chapters. There are highlights, foreshadowing, suspense, and appeal. For a new author, it is already very good. However, for a female channel book, the first few chapters are to introduce the heroine's golden finger, so it involves scenes of character death, and the author's description is very vivid, so it is a bit bloody, but not scary. Those who are timid can skip the detailed description, which will not affect the understanding of the plot. Although Chi Jing can see the fate of others, she does not believe in fate, so she wants to change the fate of Wan Sheng, whom she considers to be her younger brother in her previous life. A reader of this book once questioned Chi Jing's feelings for Wan Sheng from his biological brother. I think that reader must be a man, so he cannot understand this kind of thing. Women are very emotional creatures. They will transfer their feelings to things related to them because some people, or even their pets, leave. What's more, it's her own flesh and blood relatives who are the purpose of supporting her to live. The death of his younger brother is a knot that cannot be erased or unsolved in Chi Jing's heart. Therefore, after time travel, when he sees someone who looks the same as his younger brother and has the same birthmark, he will inevitably treat him as his younger brother in his previous life and love him. Traveling to a completely unfamiliar world with no goals and direction, Wan Sheng is her purpose for living in this life. There was a very popular saying on Douyin before: Have you ever risked your life for someone in your life? For Chi Jing, her younger brother is the person she wants to protect at all costs, so this setting is completely reasonable. Chi Jing could see hell in her eyes, how could it be a white lotus? She predicted that the Tang family who had bullied the owner would be exterminated. She did not report the news, but left with an attitude that it had nothing to do with her. But she still has a compassionate heart. Based on my understanding of the author, I think this character's personality is very similar to the author himself. Miss Wong was my guide at the starting point. She was righteous and helpful. She took the initiative to help us promote books in the column and answered many questions that new authors did not understand. She hated evil so much that everyone turned a blind eye to unfair things, but she was the only one who would stand up regardless of her own safety. The same goes for Chi Jing. She relied on her own scale in her heart to watch on the bank of the River Styx. If the people passing by were kind, she would hold them back and not let them pass; if the people passing by were evil, she would let them go to hell. Chi Jing has demons in his heart, but he can ferry people across the river.

Well, I came here as recommended by the system every day. I haven't read the book yet. I just read your book review and I think what you said is really right: "If you don't want to read this book, you can stop reading it and remove it from the bookshelf. Don't be so self-righteous that you can curse people in the book to gain a sense of presence, and I hope there will be a quiet reading atmosphere in the book." This sentence makes me feel very sad. When I read a book, I will open the chapter reviews from time to time to see the comments that are like-minded to me, rather than the bad words. What you said really makes me feel heart-warming. And when I look for books and find them that are not suitable for me, I usually discard them and remove them from the bookshelf, and I never leave random comments. Of course, if you feel that the book is still salvageable, you will put it in a category that is not commonly used. Maybe you feel that it is hard to describe it because of its precious light and dust.

I have read more than 300 chapters. I started reading it on Friday night and finished it in one sitting. The plot drags on a bit, but it's still very interesting and it's better to get to the fight quickly. Before I know it, it has reached 1 million words. Come on, right, how many thousand words are left in this book? Is there a score for the next book? Also, do you know how many times I checked this paragraph before I dared to publish it? I was afraid that I would make typos and be criticized by you.

I have a habit. I can't help but write a few sentences to express my personal opinion when I see a book that I like or have some thoughts on. After reading the introduction, I feel that it is very interesting. Reading the book reviews, I will think that this book should be very exciting. For an old book fan, it is really not easy to find a novel worth reading in the sea of ​​​​all books. I picked up this book after reading the introduction. I will objectively evaluate whether the book is good or not. But this book cannot be said to be very mature and exciting. At least the first few chapters did not strongly attract me to read. Moreover, the first chapter was lost and may have been blocked by Qidian. I patiently read the previous long review and several subsequent chapters. Strictly speaking, the author's writing style cannot be said to be sophisticated. At least in my opinion, it is not as good as the review in the long review. It also has traces of a novice's greenness. This may be a common problem among novices, some are obvious and some are not. The most obvious problem with this book is that there are too many inner activities of the characters at the beginning, which makes it seem a bit long-winded. As the story develops, the cause and effect of the past and present lives should be appropriately included, and the foreshadowing should be complementary to each other to make it more attractive. In this way, it starts with memories, the present, and inner activities, which makes people feel unclear. Although it is compact, it feels messy. The author may want readers to understand the heroine's past and present experiences as quickly as possible, but this kind of writing is really not recommended. Of course, the concept of the story is still good, but the author's writing skills need to be refined, and maybe he will get better and better after writing a few more books. Come on＾0＾~🌹

I am curious about the truth about Wang Sheng and Li Sheng's reasoning question.

It's not easy to be able to write almost 900,000 words! Come on, wrong girl!

Shocked! ! ! The word count actually exceeds mine! God, am I just left behind? Wuwuwu, crying~~

I saw this book when I was grabbing red envelopes. Although I didn't grab the monthly pass package, I still clicked in to take a look. The author was so gentle in his criticism at the beginning. I sent the seven votes first. I will definitely vote in the future when I think about it. If you haven't grabbed the monthly pass package by 11 o'clock tonight, the monthly pass will be given away.

I read your column on the official account... Come and take a look at the koi 🤓

It's pretty good, the logic is smooth, and it doesn't seem that difficult to understand. I don't know when the heroine will go to Tianji Lane again. The first two times were just to test the waters, right? It's time to make a splash on your third visit, right? Looking forward to it