Straight to Death

Although this book is very toxic in terms of the heroine, especially after taking the heroine to other worlds, she has a lot of crotch tightening, but this is the only one of the author's books that I have read. At least the early stage was quite enjoyable. The newer books are getting worse and worse, and I can't read them at all. Is there anyone who can follow up the Qidian manga? 😒

Personally, I feel that the heroine came in too early. If possible, it would be better to come later, because the heroine came in so early and didn't know what to do. It was better to wait until later. It was fun to watch without the heroine, but I don't know why it was a bit delayed after the heroine was added. And every time I said that the hero is a murderer, but there is no real feeling of a murderer. Instead, it feels like a Japanese manga hero. I feel so uncomfortable. As a murderer, I should be a little more crazy. If the attached one is useless, can the author write a novel about the evil eye of death? In the end, the pig's feet use bows and other long-range weapons. 🙏🙏🙏👍🙏👍🙏👍

I feel that Fang Li's job change is a bit early. Maybe the author prefers to learn how to fight in the city, so he arranged for the protagonist to use star power. However, star power itself is really not worth developing. In the later stages of combat, star power can basically only strengthen the body, and it is based on quantity (point enhancement). If you have Shuakugan, you can choose the power of existence. Not only is the power level high, but it is also versatile.

In the two chapters of Kabane and God-Eater written by the author, I feel that the protagonist is a little emotionless. Basically, he just ignored it. He doesn't even have memories of the characters who impressed him the most. After all, they are also the first two worlds. This will make the protagonist seem a bit heartless.

Can you please make up the extra chapter?

The background setting of the first plot world is not reasonable and there is basically no sense of substitution. If the plot world is already set, then there is no need to write down the relevant settings in detail, such as the steam gun... Isn't it better to just mention it in one sentence? I can't understand How do those book friends who read so little about the second dimension continue to read?

The writing is good, but there are too many poisonous points (especially about women)

I've watched one side of it, and now I'm watching it a second time, but there are a few things I've always wanted to say. In the Shukugan chapter, in the scene describing the first battle between the protagonist and Chienden Shudenan, after being bitten on the arm by Shudenan's snake, the dagger fell. After the protagonist kicked Shutonan away, not only did he have time to temporarily heal his arm so that he could pick up the dagger and use his ability to kill the evil eye, but it was also enough for the protagonist to retrieve the weapon. Why should he rush up and fight Shutonan hand-to-hand when he can't use his hands? This is quite unreasonable. Although you have practiced in the urban world dragon. For half a year, you still don't understand the principle of how one's strength defeats the enemy's weakness. It doesn't make sense that both of you end up losing in hand-to-hand combat with Qian Bian. Qian Bian's hand-to-hand combat is definitely better than that of the protagonist, not to mention that the pig's feet can't use both hands. How can you be confident that you can fight without weapons and the magic eyes, but in the end it was a tie (I mentioned before that Shana's strength at that time was not inferior to hers, and she was knocked down by Xiu Denan after a while of hand-to-hand combat). When he was able to recover, he didn't use his weapons to his advantage. Instead, he fought melee with others until he ran out of gas and couldn't even get out the healing gems.

After reading the plot of the first two chapters, I find it very interesting about the protagonist's views on life and death. First of all, the setting is that the protagonist has no feelings for death, and has experienced death once, and has a deeper understanding of death. He has obtained the talent "Death Eye", which is equivalent to mastering the power of death. The above are the settings. However, the protagonist's performance is like this: In the first chapter, in the Iron City, the first violation is that it doesn't matter whether others die or not, but the character you like cannot die. The second is that although I am not afraid of death, so I can wander around and jump repeatedly on the edge of death, but when I really encounter the danger of death, I start to fight hard, saying that I can live without death, and I still want to live longer. Let's not talk about the reason first. Take a look at Chapter 2, God Eater. There is another point that violates the rules. His relatives died in front of him, and the protagonist expressed that he had no idea. I flipped through it and it was about section 117. Based on the protagonist's performance, we can draw three conclusions: First, the protagonist's lack of emotion means a personality defect, so he has no sense of death. Second, the protagonist does not understand death. Third, the protagonist does not have a clear self-understanding. Just looking at the performance, it can explain the setting problem, but it cannot explain the protagonist's love for the plot characters. Personality deficiency is a disease. It is not just indifferent to death, but it also likes other people's tricks. Even if we take a step back, if this is the case, then such people are usually depressed or even autistic, and they usually die quickly. Therefore one is impossible. Second, although it conflicts with the setting, it can perfectly explain all the protagonist's performance so far. What is the understanding of death? Death is the end of life and the final destination of all matter. Understanding death means that we should cherish our current life instead of just wandering around and committing suicide. This is the reason why I feel it is inconsistent, because in my opinion, the protagonist behaves like a child, saying that he has no emotions or feelings, but still risking his life for the character he likes, while saying that he is not afraid of death, and even those positive people admire his efforts even if he really wants to die. After all, humans are emotional animals, and emotions are an important criterion that drives human actions. However, the setting directly removes the emotion of death, so why does the protagonist live so desperately? Isn't the reason why people work hard to live a life because they are bound to die, so they want to live a colorful life? So I think the main character doesn't understand death. Three words will not be discussed. It is obvious that the protagonist is not a robot and has a clear self-awareness. I have always felt that no matter what medium the work is in, whether it is a novel, a comic, a movie or a TV series, it must be both entertaining and literary. Why are some works not allowed to be read by children? It is precisely because children who do not have a correct understanding of the world are most easily affected by the values ​​​​in these works. The outlook on life and death is a person's core values. How one views life and death basically determines how a person acts, whether he works hard or is decadent, optimistic or pessimistic. It doesn't hurt that any setting issues can be fixed. But the issue of values ​​cannot be compromised. If you have a problem, you have to point it out. Small problems can still be corrected. When you can't change it anymore and regret it too much, who should you hate? Life is only a lifetime, just play and play, and this life will be gone. When you get old and death is approaching, no one will care whether your thoughts are regret or satisfaction. Cherishing yourself is the most real thing.

I read the comments this morning (included in the enhanced post), and then went to station B to take a look. This is really... I thought I was just posting some barrages as a joke... But it turned out to be like this before I knew it... Forget about brushing Fang Li and Sylvia in the book review area. Frequent brushing in the animation comment area of station B will only bring bad luck to the book. It feels like a dove occupying a magpie's nest. All book friends, please pay attention. 😥

Final thoughts and suggestions for the next book (40,000 words) First of all, I would like to thank the hard-working Luo Qing for working despite her illness, trying her best to update 10,000 words every day, and providing readers with spiritual food for more than a year. This is also the first time I have followed a book, the first time I have enjoyed waiting for updates every day, and the first fully paid genuine book I have read. Therefore, as usual here, I will write a post like this when the last book was completed, although I don't know who deleted the content of the post in the previous book. However, in order not to commit the same problem as the previous post pointed out by the author - too much subjectivity, I bought Robert McKee's "Story" and spent more than two months studying how to write seriously. I also tried to improve my writing skills. On this basis, I wrote this article. In order to facilitate understanding, I tried to use the content of this book and FGO as examples, rather than using all the old movies of the last century as examples in professional books. At the same time, for everyone's convenience, this document has been uploaded to two reader group files. Please add some refinements at the end.

Have you read Infinite Horror, Superstring Space, Death List, Endless Arms, Reincarnation Paradise, Horror Paradise, End of the World, Panic Boils, My Cell Prison, Ace Evolution, The Comrade in the Final Evolution. I am looking for some similar Infinite Flow novels. Please recommend some books. Imaginative novels can also be used

Many people fan Fang Li, and some people ask who Fang Li is (probably because the original author was confused by the barrage)... But I want to say, I think it's better not to go there. There are already people who are dissatisfied with the original work, and they will get bad reviews for the book... Don't let the book, like some animations, get bad reviews due to the actions of fans. 😥

Suddenly I thought, Wu Geng Luo Qing, Wu Geng Liuli, are there something between these two...

I really don't understand. A 16-year-old book should just be buried in history. If you don't like reading it, you can just abandon the book. However, a group of free interns judged an old book from six or seven years ago with today's eyes. It really opened my eyes.

My evaluation is - a bunch of time police watch a 16-year-old work with their current perception. Indeed, looking at it now, this book does have various shortcomings, but after all, it is an old work six years ago, and it is normal to have flaws. At that time, online novels, especially the home novels, did not have much popularity and traffic, and everything was in its early and immature stage. Therefore, at that time, this work was of high quality, stable updates, and smoothly completed, and won unanimous praise from everyone. Therefore, I hope everyone will think carefully before criticizing. Don't use your current vision and standards to criticize previous works - it's like you ate an apple last month and then had diarrhea this month and blamed last month's apple for being bad. It's pure nonsense!

I don't understand why the protagonist needs to fight in close combat if he has the Death Eye? Shouldn't it be worthy of chanting motivation? When you see the dead line and use telekinesis to swipe it, the enemy will die. So why do you use melee combat?

It's a masterpiece, it's a masterpiece, maybe the compatibility is too good. I can't agree with the negative comments about this book in the book review section. In my heart, this book is perfect. I have never seen such an addictive manga. I would like to call you the number one.

The journey of world fragments begins, and the reincarnation system of cause and effect comes into being. Staring into the eyes of death, fantasy returns to the afterlife indefinitely. The evil one appears in the forest of another world, and the saint lives between worlds. The unknown shape has a weak heart and twists the world with one blade. New world incarnation butler-like, Fairy Tail fantasist. The man who devours the gods kills the heavenly father, and the bewildering fate of the beautiful god is solved. On the urban science side of the college, the hope of a dark apocalypse appears. The bullet-proof magician, the ultimate death-killer of great men. The elves appear in the world and reverse the future, and the two battles of Yanya Academy are coming. Learn to fight against the urban six-pointed star, the assassination ghost immortal disciple. The sword comes out of the virtual world, and the god-killing king has ten powers. In another world, people in the red world kill their disciples, and their souls are shattered and their holy marks are condensed. The blood-sucking True Ancestor's beast dragon, gifted with the power of Demon King Slash. A different world starts from scratch, and the souls of lazy people are destroyed. Star-carved Roan Dragon Knight, the God-slayer of Demon High School. The crimson moon kills directly, and the moonlight Ji Li entrusts it. The skills and techniques are confusing, and the spirit turns into a sword to fight the devil. Returning to the two worlds, the singers meet again, and the contracted lovers live and die together. The fantasy land of Yakumo Shiro, the drunken love in the underground city. Bless the demon king's army in the world, and the ring binds the betrothed. The final beast, the True God, is destroyed, and the world is destroyed in a war of destruction. On the side of scientific urban magic, kill the saint Nanayagami. The fantasy continues endlessly, and the dimensional world is endless.

Could it be that there is nothing to recommend and the veterans are all on board?

I hope I can complete the Supreme Classroom

Can you believe that I have never seen any of the worlds that the author went to?

I read some of this book separately, and I found that the best part is the extra practical teaching. I feel that the world written by the author with super powers and supernatural powers is not as good as a more ordinary ordinary world, and the author has written few emotional lines. It feels like it is mentioned, and there is nothing that makes people feel very happy and joyful. And the author's problem is that the protagonist's experience is very similar to that of the original protagonist.

I have read this book twice before and thought it was quite good. This time I searched on Qidian. After reading the comments, I began to wonder if this book is really so bad. Please help me.

It's been so long since this book was finished, where did all these trolls come from?

I used to feel good about this book, but now I can't stand it anymore when I see so many people complaining about it. First of all, this is a 16-year-old book, so you must have some flaws when reading it now; secondly, this is a comprehensive comic, and those who don't like anime will definitely not be able to read a single chapter; and thirdly, there are very few novels on this subject, and this book is already pretty good among similar subjects. I don't know what you are spraying.

After reading the extra chapter (practical teaching), I feel great! I want to continue reading the content behind the extra chapter. Please update the extra chapter! Kneel down and beg. Kneel down and beg.

Looking at the other books, why do you feel that Straight to Death is the pinnacle of Luo Qing?

The more I read this novel, the more I wanted to compare it to Samsara Paradise, and so did the protagonist. Then I compared it, and found that the protagonist was pure garbage compared to Su Yi, the beheaded girl. Those who haven't seen Samsara are fine, but those who have seen Samsara really can't stand it.

Now I'm going to open a post and tell everyone who wants Luo Qing to write Chinese comics to stop! Otherwise, if you solve the copyright issue before talking about it, I will never say a word! Oh my god, someone pops up to write about Chinese comics every two days. I really have nothing to say 🤫