I Obviously Just Want to Be a Sidekick

Damn, this is why I don't like to finish reading novels now. Most novels now feel more uncomfortable after reading them. It's so annoying that the story is not finished, but the book is finished.

The plot is said to be royal if it sounds good, but it is old-fashioned to say it is ugly. After reading the book for so many years, I knew from the first chapter that it must have gotten deeper and deeper because of saving the girl. Then there are the happy-to-hear stories of various evil connections from past lives who came to serve as followers and finally took over the harem. It's not that this is bad, writing this way can attract new readers. But for old readers, it's a bit torturous and embarrassing to read. To be honest, people are getting more and more sophisticated in reading books nowadays. Some books that can be read through the traditional formula at a glance are not very interesting to read. Originally, I only read novels to relieve stress at work, but in the end, I can guess the plot.

As a reader who has read all the author's books, I just want to say that the author's writing is great. This is an author beyond my belief. My favorite is The Devil. Although I don't understand why everyone is talking about water, I would like to say that The Devil is the best book in my opinion. Especially the plots where the author abandons the outline and are a bit wild and unrestrained make it more comfortable to read. What I read is not about decryption or revenge, but the daily life you wrote. Some people have been talking about it, but what I enjoy the most is these parts. I don't understand what is interesting about the main plot. What attracted me to the author in the first place The words and actions of the characters in the comic are very consistent with the original work (although the first few books were a bit bulldozing, but I think it was done beautifully) I hope the author can see it. Having read all the books, I can see the author's progress and I am here to support the author. It feels like the mythical version of the Three Kingdoms. The more people talk about water, the more excited I am to watch it. If the water is like this, I hope it will stay underwater forever, because it is so exciting to watch! ! !

I think it's very good, really good

Come on, author, write well. After all, you have to live in reality, don't be affected by it. Remember your original intention, remember the passion of writing an article for the first time, and never forget the joy of using an article for the first time. Come on, author, ヾ(●´∇｀●)ﾉWow~

WThe author is great, come on, I will always support you!

There has been no update for 23 hours. The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this.

As a long-time reader of Luo Qing, a reader who prefers Phantom, and a reader who dislikes Sheen, when I see someone wanting to rewrite Phantom, I want to say it. There was no support in the previous book, and now there are two lines of tears. The comments section of the previous book is all negative and no one cares about it. After I changed it, it disappeared. This book just started to improve, and it started to be like this again. If the book is cut, will some people complain that it is not as good as the previous book and continue to argue? Is there any point in arguing about this now? In a sense, if Luo Qing doesn't read the comment section, it's really right. The comment section that Luo Qing has seen since entering the trap has been so smoky. The fact that Phantom was laid off in the past has made some people see that as long as there are more negative comments, someone can be laid off. There is no possibility of a book. Who likes to chat with each other every day in the comment area? Who doesn't want to see more people discussing the plot, and even looking for some bugs to tease Luo Qing? How can there be such a big difference between old and new readers? Sometimes the comment area is really scary, and I feel aggrieved after reading it.

After looking at the comment section, I support a split of 50 and 50 between original and comprehensive comics, so why not do originals and mixed comics like the first book "Girls' Great Summons"? 🤔 The comfort zone is a test for the author, and it is also a test for the readers. The span is so wide all at once, and there will be a huge gap for those readers who have been waiting for a long time. After all, there are not many authors who are good at writing comprehensive comics. But thinking about the current environment, Luo Qing understands that she needs to transform. Nowadays, there are not many good animations in a year, and 80% are otherworld show-offs. I miss the old days when animation and comprehensive comics were booming.

Come on, if the author doesn't want to review it, I'll review it for him. What is the problem with this book? In other words, what is the point of failure? 1. Second Dimension What is the essence of this book? 2. Three Dimensions What is the core of the worldview of this book? 3. [Weak humans and monsters survive in desperate situations] The current situation of this book 4. [The combat chapters are all explanations] (1 & 2) Why is the second dimension the worst point of failure? Just like someone in the book club said well Spells are fixed, and learning depends entirely on comprehension? Expansion, no changes? Do you really think this is the second dimension and there are 100 ways to die? Please, this is the story of human survival in the third dimension There are talented people and strange things, and there are infinite possibilities To put it bluntly, everyone likes to see this possibility and the writing skills of the author surrounding this possibility You This kind of painting is a turn-based system. You put a skill and I put another skill The battle must be active. As for the starting point of the battle that can be moved vividly, the master has many practical examples Give me an example Can't there be some strange person who can use two spells at once? Can't a warlock with natural divine power catch up with a hunter's physique? Can't some researcher develop a more convenient practice instead of replacing it with blood that changes its own nature? The author's setting gives these characters unlimited potential But the author only mentions two sentences about family background Higher warlocks are born to be awesome and high-level hunters are born to be awesome In the end, it is still the bloodline theory that cannot be escaped in the old two-dimensional or animation field Even if it is the bloodline theory, you can also add that the protagonist works hard and makes various efforts to break through the bloodline theory But here, I can't do it! The system draws cards! I think this is unstable! The system draws cards! This is what makes all book friends very irritated. There is no system, it is just a disguised lineage theory. All resources and items can be provided by the big family, and then the protagonist is lucky enough to pick up a few artifacts. Isn't it normal? To put it bluntly, it is to use the system to give the protagonist an excuse not to work hard or to say that he does not want to write about the hard work 3. [Weak humans, monsters are powerful PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds] I am afraid this is just like a fake The beginning renders how cruel the world is Humans only have a few cities In the end, humans have everything, and they don't live like they are near the end of the world What can you do with a big daddy behind you But most people at this level Under other circumstances, cities are separated by very scary no-man's land Ordinary people have long gone crazy, short of water and food, and such a dense place cannot accept several impacts every year In this way, people live and work in peace and contentment, and it is not like the end of the world. At this level, there will definitely be unified mechanized management 4. I asked for leave once, and the time in the underworld was updated, and my father was sick and he asked for a month, but when he comes back, he can ensure that the things he writes are of high quality, funny and serious at the same time The battle is basically to fight for the short release of skills. After releasing, you have to render a chapter before completely typing it out. Isn't it annoying? Over and over again, I still talk about mosquitoes (after all, mosquitoes also often ask for leave, and the similarity is very high). Mosquitoes can do it so that readers will not be bored even if it is a chapter. Even if it is a normal thing After the expansion, there will be more than 30 pages and 10,000 words. The update is still one chapter. Readers can enjoy it I feel so frustrated in this book It took several chapters to finish with various forced explanations But people explain so much because you don't understand if you don't explain br>And the author's explanation is just to make up for the word count, it's such a simple skill Li Guang Xinggui One sentence is invincible, it consumes a lot of money, and it is difficult to learn Can't it be interspersed with writing later? Isn't it necessary to repeat it over and over again? They are not elementary school students (Don't talk about family problems, it's not like someone is critically ill after giving birth. You can't use this thing to ask for leave. Why should readers be used to writing books? Can't you ask for a leave and do a good job and write a chapter with high quality? They are originally people who make money with starting coins on the shelves. The working group just takes advantage of it and says I want to take care of my wife)

Today I went back and read the reviews of Luo Qing's previous works. Surprisingly, the trend has changed, and the good works in my memory have become full of poison under the eyes of today's readers. In view of the fact that Luo Qing has basically made little progress in recent years, I think it is best for everyone to take a precaution. Even if she returns to the comprehensive comic in the next book, she may not be able to regain her glory. In my personal opinion, it starts to go downhill from Qizhao. It will obviously feel more watery and the plot logic will become more and more far-fetched. Therefore, if the next one is really a comprehensive comic, my lowest expectation is that it will be better than Qizhao. It will be considered a success.

Ruqing, please write a side story about practical teaching. I've been waiting so hard!

The smell is too strong. . . The storyline between Xu and An was too outrageous. I never imagined that a freshman would have a fan group that was all female just a few days after entering school. . . . And isn't the protagonist just a righteous person? Then why did the author forcefully arrange so many coincidences?

A hypocritical article under the guise of human development? Protagonist: Oops, the goddess came to my door and exposed me. I didn't want this to happen. This was an accident. I really didn't want to attract other people's attention; Oops, I didn't want to accept the date either, but I had to find out the truth of the matter. , This is force majeure; Oh, I really don't want to get into this trouble, but you see, I ran away, but I couldn't win (haha, a mage doesn't use spiritual skills to race against a warrior, you are really "serious" in resisting). After a year of being exposed by a stupid x, Gou didn't feel angry at all (forget about "I'll keep this grudge", the protagonist was very happy to have his blood sucked) When he went to the appointment, he sternly refused, and directly said that if he disturbed his growth, Gou would be ready to have a deadly feud with him, completely draw a clear line, and then go back to calm down the storm with the excuse that the stupid x heroine was interested in his blood. Isn't this good? Oh, but if you write it like this, there will be no chance for the male and female protagonists to interact, and the subsequent plot will not be able to develop... So do you have to rely on the male protagonist's pretentiousness to develop the plot? (I'm a little disgusted by the male protagonist's hypocrisy. If I'm the only one who thinks so, please pretend I didn't say it...)

Author, you are losing readers. Did you know that the performance of your books has been getting worse and worse in recent years? The book review sections of many platforms say that your writing is poor. Is it true that there is no truth at all? , Masters, writing is nothing more than not following the main line, but it is still interesting. Your writing is just copy and paste, always repeating some things mentioned before. There is no problem with the author's writing style, and the writing is very strong, but I feel that you are becoming more and more perfunctory in writing books. Yes, you have a lot of things to do about getting married and having children. I don't know if you are full-time , I understand that the more words you have, the more money you will make, but if you are a full-timer, the most important thing is to become a master and become platinum. Readers are the foundation. In this way, even if you go to other platforms, you will never make less. The contract is the last word. How many die-hard fans do you have who can support you to become a code word machine? Can you support your whole family? Or live a better life? Fei Mosquito only writes one page a day, and takes half a month off every time. There is still no shortage of readers. The first one is just ordinary, and the second one is a masterpiece. Qingquan's original content is almost exactly the same as the previous one. Is it good to read? It still looks good, but what about the results? Better than all his books. You can touch on original content right from the beginning, but you don't seem to dare to write it. Let's not mention the miracle. The setting is useless as soon as you write it down. Demon King, ha! I started copying and pasting. I want to be perfunctory as much as I want. I started from Shao Zhao, Omni, Straight to Death, Miracle, Chasing the Devil. I hope you can write better and better. The future of the author = money.

After sorting it out, this book's setting of strength: Grading is my own understanding. If you don't like it, please ignore it. The accumulation of 'quantity' refers to the accumulation of strength through cultivation. Personally, I feel that moving from a subordinate to a superior is like changing jobs in a game.

As for the next book, personally, I strongly recommend Luo Qing to write a "complex comic" type! If you have to write an "original" type, you can also write a semi-original and semi-comprehensive comic like "The Great Summoning of Girls". The comprehensive comic part is a way for the protagonist to improve his strength, and the original part can be the reason why the protagonist improves his strength, such as fighting against the invasion of another world, such as finding a way home (Earth). It should be noted here that the protagonist does not have to be a time traveler, just a person from the original world. Here, I might as well take the book "I Clearly Just Want to Be a Sidekick" as an example, and turn it into a semi-original work! ——"The Phantom Demon is a human enemy from another dimension. It came to the XXX continent in XXX year and started a protracted war with the XXX Alliance (Human Alliance). The XXX Alliance was defeated in the XXX battle in XXX year, and the territory it owned was only one-third of the original territory. Su Ming is an ordinary student at the Demon Hunting Academy in Longyao City, the human border defense line. He does not have such a grand dream of saving mankind because he knows that his talent is ordinary in the academy. However, Su Ming had an extraordinary adventure. In an accidental incident, Su Ming obtained a system from another world (it was a plug-in anyway) and had the ability to travel to other worlds (various anime worlds). However, he had a distrustful attitude toward other worlds and never used it until he witnessed his hometown being destroyed by a demon. That day, Su Ming understood one thing - in such an era, if you don't have the power, even if you just want to be an ordinary person and live an ordinary life, it is delusional. Su Ming finally figured it out. He needed enough power, even if it was the power of another world. As long as he could expel the phantom demons and avenge his relatives and friends, there was nothing wrong with it. Thus, Su Ming walked into the depths of his soul for the first time, faced the existence that could bring him power for the first time (referring to Su Ming's plug-in), and used the power from another world for the first time. However, Su Ming never imagined that it was his choice this time that would bring about a huge turning point in the fate of mankind. Of course, if Luo Qing writes a "complex comic" next but doesn't want to write an old genre, she can also try Contractor Battle! Similar ones include "Unlimited Anime", "Book of Girls' Contract", "Reincarnation Paradise", etc. In my impression, Luo Qing has never written this type of "comprehensive comic", so why not give it a try! (Don't tell me that it's infinite, it can basically be called the "stand-alone version of infinite". There are basically no other contractors showing up) If the next book is still purely original... I don't know what to say, I can only hope that the next book will be very exciting and have a super good result! However, as I said at the beginning, I am still more optimistic about Luo Qing continuing to write "complex comic" type books! ! ! By the way, can you write a second episode of Practical Education? In the past, it was just a plot without it, but now it is. Isn't the second season coming out in July? According to rumors, the third season of Practical Education will also be broadcast next year, so I am looking forward to seeing Nanaya Fangri's appearance again! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ——This is the point, this is the point, this is the point (say important things three times)

I feel that the main reason is that the author wants to write rashly before he understands how to write an original. The writing style is actually not enough to support the completion of an original novel without collapse. In fact, it can be seen in the comprehensive comics. The battles written in the later stage are too simple because the combat power is too high. If it were not for the comprehensive comics, everyone has seen some anime settings. In fact, it would be difficult to read. In the later stages, it is all watered down. In comparison, the direct viewing experience may be the best, The Summoner of Miracles is more touching.

Sit back and wait for the next comic😁

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I still don't feel too cold. After turning to the original version, I read every book but I couldn't stand it. It didn't appeal to me at all. It was really like chicken ribs. It was tasteless and it was not a pity to throw it away. It felt like a clear soup with little water. The devil, the phantom, especially the devil were so tough I gritted my teeth and read a hundred or two chapters, and finally gave up when I couldn't stand it anymore. Both The Summoner and Straight Death were very attractive to me and I read them several times. I just read The Summoner again and came to read the new book, but I still felt that it didn't appeal to me at all. It's a pity, I still want to read the comprehensive manga...

To be honest, Luo Qing continues to write variety comics, and I am willing to order them all even if they are just fried rice. But now, I really don't like it. I have ordered all of Luo Qing's books, but I have read the variety comics five or six times. I ordered all the comics but didn't read a chapter. I originally wanted to support Luo Qing. Qing's new book, but after thinking about it, every tip I give to this book now will make Luo Qing more determined to abandon the variety comics, so she gave up. To be honest, the author of the novel is not a star. Stars may say what he plays and what fans follow him to watch. Xiao Qing It is said that the first thing readers recognize more is the subject matter I like. I will only read books by authors I like within the subject matter I like. There are very few books written by this author, so I will bite the bullet and read them even if I don't like this kind of subject matter. At first, Luo Qing To be able to accumulate so many fans, everyone should know what themes they like. With the current transformation, a large number of old fans will inevitably be lost. Unless the new book is very exciting, it will be difficult to maintain the results. In the end, readers will have no books to read, and the authors will have no money to make. Both sides suffer.

At first I thought Pig's Knuckle would be very stubborn, because he himself said that he wants to be invincible. Anyway, he has a system and takes his time. It turns out that nm is only chapter 16, and he helped the heroine investigate a mysterious force just because he asked her twice. In my opinion, Pig's Knuckle's actual strength is only at the chuunin or special jounin level. He knows a big move but can't use it, and he doesn't do much in evasion. He has a special ability. He wants to investigate an organization where Chunins usually start. The top management is still like Danzo. The heroine asks to help him handle the materials extracted from the sales system. This is a direct failure of the character. One person talks about being stubborn, but others agree after asking twice. The exchange conditions are not equal. Are you going to sell your life and risk your life to let others help you sell things? The rest of the plot is nothing more than investigating the incident and getting involved in dealing with a mysterious organization at the request of the heroine, which has nothing to do with Gou.

I can be considered a long-time reader of Luo Qingde. The last few books have the same feeling as most readers. The water word count setting and explanation are too much Then I went back and re-read Zhidei (this is one of my favorite books). This was almost not the case, so I studied it curiously Comparing the two, I quickly discovered the difference. The reason Because straight to death and fantasy are all fan fiction, the biggest feature of fandom is that many settings are ready-made. Every time you travel through a world, you only need to use one or two chapters of the plot at the beginning to roughly introduce a specific world view. The specific settings rely on the original settings and some simple second settings or supplements, so it is interesting. But the latest two original works are different. There is no original world view. Many details require the author to spend pen and ink to describe and dig holes. The same paragraph needs to carry more information. In this regard, Luo Qing seems to have almost no experience. Every time he introduces the world view, writes settings, digs holes and fills holes, it takes a long paragraph. To solve the problem of large paragraphs of hydrology From a reader's point of view, if Luo Qing wants to continue to delve into original work, she must find a way to improve her notes, learn how to break the settings and narratives of the world into parts, split them into appropriate lengths, and dig holes separately. Only in this way can she solve the hydrology problem of large paragraphs of settings in the original world view.

First of all, these three original novels are too watery. At first glance, it seems that they have not been adapted from the comprehensive comics. This is a big problem. Original light novels cannot be too watery The character settings are too assembly-line. . . The daughter of the school beauty is paired with her suitor who is a good senior, and then Qingmei is paired with her bestie for free. . . For old bookworms and old people, the second dimension is too easy The most important question! ! ! It's the setting of the protagonist Starting from the old 4, there is a problem with the setting of the protagonist. . Problems started to explode at the beginning of the original work. The eldest brother, Silent Dragon Aotian, was very good and had no problems at the time. The second child, Son of the World, was also pretty good. The third child was the best among the three (I will tell you why he is the best later) and then he became the fourth child. . Very. . . Ordinary. . . It's old with no features and then the problem of 567 becomes more serious. . . What is the original purpose of Luo Qing? In order to become a master or the main protagonist of a master's work, you must have characteristics/popularity. . . Fang Li's Xue Zhan Urban at Station B is still somewhat popular, but No. 4 Is not mentioned at all. . . The protagonists of the works of great masters should have similar characteristics/titles/popularity such as Squirrel Air, Deep Blue Plus, Lao Zongzi, Zhanmei Su, and Blue and White Society. . . But except for Fang Li, who was very popular in Xue Zhan City, other old 456s didn't have any at all. Especially the old 4fgo is so popular. The old 4 has no popularity at all and has never been out of the circle because it has no characteristics and is a bit of an assembly line protagonist. Then I can't stand the old 5 at all. . . Lao 6 disappeared before I watched it (this is very Lao 6😭) and then Lao 7. . Are there any characteristics? No, he is just an ordinary person who travels to another world and has a golden-fingered assembly line protagonist The key point is that there is a big problem with the setting of the protagonist, Old 7 Xiao Ming, except that he does not have the potential/characteristics to become Su Songshuhang, the sister of the Blue and White Society. . . It's a name collision. . . People Sudak. The supreme anti-mage who knows no spells, the master tactician, the expert in sewer combat, and the black sun. . . The main point is that you two are still in the light novel section. . . Su Ming, who debuted earlier than you, is still the best Marvel light novel author on the Internet. . . Complex comics are also popular. . Su, the best beheaded girl in light novels, I think Luo Qing is not bad at all. You don't have to write anime for comprehensive comics. You can write one world of anime and one world of originals. There are no hard requirements, or you can just follow the example of Boss Silent. . .

Luo Qing had a fever last night, it's now 37.5 Degrees, but she already has the strength to write, and maybe won't be updated tonight; This book will be on the shelves next Friday, please support me!

Ever since I wrote something original, I have lost a bit of meaning.

Low-level spiritual arts: Sequence 1-Sequence 30 Known: One Style·Flying Arrow "An offensive spell, fast in construction, capable of releasing a small impact invisible to the naked eye." Seven Styles·Grey Binding "A binding spell, with the effect of blocking the movement of the target." Thirteenth Style·Roaring Bomb "An offensive spell, gathering powerful current to form a cannonball." Twenty-one Styles·Diluo Punishment "An offensive spell that extends countless spikes from the ground under the target to pierce the enemy." Twenty-five Styles·Hundred Lights"A range attack spell that can generate hundreds of lightning beams to bombard the target area." Twenty-eight Styles·Spiral Fire "An offensive spell that can generate a swirling scorching flame." Thirty Styles·Scorching Birds' Cry "Area attack spells Style, can release a barrage of scorching flames, roaring like a bird." Intermediate Spiritual Arts: Sequence 31-Sequence 60 Known: Thirty-three Styles: Stagnant Lock "A binding spell that can release invisible chains to bind the target." Thirty-six Styles: Poisonous Explosion "A range attack spell, which can create a poisonous swamp at the target location and cause it to fall. Its explosion produces splash damage. " Thirty-Seven Styles·Sickle Arc Slash "An offensive spell that releases a sickle-shaped arc to cut off the target." Forty-one Styles·Bubble Mine "An offensive spell that releases bubbles that will explode and damage the target like a mine when touched." Forty-five Styles·Lifting Current "Detection spell, which can detect organisms within a certain range. Life Body." Forty-Seven Postures·Blazing Lotus Flame Fifty Postures·Poulong Steamed Stew Fifty-Five Postures·Octagonal Crystal Barrier "Defensive spells, specific effects are unknown" Fifty-Eight Styles·Wind Demon Chasing Chi "An offensive spell that creates a beast of wind and sand that has no entity and cannot be destroyed by physical attacks. It can pursue the target until its spiritual power is exhausted." Fifty-nine Styles·Jiao Yan Regen "Offensive spells change the surrounding landforms, causing pillars of fire to rush out from the ground, attacking and damaging the target." Advanced Spiritual Arts: Sequence 61-Sequence 90 Known: Sixty-two Styles·Futian Luohua "Manipulate the changes in the power of rocks. You can move rocks when you go up, and you can move mountains when you go down. Whether it is summoning meteorites or moving mountains, it is not a problem." Eighty-one postures·Miaoye Brahma Scene "can change the celestial phenomena and then control the power of celestial phenomena. Whether it is storms, thunderstorms or even ice and snow, it can be freely summoned." Eighty-four postures·Remote Realm Yuanmen "Sealing spells, except for taboo spells after sequence 90, are the strongest among the sealing spells, and can seal the entrance to the Spiritual Demon Prison." Eighty-Eight Styles·Destiny Heaven and Earth Transformation "Can be used in an instant It reverses the boundary line between heaven and earth, turning countless kinetic energy, including gravity, into destructive force, causing devastating blows to everything within a certain range. It is extremely powerful." Supernumerary Spiritual Technique Known: Zero Style: Jumo "Can capture phantom demons. The essence of the technique is to turn the user's spiritual power into a sharp spear capable of sucking blood and pierce the phantom demon's heart to control the phantom demon."

I read the first few dozen chapters and then ordered all of them. I regretted it after reading Chapter 100. A good one doesn't refuse, doesn't take the initiative, and doesn't admit it. The key is to write like this, at least like Neptune. Xiao Ming was passive throughout the whole process and did not see a clear emotional line of the protagonist. He relied entirely on the heroine to promote it. We are already halfway through the process, and yet another sentence is added: "We are not familiar with each other." Secondly, I have read a few of Luo Qing's books, and they are indeed very interesting, but as soon as they are original, there is a problem with the setting of the protagonist. Like The Devil and this one, the protagonist has an inexplicable sense of justice. It takes a lot of space to write about why the protagonist does what he does, and also emphasizes who he does it for. You can write a protagonist with a sense of justice, or you can write a selfish protagonist. He can only help the heroine or his brothers, instead of helping the heroine and then saving those insignificant people, sacrificing himself for this, or exposing himself. Luo Qing's original protagonists have a common problem, that is, they don't have their own personalities, and they don't have their own plot lines. They are either rescuing people or on the way to rescuing them throughout the whole process.

Why haven't you published a new book yet... By the way, is the author planning to write an original novel or a comprehensive comic for his next book? I still hope the author writes a comprehensive comic

Luo Qing is taking her wife for a checkup today. Update will be delayed.