
The Devil Does Not Have to Be Defeated
魔王不必被打倒
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Xion's Weapons & Skills
[Holy Sword] ·Exclusive: Xion ·Level +100 ·All skill levels +10 (can exceed the upper limit) ·All types of damage reduced by 99% ·All negative status immunity ·Sharpness is at the highest level ·Durability is at the highest scale ·Causes great damage to evil objects ·Purifies and removes evil properties Except for the effect ·Limited to users, cannot be discarded, cannot be transferred, cannot be destroyed, cannot be transformed, cannot be interfered with —————————————————————————————————————— ·Unique skills ·When upgrading, all ability types are increased to the maximum value ·When upgrading, skill points are gained The amount taken is the maximum value ·All skill acquisition conditions are reduced to the minimum ·All skill upgrade conditions are reduced to the minimum ·Permanently valid and cannot be canceled in any way [Blessing of the Supreme God] ·Special skills ·Get the protection of the world ·Only for the Protoss, all conditions can be met ·Only for the Protoss, all interference can be avoided br>·Only for the Protoss, all functions can take effect ·Only for the Protoss, all effects can be blessed [Enemy Perception] ·Resident Skills ·Detect hostile objects [Physical Resistance] ·Resident Skills ·Weaken the damage of physical attacks [Evasion] ·Resident Skills ·Improve the ability to dodge [Magic Resistance] ·Resident Skills ·Weaken magic damage [Two-Handed Sword] ·Resident Skills ·Improve the skill and attack power of two-handed sword type weapons [War God] ·Resident Skills ·When entering the combat state, depending on the skill level, you will be able to It is enough to display a certain degree of combat skills like instinct ·Have a certain degree of control over the battle situation and the direction of the battle ·Improve combat intuition ·Improve the control of the body [Hidden] ·Resident skills ·When entering hiding, lurking, ambush and other states, depending on the level of the skill, the smell, footsteps, breathing and even The sense of presence will be eliminated to a certain extent. If the skill level is high enough, the skill can also be effective on the surrounding environment and other surrounding individuals [Assassination] ·Resident Skills ·Launching attacks while hiding, lurking, ambush, etc. Will increase the probability of killing with one hit ·While hiding, lurking, or ambushing, you will be able to detect the enemy's weaknesses with a high probability [Abnormal state resistance] ·Resident skills ·Increased resistance to abnormal states [Immortality] ·Resident skills ·Improve your own recovery ability and the recovery effect of recovery status ·Have certain resistance to instant death attacks and abilities ·When a situation where you cannot maintain your own vital signs occurs, you can force it by consuming magic power. Continuously maintain vital signs [Extreme Change] ·Active skills ·Directly effective on the life level ·When used, all abilities are amplified, and the effect is determined by the amount of magic power consumed and the level of the skill [Magic Guide] ·Resident Skills ·Significantly increase magic power [Magic Recovery Recover] ·Resident skills ·The consumed magic power will be restored automatically ·Significantly improve the effect of magic [Ride] ·Resident skills [Tamation] ·Active skills ·Use magic power in a specific way to achieve the effect and purpose of taming magic. The higher the level, the higher the level of the monsters that can be tamed. , And the more you can tame rare and powerful monsters [Magic Perception] ·Resident Skills [Magic Operation] ·Resident Skills [Magic Sword] ·Active Skills ·You can add magic attacks to your weapons. The higher the level, the stronger the power, and you can freely expand and contract and change shape [Penetration] ·Resident Skill ·Able to ignore a certain degree of defense [Armor Destruction] ·Resident Skill ·Can destroy the opponent's armor and disintegrate the opponent's defense [Acceleration] ·Resident Skill ·Able to increase one's movement speed with the level [Free Movement] ·Standing skills ·You can move regardless of external obstacles under any circumstances, so you can do things such as running on walls, moving on water, and climbing through various obstacles in dangerous places without letting external factors affect your speed [Close avoidance] ·Standing skills ·Able to detect the enemy's movements, not only able to dodge During the enemy's attack, you can also use all means to get close to the enemy as quickly as possible ·"Evasion" advanced extended skill [Instant Teleportation] ·Active skill ·Ignore the laws of physics when you are about to be attacked, and instantly move the user to another position [Oppression] ·Active skill ·Able to release Use magic power or your own momentum to mentally and even physically oppress all objects within a certain range [Chanting] ·Resident Skills ·Can increase the chanting speed and proficiency of spells [Meditation] ·Resident Skills ·Can use spirit and thought to change the nature and form of magic power, allowing it to intervene in the principles of the world [Magic·Fire] ·Standing Skills [Magic·Ice] ·Standing Skills [Magic·Thunder] ·Standing Skills [Magic·Wind] ·Standing Skills [Unarmed Combat] ·Standing Skills ·Improve skills and abilities when fighting with bare hands
Let me put it bluntly, Sheen is a typical person who has never been beaten by society, loves to show off, and has bad views. I really don't understand what Ruqing is thinking. According to my memories, there is nothing wrong with Sheen's tutoring. That means that Sheen's nature is a perverted stallion, killing people without batting an eye, and an uneducated childish brat.
No way, no way, no one really thinks that the protagonist is weak and can be bullied, right? I have seen several comments, all of which are based on the trashy male protagonist routine of light novels. They all say that the protagonist is weak, does not mean what he says, and should not be impulsive in order to hide his identity... I just want to ask a question, why do you think the protagonist is really afraid of making things worse? Is he really afraid of his identity being exposed? The protagonist has always been a person who hides an arrogant mentality, and hides his identity just to repay a favor. A group of adventurers offended the protagonist. The protagonist choked them and then blew them up with a backhand. An old demon offended the protagonist with his cheap talk. The protagonist was beaten into a pig head, his training collapsed, and he even stabbed his boss in the back. An NC noble offended the protagonist, and after a few chapters, the noble died. Now, even if you are a king, the protagonist still maintains the mentality of pulling out the holy sword and killing you if you dare to mess with him. Even before those nobles take action, the protagonist is already secretly thinking about killing those nobles... You tell me this is a Rikari routine? Is this a useless male protagonist? The male protagonist is weak and can be bullied? What a joke. Above.
The current routine of this book
The protagonist gets to know 12345 backstage The protagonist eats, and the secondary character "He can actually eat with 12345" The protagonist fights, and the narration is "1 is so awesome, 2 is so awesome, 3 is..." Then this routine will be repeated every two chapters. The poor performance of this book has nothing to do with the so-called relationship between originality and fandom. It is just ink. A thing that has been said eight hundred times needs to be said eight hundred times by eight hundred sidekicks. Don't say this is a light novel routine. You won't say this if you just read some light novels.
I have been following Luo Qing's books for six years. I read them all the way through high school. I feel that the current style has not changed much from the past. It is good-looking but the same, and it becomes easier to get confused towards the end. It is obvious that the protagonist and the enemy are not at the same level at all, but it takes two or three hits to get the result. On the other hand, the enemy can kill the opponent in a few words. This writing style is becoming more and more embarrassing for me...
The protagonist's IQ is worrisome and he looks like a fool.
Luo Qing, forever divine
The brave must defeat the so-called "Devil King"
I casually turned to Luo Qing's new book and naturally caught up with the latest The cool routines at the beginning, magic outfit, super talent, sending girls at the beginning, absolutely popular invincible routines. It is still very powerful under the rendering of my own writing skills for many years. Some of the language habits have not changed, but I can barely get by. However, there are still some problems throughout the article. The new book obviously commits one of the main pitfalls of online games, infinitely engaging the behind-the-scenes mastermind. This kind of matryoshka-doll mastermind method is very common in light novels. Basically, after fighting the monster for a long time, there will always be a deeper b digging a hole behind it, as if nothing the male protagonist does can stop the implementation of the final plan. And at the end of the game, both the mid-boss and the big boss are all for very childish reasons (for example, Moro in the latest chapter, who got into so many pits and ended up being a maid). In this case, it is very stupid, because his own behavioral abilities and motivations are completely illogical. Obviously anticlimactic. As a starting point, readers, whether the protagonist or the villain, must have relatively mature emotional intelligence and three views. If he wants to destroy the world, he should also fight for a position for himself. Once a lot of disgusting operations are performed for an inexplicable goal of resurrecting the demon king, such a situation will result. It should be noted that in the novel of Two-Spined Salamander, the readers will not be disturbed because of the similarity of readers. However, after changing the genre, the audience will be different. If the plot continues like this, there is a high probability that it will be blocked halfway. It's not that it's uncomfortable to feel good, but it means that when you feel good, there is always a thorn behind you (the so-called black hand behind the scenes), which makes people unhappy. Then the good point in front will eventually disappear with the wind, and you will complain about the rest later.
I hope you can click in and take a look, and please manage and not delete it.
I'm here again to post a post, I would like to say first that I haven't seen you for a long time and I miss you very much 😏. This post is about the plot until the Seventh Demon attacks the entire world. Emmm, how should I put it? In my opinion, I can only say that I will continue to watch it (what is high emotional intelligence). But some problems can really be seen in these chapters (I won't mention the clichés that everyone talks about every day, not to mention whether I am a liar, but I just want to discuss the plot and setting issues). A lot of nonsense, now let's get to the point: 1. Why is the half-demon so arrogant and still jumping around? Is it because it is not a problem in front of transcendence, so the gods and demons just treat it as nothing, and either don't know or ignore his little actions. . . 2. There are two most taboo aspects in writing novels, a deus ex machina and something else (I can't say I forgot, it's also to save face). In short, it is to avoid overexpansion of combat power and lead to faults. At this time, one should roar: Shouldn't the B cell of my demon's demon level be superior (it seems really not) The current situation is that because of Sheen's arrival, the world's demon level has suddenly sprung up like mushrooms after a rain. Although Ruqing has already explained the reason: Sheen is the center of the whirlpool of destiny, which will cause a series of chain reactions. 3. My reaction is: ... Ruqing actually chose a route that is more difficult to master the rhythm, because it will be accompanied by more and more changes and contradictions. After all, the era of fighting to break the sky has passed (laughs). If there were really high-level Dou Zong in the early stage, Dou Sage would be everywhere in the later stage. I believe that many people will be tired of aesthetics and call it: old-fashioned. 4. The thing I want to say the most is that the core of this novel is still not reflected, which makes many readers lose their patience. Including me, they are eager to see a truly wonderful story instead of (not what it is, I don't know, but you must know 😏). Some people may have questions. Isn't it the center of the story that Sheen overcomes all obstacles, solves the mystery of his life experience, and achieves the throne of his family? Then I can only say: Sorry, my own YY is more exciting than any novel. Furthermore, let me summarize what Sheen has done up to now: he passed the test and achieved the throne of the family. The most important thing is Sheen's life experience. However, due to various reasons (dddd), Ruqing has never been able to really get into this theme. Everyone loves to be the Riddler, so what can we do? This is precisely what makes many readers think it is watery. Is it word count? Is it describing water? Is it daily water? Or is it the battle scenes? In fact, it's not the case (at least that's what I think). The anxiety accumulated over a long period of time has made everyone lose the patience to continue reading (including me). It's just that I keep watching, hoping for a refreshing future. 5. The most direct problem I want to talk about, which is not even a problem if you think about it carefully, is that readers are dissatisfied with the creation of the original devil as a villain. Why, the answer is actually very simple. Under the premise that the protagonist's faction has so much detachment, everything the original demons do is like a clown, which makes people (actually readers) have to question the necessity of their existence. The most fatal thing is that readers have already thought that they have seen the ending from God's perspective (in fact, I think so too), so they are more and more interested in the excitement and twists of the plot, as well as the foreshadowing and recycling. And this is exactly what Ruqing is having difficulty dealing with right now (showing hands). 6. In fact, I have also mentioned it in my previous post, which is about the creation of the protagonist and the protagonist group. I guess Ruqing was disgusted by the book review section (I actually tried to persuade her, but it had no effect). Turning the topic back to look at who is in the protagonist group now, I recalled it and came to the conclusion that Sheen, the harem group, and the others were there. On the other hand, the villain is more simply a villain. The problem can already be seen. It is really difficult to reflect the charisma of others other than Sheen. Some people will refute me about succubus, but apart from her, her appearance (figure?), I don't know what is different from other demons. Although Ruqing can describe the characters of some supporting characters, most of them are just point-to-point (very focused on martial ethics), and it is difficult to have an eye-catching character that exudes a brilliance independent of Sheen. Having said so much, I think it is almost enough. I am writing a book review for this book because I really want to see this book well written (although most of the time I will not click into the book review area again) I also sincerely hope that readers will treat this book rationally. Its shortcomings are obvious. Everyone has the right to speak, but let it go when it is time to let it go. Why bother with yourself. Maybe you can pray that I will be spared a few days of torture 😏.
Stallion Wenlong Aotian … All female characters, no brainers, pretense and slap in the face. It's the traditional Long Aotian, that's right. The previous novels were quite good... How come this generation of books is so unreliable Is it because the previous times were fan extensions and borrowed the framework of the original novel, but this time it was original and not as good as the previous novels? That's really not good. A certain customer can only be considered second-rate.
It's okay at the beginning, but the more you read it, the more you read it. I suggest you translate it into Japanese and submit it in Japan.
Read Chapter 22. In the author's own words. It's just cliche. It can't be any more cliché. The first twenty-two chapters are almost all introductions, as if you were writing an instruction manual. A kind of otherworldly anime that is loved by chuunibyou patients and watched by children under the age of ten. The two-dimensional traces are super heavy. . . For people like us who have no idea about the second dimension. Not only does it not add points. There are also some points deducted. And the most important thing. A great lv5 author. What is the reason that makes the first twenty chapters as bland as pure water? So much explanation goes into these settings. But there is nothing too novel and new at all. Never mind. There are really too many things to complain about. I hope the story behind it will be exciting.
To be honest, this book has a lot of poisonous points, but you can't get too deep into the two-dimensional light novel. The biggest difference may be that it has a strong sense of anime déjà vu. It should be good to adapt it into an anime. In fact, it is a harem anime about Long Aotian's cheating, but the emotional line feels like it progresses too fast, especially since the princess went to bed within a month. . . It still feels too frivolous.
The more words in a novel, the better.
It's great! It feels as good as watching the entire anime.
It's so beautiful! It took me half a month to read it in one go. It felt like I was watching an anime, it was very graphic. And the twists and turns in the plot of the book "The Devil", as well as the layers of foreshadowing and the pleasure of uncovering the truth layer by layer, are really just one word, cool! Thanks to the author, I have tasted another book with a good plot~
After watching the whole process, there were some things I didn't like in the middle, especially the part about breaking off the engagement that was really a bit toxic. After all, it was my significant other. Is this such a joke? (눈_눈) There are a lot of words like "smiling but not smiling" and "playful" throughout the whole novel. Although there were signs of this in the previous book, I think it is still necessary to grasp the degree of such adjectives. There are also many explanations that are unnecessary or even omitted. It is obvious that the explanation was just explained in the previous chapter, but the description is repeated in the next chapter. This kind of expression is very disgusting to readers. (「・ω・)「Hey Well, I think the rest is okay, and it has a happy ending, but the ending is a bit abrupt. I think some daily extras can be added, just like the original practical teaching. (ง˙O˙)ว Overall, it is a tea book suitable for leisure time. It is not very good, but it is not too embarrassing_(:з∠)_
In fact, I don't know if you have noticed that there are too many cars in the Royal Capital section, and it feels like the focus is a lot off, and the free and easy hero flavor is a lot off. It completely feels like the hero has become an LSP, which is very confusing. . I still hope that the author can drive more appropriately. It is easy to be biased if he writes too much 😅
To be honest, it's getting more and more boring to watch, and it's a bit watered down, especially the emotional lines, but it's okay. But I still think I should take care of it first, because I saw two hundred and forty disappear in one breath, which felt quite uncomfortable.
After losing more than 200 chapters, it still revolves around women. It just revolves around women. There is no fighting plot at all.
Looking at this situation, it will be finished in two months at most! This book is Luo Qing's first book after his transformation. Personally, I think it's quite good (many people say it's not good, but this problem is at the starting point and basically all authors are doing it, so I don't think you need to hold on to this point) However, this book is not particularly exciting, and I don't have the urge to read it a second or third time! (Mainly because I still prefer the variety comics written by Luo Qing, Girls' Great Summoning, Omni Fantasy, Direct Death, and Miracle Summoner. I have basically read them more than twice) Although I don't know whether Luo Qing's next book will return to the variety comics or continue to be original, but no matter which one it is, I will continue to support Luo Qing, and I hope that Luo Qing's books will get better and better!
After watching the pirated copy, I came back to pay for it. The plot is actually good. The main plot is innovative and not broken, but there are a few things that are not very good. 1. There are too many male and female protagonists and too few plots. Obviously the female protagonist is so well portrayed, more daily plots would be better 2. The male protagonist's character is a bit scumbag, and he has the feeling of a Japanese waste male protagonist, which is not very comfortable to watch 3. When the male protagonist deals with some problems, he should be more resourceful and less violent, although the plot always emphasizes the background of the male protagonist. , But in fact, the male protagonist has always been reckless, which makes the male protagonist's status very senseless In general, I actually quite like this novel. Although the author feels that the writing is not good, but now the Western Fantasy Harem is declining, it is actually very good that you can describe the male and female protagonists clearly. If you plan to write a Western Fantasy Harem in the future, then I will continue to support it.
I have some ideas about Lai Xia again (waiting for Luo Qing to slap me in the face😛)
It has been updated to Chapter 307. After following Xion into the Summoning Temple and then being chased out by Nien, Lesha has not appeared again for a while. Dear Lai Xia, where is the promised heroine? ! Although Nien can't appear in the world (she has few appearances), at least she successfully won her first kiss and her status is stable. If you don't come out, how bad will you become? ! 🤫 Ahem, I'm going too far again. It has been revealed before that Nien is the "Brave Summoner", so what will be Laisha's identity? Nien said that Laisha was created and abandoned just like her. Since Nien was created by the goddess of creation, Laisha should be created by the Demon King. I blindly guess that the Demon King encountered several generations of brave men before he was eliminated. Although the previous brave men restrained the Demon King, they were not powerful enough to destroy the Demon King in one fell swoop. As the summoned heroes became stronger and stronger, the Demon King decided to have a backup plan, so he created the existence of "Laisha". The Demon King shouldn't be able to summon the ritual, so how will the new Demon King come? Cultivate one! From this, "Demon King Training Style" Laisha was born. The cultivation of the new Demon King definitely cannot be done by a method similar to "enlightenment". He still has to rely on his own efforts (really inspiring 🤭), so necessary protection is indispensable. Is it good to have space-based abilities that are convenient and can protect people? (Don't talk about time system, soul system, etc. It's too buggy, and the Demon King may not be able to do it). Therefore, Laisha has not shown too much combat power at present, but her spatial ability is quite strong (visually, the sealed summoning temple is in another world, and it can be followed in, you can say whether it is strong or not 😎). To be more extreme, it is possible that when the new demon king grows to a certain level, Laixia will sacrifice everything in himself and graft his space ability to him (Luo Qing, you must not do this, otherwise 🔪) Because the three tribes of humans, gods and demons have concluded peace, the summoning temple in the divine world has been sealed, and the six demon sisters will definitely not cultivate a new demon king, so "create at will and discard at will" is a real hammer. In this way, there was a legitimate reason for Laixia to be "fooled" into joining the old demon clan of the assassination sect (they were very optimistic about the pretender and wanted to train him to become a demon king). Finally, I have some thoughts. As the heroines, Nien and Lesha will definitely follow Sheen (reason: protagonist's halo? Personality? Integrity? It's all possible!). Xien➕Nien (Brave Summoning Style)➕Laisha (Demon King Training Style) =? Congratulations to Sheen for successfully switching to the super-hidden profession "Demon King Brave". Is the Demon King destined to be defeated by the Hero? Sorry, I'm both a hero and a devil, so I'm going to hit myself? Doesn't exist! Still don't understand? "The Demon King Does Not Have to Be Defeated" Oh dear! ! ! 😁😁😁 Finally, I won't say more, just wait for the update, and wait for the slaps in the face😛 (Let me say it first, I am not M! Not M! Not M!)
Ruqingdada, when can the protagonist have a baby, the best daughter, a blood letter asking for a baby
I really hope that the author can revise the writing style (writing style?) Of the next book. My literary skills are not very good, so I can only speak based on my feelings. I don't know if it's because the protagonist adds a rhetorical question to many of his psychological activities or thoughts, so it's awkward to read, or is it not smooth? It feels a bit like a regular game. The plot is acceptable, but the painting breaks down from time to time. Of course there may be some other factors affecting it? The plot of the author's book made me want to read on, but the text made it more uncomfortable for me to read. I personally think that the better light novel is "The Magician of Clow Card" written by "The Heart Will Not Change" (it used to be called "Urban Night Fighting Magical Boy", the title of the book that persuaded the thief G2 to quit, and it is almost the same now. I am embarrassed to share this novel with my acquaintance Amway 😓). My personal opinion is that the author can learn some description techniques and so on? I don't understand these things either. After all, writing from elementary school to high school has been a torment for me, but from my personal reading experience, I feel that the words of "Yuan Xin" are much more comfortable to read than those of "Luo Qing". I personally feel that this is the most discouraging thing about Luo Qing's book. The content is relatively watery and I don't feel that way. Maybe it's because the author's chapter is too short. For online novels, it should be considered normal for the author to do this. On the other hand, those scammers who write cool articles are not only mediocre, but sometimes the amount of updates in a week can't even fill a B, which makes me burst into tears on the spot.
I haven't seen such appetizing online articles for a long time.
I feel that the biggest dissuasion for me in reading this book is not that the plot is too watery (of course the plot is a bit watery, but not that watery), but that a group of people say the plot is watery in a rhythm. Everyone felt that the plot was watery. Then everyone took a look and thought, oh, I'm not the only one who feels stupid, and I'm trying to persuade a bunch of people to retreat. I am not a die-hard fan either. I know Luo Qing from Miracle Summoner. Later, I fell into trouble due to academic problems (🌿), but at least I was a leader. So it's not a free prostitution party. Let me make a disclaimer first. In fact, the matter of water injection itself is a matter of benevolence and wisdom. Two questions. The first is that Luo Qing has some problems of her own (of course, readers also have problems to some extent). That is, I like to cover everything and explain the causes and consequences of what happened. This is not a big problem in terms of comprehensive comics. After all, the combat power of each world does not match, and some explanations are needed to "reasonably equal" some damage. But when it comes to original work, you don't need to be so rigorous. After all, everything is under the control of the author, and any patches will be added later. And to put it bluntly, the most unpleasant thing for readers is Tu Yile. If the whole plot is followed, they won't pay too much attention to too many details. But here's the problem. Luo Qing spent a lot of pen and ink describing the details in the early chapters, resulting in readers only reading the details, so they can only criticize the details. Luo Qing wanted to patch up these details again, making the already detailed plot full of nesting dolls. This is why readers clamored that it was too watery. The second problem is the problem of character creation. When the character created by the author is a character similar to a wise man, readers will find it reasonable to conduct psychological analysis of the character, describe the activities, or even spend several chapters structuring one thing. But this Sheen book certainly isn't. What is the positioning of this book? Long Aotian, Shuangwen, Loli (fog). These are all bad plots from the starting point. What readers expect is one explosive point after another. Rather than a long setting. Luo Qing felt that her reversal of the explosive point was very satisfying, and she spent a lot of time describing the protagonist group, but before she wrote it, she was just the same old Riddler. In addition, some descriptions are really not needed. For example, the section describing the princess' coming out. Although everyone is an LSP, it is understandable that they like pretty girls. But I can't help but describe too much. For example, for COC players, even if it is written - the breeze blows three thousand black silk, and the black hair on the temples is teased and flirted with the cheeks, causing a smile and a beautiful frown on the lips, walking lightly on the stone steps, accompanied by the flying cherry blossoms all over the sky, and sometimes the falling cherry blossom brocades are floating around, like a fairy descending to earth, elegant and gentle. ——It would be better to post an app90 like this. Perhaps this is also a reason why readers think of water. Also, I really think some readers are really wrong. Yes, Luo Qing is a master of L5 novel writing, but when it comes to originality, she is just trying to get across the river by scratching her head, and knows nothing about it except for some writing skills. Rhythm, plot needs, characterization. These are all made from scratch. Why don't you let people who write programming fix computers? According to the reader's logic, they all work on computers, so why don't they even know how to repair computers? Again, if you don't like it, just leave. There is no need to make people all over the world say that water is not water. This is really discouraging. What's more, the originality is really generated by Luo Qing's love. If this love is gone, there will be a trap. Looking back on writing comprehensive comics, I am still a good man. Really, there is no need, there is no need to spray water without water. Quality is in people's hearts - I think those who clicked in are all LSP readers who have read it for many years. There is no need to embarrass each other It took one and a half hours to type by hand. I deleted a lot and apologized for my first long review. I can't scold you. If you scold me, I will suffer. I am just a little turtle.
Dedicated to your overwhelming words and encouragement
What to say, you can't listen to everything or not listen. This degree is difficult to grasp, and it is even more worrying about gains and losses during the exploration period of original transformation. But as long as Ruqing sticks to the original intention of writing a book, she will read the books that you think about from the heart. Although I am in a very miserable situation now, the business failed and the house was sold and I can't give a reward, but I still book it all to express my feelings. After all, it is quite stressful to have a three-year-old daughter at home and save money to redeem the house.
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Old book friends are here to report!
I have only read about eighty chapters so far, but the experience is still very good. It gives me the feeling that the author is seriously writing a story, rather than making a quick snack out of patchwork bits. But what I didn't expect was that this storytelling model was completely unpopular at the starting point. I can't understand a lot of people who say it's unfair. The character's psychology seems to be unreliable, and so is the worldview. Do you really want every chapter to be an intense fight scene and plot? Or what do you think is unfair? Secondly, this chapter contains many confusing remarks, which are full of bitterness and hatred towards the world. Maybe it's because real life is too depressing, so the fantasy of being superior to others is placed in novels? I can understand it, because the battery squeezed by the capitalists should have a deep understanding of class and want to vent the dark desires in their hearts. However, I still hope that such book friends can be as kind as possible. Real life is already very hard, so don't embody that kind of emotion in novels. Is the world of truth, goodness and beauty so unpalatable? Does it have to be all intrigues and intrigues? In this case, it doesn't matter whether it's fantasy or urban. Aren't light novels supposed to be more relaxed and cheerful? To be fair, you can grab a lot of novels that focus on refreshing and coherent excitement. There are many people who go against the routine and have excellent ideas. Why should we teach authors to write books here? I believe there are still people who like to read this kind of novels that tell the story of a world that slowly unfolds. Hope the author can stick with it. After all, there are not many authors who don't take advantage of the popularity, write original works instead of stitching monsters, and have certain writing skills. The student party doesn't have much money, so it can only show its support by ordering a full reservation.
How many readers did you dissuade from the part about breaking off the engagement?