Devouring the Starry Sky: Start with an Equipment Slot

After fighting monsters, who wants to watch the protagonist play house on earth? Also, author, you still don't understand that fists are power, and the protagonist has big fists, so it's easy to build a power or a martial arts gym. It's not that the protagonist goes to cooperate with the country, but the country begs the protagonist to cooperate. You must know that in the original work, Hong is the person with the most force and the most powerful person. If it weren't for Hong, to be honest, humans would have been destroyed by monsters, let alone laser cannons. This thing has great limitations. On cloudy days or digging holes from the ground, it can destroy humans from both inside and outside. In the final analysis, Hong killed the king-level monsters like chopping melons and vegetables, forcing the monsters to negotiate, and preventing the king-level monsters from attacking the base city, so that the remaining population could be defended. So if the secret technique of gold or something is ineffective on the protagonist, then it is of no use in training his subordinates. I personally don't object to the protagonist going to the battlefield, but just don't write the protagonist's status is too low compared to the country. That means don't write the protagonist as a loser.

There are two things about Swallowing the Starry Sky that I actually don't understand. That is, there is a legal slave trade. They are also human beings. As long as it is an uncertified planet, once you find it, it will be your slave force. There are also things like the world of immortality, but it is not so serious. It's okay if it is a low-level one. The highest-level slave force is actually a cosmic level. Another point is the issue of seizing the body. Even the clansmen of the leader of the Universe Kingdom can seize the body. Even if there are enough clansmen, aren't you challenging the majesty of the strong?

It looks good so far. It can remind you to be prepared for the crisis caused by the evolution of animals. Anyway, everyone already knows that RR will improve physical fitness. To prepare for animals, it is necessary to prevent it in advance. The original book said that the number of deaths is not only because of RR, but also because of monsters.

One thing I have always emphasized is that cultural workers must be educated and not blindly show off.

It's really boring to think that it can be the sixth force of another clan. There is actually a bug, so just take away the earth and build your own ethnic group of earthlings. Otherwise, we will still be exploited, which will be very miserable.

It's great to watch. In fact, I like to watch Nirvana because it represents the reshaping of order and is based on reality. There is actually quite a lot to write about in the career of a golfer.

I feel like the protagonist is pretending to be a genius. First, you are not the only genius in this world. Leave it there to patch the original work. Add settings.

A self-created heroine is worse than no heroine at all. Suppose the heroine in your novel is worse than the ruthless emperor. Why is there no such person in the original work? The correct answer is aunt, at least the readers will have an impression.

One thing I don't understand is why is the protagonist so greedy? Why should we take care of both the controller and warrior schools at the same time? Doesn't being distracted by two things lower your upper limit? When fighting monsters, is it possible to control the throwing knife while fighting in close combat? Even Luo Feng is mainly the controller in the early stage. The protagonist has to choose a direction, right? Are you going to be a controller completely, or just a warrior?

Since you have decided to be a martial artist and have a spiritual master as an assistant, why do you write so much content about spiritual masters? Moreover, the increase in telekinesis power of a spiritual master has been increased so high. If you ask me, I would just keep practicing spiritual telepathy. Anyway, the paths lead to the same goal, and we all lead to the realization of the law. It doesn't matter whether we are a warrior or a spiritual master. There is one thing to say, the spiritual master does have an advantage, but there is no need to focus on it all the time. After all, there is no essential difference between the two after the planet level. Unless the author plans to write hundreds of thousands of words on the apprentice level, I personally suggest that focusing on the warrior path, the spiritual master is guaranteed to be able to fly and escape from the beast tide. Never write a plot that involves melee combat while using telekinesis to kill enemies, especially don't write a plot that takes time to practice telekinesis. After all, unlike Luo Feng, the protagonist has a spirit ball that can quickly increase the intensity of his mental power. If the protagonist cultivates his own mental power while also cultivating his genetic power, the author would be scolded.

Don't accept Luo Feng as a disciple, or you'll be thrown into the street.

The idea is good, it's rare to write something new, but the writing style is just average.

Don't engage in genius battles. If you are engaged in genius battles so long before Luo Feng, then this book is meaningless. Also, don't enter the Thunder World, because it will take many years for the Thunder World to automatically open. Stellar-level Yagen does not have the ability to break through the world master's boundary. It is recommended to create your own opportunities. Don't follow the old path. You can write slowly. Don't equip the Chaos Monument. No matter how you write it, it will be stupid. It is recommended to equip the Beast God Statue, or the original treasure materials such as the Heart of Space and the Heart of Time. You can also equip the Sky Soul Crystal to obtain the Sky Soul Crystal, which resists erasure by the laws of the universe and is indestructible. Such characteristics give people more usefulness than the nine recorded in it. From the original work, at least the Venerable level cannot destroy the Sky Soul Crystal. Equipping the Sky Soul Crystal is equivalent to invincible physical defense in the early stage.

What you wrote should be the force multiplier. The amplitude in the original book was created by Hong in the training camp. In the later stage, there is a physical or divine body amplitude. In the early stage of the mental side, it seems to be a force multiplier. In the later stage, there is a soul amplitude. The force multiplier and the amplitude are multiplied together. I remember it is like this.

One thing to say, author, don't you think there is too much foreshadowing? Is it possible that every day of the nine months of Mahanirvana must be filled in? Some things need to be accelerated. Another point to mention is that the author, you plan to exterminate the monsters on land and then focus on the ocean. This is unrealistic. There are too many terrestrial creatures, and they mutate quickly. The outbreak of a beast tide in September does not mean that the monsters will have combat power in September. It is likely that the monsters have already formed combat power three months in advance. Secondly, the monsters on the mainland are not completely wiped out. Many animals have special skills in digging holes, and the main force of the beast tide is also monsters transformed from small animals. Finally, you underestimate the country. The country cannot wait until September to discover the monster problem. It is very likely that the original work was only a month or two late before discovering the problem. Therefore, the land beast tide will definitely break out when it is time to break out, and the intensity will only drop by one level at most.

Why are there so many equipment slots for Swallowing the Starry Sky recently? I've seen three copies.

The most ridiculous thing about Swallowing Starry Sky is soul slavery. Shouldn't there be such a thing like the mechanical race in the universe?

Another very good Devouring fanfic

There is one thing that puzzles me about the world of Swallowing Starry Sky, and that is that after many strong men were killed or self-destructed, they did not worry at all about being enslaved by their souls after being resurrected by the hostile universe master! ? Many strong men and geniuses blew themselves up and died after being unable to defeat their opponents, and then they would be resurrected collectively by the Lord of the Universe on their side after a long period of time. After those geniuses, King Limit, King Invincible, and Venerable level strong men were killed, you can immediately call the Lord of the Universe over to resurrect and enslave them on the spot! Why do all strong people feel that they are safe and will not be enslaved by their souls when they die?

The author will change Chapter 12. At least five of the ten people abandoned it there. I read it twice and each time they ended up here.

So far, the book is pretty good and the progress is normal. However, the updates are too slow and not refreshing.

It's amazing that I actually discovered the version before swallowing. This is the first time I've seen it.

Can the Dragon King of the East China Sea tighten the abdomen? After all, he is the only psychic monster on Earth.

Your equipment column is a bit interesting! Please don't use the initial universe setting of your last book in your new book! What chaos and imperfection in the laws of the initial universe caused the cultivation of the initial universe to lead to errors in understanding the laws! Really poisonous to death! Come on!

I personally have no objection to controlling the progress, but just don't write it as the second Hong. I remember a Devouring fanfic a long time ago. The author also mainly described the Great Nirvana. The protagonist is also a spiritual master, but the strength is not as good as Hong. I feel super speechless After all, the main Devouring chapter is the beginning of the universe. Since you have already planned to describe the Great Nirvana, the protagonist should at least be better than Hong. This is the basis. After all, there will be a Universe chapter later. If not as good as Hong, how can you make readers believe that the protagonist can rise all the way? Another thing you have to pay attention to is that the more critical the moment, the more heroes will be praised. For example, when the Golden Horned Behemoth appears, it is a king-level battle broadcast live all over the world. This is both a kind of publicity and an act to appease people. When the Great Nirvana begins, the battle of the protagonist, not to mention live broadcast, must at least be known and worshiped by the whole people, so that they will not despair. This aspect can be described with some pen and ink. If this aspect is written well, the score of this book will not be bad.

Okay, very good. Come on 🙂🙂🙂🙂

You've already written a book, so you might as well try a different style. Don't write about the sixth force of the human race! ! ! ! ! Stand on your own! ! !

Is it necessary for a fanfic to start from the beginning of the earth to the end of the water? You already know what the plot will be at the beginning. You can write it from the level of domain lord, world lord, emperor, family leader, etc.

Let me start with what I don't understand the most about the previous book. You can become a disciple of Darkness, but Darkness will not tell you his name! He is not a Chaos Dragon Walker. He has a clear mission and can accept apprentices at will. As long as the apprentice is enslaved, he will be exposed. Most likely, the dark and hidden master of the universe will not tell his apprentice's true name when he accepts an apprentice. He will only tell the apprentice if he meets the standard that even the strongest person will not enslave him!                     ，：1，，100！ 2. The initial laws of the universe recognize and break through immortality! It is possible to break through immortality in the small universe and the holy land. It depends on the fact that the owner of the small universe is not willing to give you the origin and ask you to break through. The original universe is because it was suppressed and the owner is not in the origin and the source is not enough, so those who bought the quota are asked to go out and break through! 3. There is no limit to the secret method of will in the original universe! It is difficult to have a domain at the 4th planet level, but it is a miracle if there is one (this is the unreasonable part of your last book). The original text sets the domain as a prerequisite for breaking through the domain master level at the universe level, because slaves who understand the domain at the universe level are unstable and can backlash their masters, so slaves with domains can only be safely traded at the highest universe level 8, so you must always pay attention to prevent backlash! The lowest star-level comprehension domain is considered a domain master reserve, and the threshold of comprehending the laws is considered a realm master reserve!                     ，！ The above only represents my personal suggestions!

I haven't read much lately, and I've even read 30,000 words of fan fiction. There are many knowledgeable people in the comments teaching authors how to write books. Isn't it okay to just leave if you don't like the genre? You have to interfere with the author's writing of the book according to your own preferences. What to do? Some people want to see non-human races, some want to see a non-Earth start, and some want to see a timeline that is not in the same timeline as the original. Wait, if everyone can't agree, just find your own dish. Hu Lilie looks good in what kind of taste?