Looking Forward to Another World

Really don't always think about originality, it's better to return to your original intention. Think about how much information you have researched in order to write a variety comic? Are these things wasted if not used? Animation fans are the king, write well and don't let down your original intention. I didn't support this book much before. I definitely support it.

It is difficult for many fan authors to excel in original writing. Authors are also in this strange circle, but don't be too discouraged. After all, there are many fan authors who cannot write well.

Of the author's six books, I've read the early ones for Girls, the late stages of Fantasy and Summoner, and the middle stages of Demon King. It is said that the author's peak is to die directly. I think so myself. I hope the author will achieve greater success with this book.

I think what people say about original garbage is that it's just too slow. You can write many chapters about one thing, and the rhythm is a bit disgusting.

Really, I didn't want to say it at first. I'm not happy to say it. I'm not scolding it. It's just a complaint from a book fan who has been following Luo Qing for so long This book, let alone the aggrieved people mentioned before, is normal to be a grandson before you have no strength, but since you become a sword master, there are really a lot of plots that reduce your wits. The description of how strong the strength is, the stronger the sense of disobedience! What is the latest chapter about? I said before that I was scared to death. This chapter makes me think that tying up a maid is nothing. It also talks about how awesome that follower is. Even Zhenguan Sword Master can't see through it. He is hiding something. Please, have you ever seen a 17-year-old Sword Master? Can this kind of comparison be made? Can it be inferred using common sense? Why are you so awesome and still following this idiot who only knows how to play with her family's territory? ! Really, I have never read a book and felt more and more frustrated as I read it. It's okay if you want to advance the plot, but consider the identity of the villain. Marquis, nephew of the sword master, who can risk everything for a woman, I don't think so. I know how to describe it. The protagonist is now like a turtle. He can stomp on all cats and dogs. He is the most powerful warrior in the mainland and the youngest swordsman in history... It's like telling a joke Really, I feel like I can't read it. I'm afraid of internal injuries if I do it...

Do you guys have any recommendations for better two-dimensional comic novels? Luo Qing's writing has been a bit stretchy lately, I plan to take care of it for a while and then come back.

Well, after reading the wrong volume, I thought that the main world was also a fan world. After reading a few pictures, I realized that it was original. At present, the main world template is too old, with swords and magic, eldest ladies, and family fights. You will know the situation without reading the later ones. I can only say that I will wait and see for now, but there are so many settings in the main world. If I skip the volume, I am really afraid that the protagonist will change too much and I will not be able to read it. Alas...

Ye Qinghui, this author is good at everything, but it's easy to be overwhelmed by building your own worldview. It's better to write a comprehensive comic. Welcome back to the fandom area.

I can't stand it any longer. Now I'm back to the land where I made a mistake and directly sealed my power to level 5. I find an excuse to pretend to be a pig and play house with a group of people and then play hard. The protagonist is passive in everything he does, and never takes the initiative to make calculations. He goes all the way recklessly, and it is clear that his strength is already in place, but he does not take the initiative and attacks passively. He is plotted in various ways. However, some of the calculations are really stupid and disgusting. His combat power is also deliberately suppressed. He is stuck at level 7 for many chapters. The supporting characters in the main world are also disgusting. Among them, the princess is the most useless. As a follower, her personality is too soft. She keeps saying she feels guilty, burdened, and sorry, but in the end she still does the same shameless things. Her words and deeds are inconsistent. Afterwards, the conversation with the protagonist is always a review and summary. I feel guilty, and then my head is touched, and I seriously suspect that my head will be touched bald. There is no sign of regret or change in my actual behavior, even if I have the strength. I don't know why I create such a disgusting image, but the main plot of the main world is the princess. The most speechless thing is that it's over 2 million words long. The most intimate thing the protagonist does on his own initiative is just holding hands. He is ambiguous as a girl. They both sleep in the same bed and do nothing. If this were placed in some games, it would be awkward to see that the main character is dead and has not run away.

In this way, Luo Qing, stop thinking about your original palace-fighting plot in the main world that stretches your hips to the extreme. It's embarrassing and poisonous. You've already bought a few originals, haven't you realized it yet? ! ! ! The plot of the original world is really too ridiculous. The plot of Aisi versus the owner of the 37th floor can be said to be a logical disorder. The plot of the original world is really bad in terms of writing style, plot rhythm, plot layout, formal logic, plot design and so on. It is so bad that you can't watch it without thinking. Luo Qing, you have written several original books, don't you think it's worth it? ! Political conspiracies, power struggles, etc. Require weighing the pros and cons, careful consideration, ambush, pulling lines, layout, etc. Are not what you are good at at all, and you cannot write at all. If you were really good at originality, you would not come back and continue writing comics, and the reputation of those few books would not have plummeted. When writing fan comics, you should write fan comics and stop talking about your originality. At this stage, your writing power, thinking, and knowledge do not support you to write such originality at all. If you really want to practice, open a separate book and write an original short story of about 300,000 words. Write what you want to write there, practice there, and write it there when you have ideas and inspiration. Anyway, it is to practice writing. I don't care about perfect attendance, just write some when you have inspiration and ideas. There is no need to practice with the novel you are currently working on. If you continue to experiment with this one, you will have to read this one. It will disgust you and us readers. That book is written and we readers can also read it and give you some suggestions and opinions. Make money and practice writing without delay. We readers will not be criticized. You also wrote what you wanted to write. My suggestion for the current plot of the main world of your book is to directly remove the protagonist from the vortex of conspiracy and disputes, and directly hide behind the scenes anonymously. The protagonist finds a reason to go out to practice on his own, increase his strength, or fake death and escape outside the vortex, etc. When you have the strength, use hard power to crush and take revenge; Practice strength in other worlds, develop strength, practice and travel in the main world while looking for opportunities for revenge and the mastermind behind the scenes, directly crush them with strength, fight when you find an opportunity, and then get up and go to other worlds to practice. During the journey in the main world, you will get to know some people and find your inner desires. Some small plots or side plots will occur during them to expand your small team. You can also design some adventure plots in the main world, explore certain dangerous places, discover the truth of the main world and the source of the Rubik's Cube, meet some partners to find your own direction, and slowly explore the plot in the form of a road movie. You can also use the Rubik's Cube to bring friends who are willing to follow you to this world to form a team, family, and adventure together. Just like your "Girl's Call", you can also dig deeper into the main world. You can write something original in this book if you want the truth, but intrigue plots are really not for you. Don't write it. Just write an original adventure story to explore the customs of the main world and the reasons for your time travel. Do it in the form of a road movie, just like "Blessings to a Beautiful World". It is definitely better than adding all kinds of intrigues and political struggles. Most of the fans of your novels are fans of animation and games. Not many people who like to read these like your childish intrigues and political power struggles. Really, you should really think about the plot and connection issues of the main world. Really stop thinking about your extremely poisonous original palace fight plot, I beg you.