Time Travel at the Same Time, Let's Become a God in Douluo First

Here I have an idea. This is what I thought after reading the introduction. I don't know what the author's content is. It is the sentence that although Douluo World is weak, it can live forever. In fact, Douluo World has been patched. The gods of Douluo cannot live forever, or in other words, they cannot live forever and have a lifespan limit. Even the lifespan of Douluo God King is limited 🙂

The author wants the protagonist to be the king of cheating, but the cheating is mindless, and after the protagonist is immortal, he is always on the verge of committing suicide and frantically testing.

The writing is very messy and the protagonist is pushed around

The success template of 99 original works is out there. I don't understand why so many gauze authors like to be smart and insist on switching worlds in just one or two chapters. If you have such great ideas, why don't you create something original, and are you still trying to make someone else's meal?

There are pieces here and there. You wrote twenty or thirty chapters before you changed the world. The writing was messy. Mysterious Resurrection and Covering the Sky, you didn't write these two worlds very well.

Why do you feel that this protagonist is so arrogant? Why give elixir to the weird protagonist? Why don't you just throw it on the ground and feed it to the dogs? I don't know much about Weird Resurrection. Weird Resurrection doesn't seem to have a cultivation system, so is there any point in letting him eat genius treasures that increase the speed of cultivation? It seems that the weird protagonist can be resurrected.

Each stage must have a main world. You can't have a hammer here and there.

It's too messy. Each world only has one or two chapters, and then it keeps jumping around. Since the main world is determined to be Douluo, let's focus on Douluo World. Although the setting of Douluo World is the same as shit, it is better than the current world-hopping. At least there is a stable main line.

The most speechless thing is this. From the beginning, I thought about writing to all the worlds, to write a million words, and set a huge goal, but in the end, I couldn't draw a tiger instead of a dog.

The writing is cloudy and messy, and those who can read it are really blessed. It is indeed a daily introduction to poison

Damn it, I just looked at the table of contents and basically jumped around the world in two chapters. Why do I have the desire to read this thing?

There are too many worlds that the author has chosen, and the world is a world of high-end combat power from the beginning. Don't mention writing it in the later stages, it will start to collapse in the middle stage!

Chaos, they all pointed out the problem

It's not you Douluo, why is it the Douluo 2 period? What pressure does it put on the Douluo world? You just need to put pressure on other worlds, and Douluo can just become a god and live forever.

It's too confusing. Let's fix the article and then talk about it.

Is mathematics taught by Douyin netizens? 7000kg is not as heavy as 1t

The author's writing is too messy. You should write at least a dozen copies for one copy. One copy can be used for three or four copies. I'm really convinced.

Someone has already pointed out the problem written by the author in the comment area. The world switches too frequently. It is recommended to learn from the same type of books.

Douluo also joins Shrek, goodbye

If you can't even understand a Douluo, why should you write about Zuotian?

Two chapters to change the world, ppt?

Luo Feng: Why can't my flying knife kill people? It turns out it's because the knife is too fast!

Can you write it down, piece by piece here and there?

The writing is very messy, and at least I know how to put a world together. This already feels worse than AI.

The idea is good, but the author is not good enough

If you want to write Tongchuanliu, you should concentrate on writing about one world first, and then move to other worlds after writing a relatively large paragraph.

In fact, the biggest problem is the elixir that covers the sky. In the world that covers the sky, there is no way for heaven and earth to lack the substance of immortality. The elixir is a form of the Immortal King. Ordinary people can't digest it for a lifetime and will only be affected and change their physique. Only when you reach the quasi-emperor level can you come into contact with the rules and use the essence of the elixir. What do we call the rules? Relive a lifetime, like in the world of Journey to the West. Once the elixir comes out, to put it bluntly, what we are facing is a large-scale attack by the resurrected Immortal King. Absorbing the vitality of heaven and earth and the laws of heaven and earth have been discovered by all supernatural beings. Mysterious resurgence. To put it bluntly, ghosts are a kind of rule. In the face of this elixir, do you eat the elixir, or do you need to use the rules of swallowing the whole ghost to develop again? In the same way, the rules of the sky-shading ghost can be regarded as a kind of heaven and earth treasures, used to build weapons, or cooperate with the sea of suffering to transform the endless death energy into another form. Douluo World, to put it nicely, is the damage skill in the game

It's so messy. I don't understand. Each world should be unlocked slowly. Is this done by pasting and copying or by fighting for it?

What are you writing about? Who can understand your world in one chapter? The character who has just been brought into one world will jump directly to the perspective of another world. There was no sense of immersion at all. I saw that now I have even forgotten the name of the protagonist.

The Douluo fandom went crazy on QQ next door. A large group of fanfics were so popular that I didn't expect that Qidian would also fall.