I Have a Sword That Can Slay Ten Thousand Demons

The beginning was alright, but why did he inexplicably return to the Prince's mansion later? Why go home and wait to be killed? If he didn't want to join a sect, couldn't he have become a rogue cultivator, cultivated, and then returned to seek revenge?

After reading dozens of chapters, I still don't understand what you're trying to write. It feels a bit disjointed, like you're trying to write about cultivation or war. If you're leaving so many plot holes in the beginning, many readers won't be able to keep going. It's really frustrating to read.

Why not just renounce the world and cultivate? Why insist on imitating the Yang Shen method, making yourself an enemy of the world? I see absolutely no need to return to Ning Mansion...

The beginning was okay, but the writing got worse and worse after returning to the Prince Ning's Mansion.

The spirit attains oneness and becomes clear; it bathes and becomes full; the spirit that bathes never dies, and this is called the Mysterious Female… It is continuous and ever-present, and its use is inexhaustible. The Divine Bath is the root of Heaven and Earth, from which Heaven and Earth take root in all things (myriad phenomena). The human body also has (Heaven, Earth, God, Bath, King), and attaining one is true enlightenment.

The writing is superb, but the plot is utterly absurd; the characters in the book do things that no normal human being could do.

No, even old authors write like this.

I hope you won't abandon this project after my second first subscription.

Good heavens, the whole family is going to kill the protagonist! That's definitely the protagonist's halo.

Keep it up! Write well. The early chapters of Pure Yang Sword Master are quite good.