[Showbiz] All Looks, No Skills: A Girl Group Dream with Room and Board Included

In fact, it can be seen from the previous book that the author himself is not good at depicting emotional lines. The last book was stuck for a long time, and the crux of the problem was that the rivalry between the heroine and the dragon was not well written: the dragon was deeply in love, but the heroine was constrained by a system like a curse and always deliberately avoided this feeling. At the beginning of this book, the author mentioned that it would increase the proportion of emotional drama. At that time, I felt that this would be a huge challenge for him. Unlike the previous book where the heroine escaped the whole time, the heroine in this book made her move very early and recognized her secret love for Long very early. The emotional foreshadowing in the early stages of the story is actually very complete. Yunzhi and Long are attracted to each other and secretly have feelings for each other. The undercurrent of the atmosphere between the two is very good and interesting. It also makes people look forward to the plot of their love after the two break through the window paper. However, the setting of this two-way heartbeat falls within the routine of a conventional sweet novel, making it more difficult to advance the subsequent plot, and the traces of the author Kavin are also particularly obvious. Long's feelings for Yunzhi are very clear. It is really difficult to write how to extend this relationship in the future: whether to add a contradictory character to him that seems to be indifferent, or to design other conflicts to pull the relationship between the two. I have no clue at the moment. I can only hope that the author can write at a steady pace. In addition, by the way, most of the works written about gd humanities nowadays are highly homogeneous, with the same plot, basically copying all the turmoil he has experienced in real life: being slandered and plagiarized by peers, being maliciously spread rumors about drugs, having his private account exposed, and being riddled with various unsubstantiated negative rumors. The plots are repetitive and lack new ideas. After reading too much, it will inevitably lead to aesthetic fatigue.

When will it be updated next time... I don't ask for a stable update anymore. I just want to tell you how long it will take to update the next chapter every time there is no update. It's so painful to chase [heartbroken][heartbroken]

I am so confused about what I am doing. I just write with my eyes closed. Even if I fail to write, I will most likely lose my collection. It's better than yours. The other book I followed in June had more than 300,000 words, which surpassed it. I really like this setting. It's a pity not to update it. It's okay to focus on career.

What should I do with you?

What's wrong with this book? Can't I continue writing it? [Eat melon]

When will the stable update be available? Let me know if there's no more updates. I've been waiting here every day [Cracked]

The previous book was well written, but it was too late. I didn't expect to see the emotional drama so soon in this one. I'm so happy [kiss]

Dad, [covers face and laughs while crying] Come back quickly, the two months you were away, the scumbag and I were from the beginning to the end, the time is too long, please come back quickly, I need your healing

The ambiguous period is really written well [crying]

Isn't it 200,000 yuan to save the manuscript?