Laying Low in Yokohama to Rewrite the Plot

I am honored to come across this novel. I read the entire text in one go. This idea flashed in my mind from time to time, so for the first time in my life, I had the urge to write a long review. At the same time, this was also the urge to let more people read this book and like it. The design that first made me think "this novel is unusual" is the protagonist's clever design to join Mafia by claiming to be the "Sixth Cadre" of the ancestors, putting himself and Mori on the same front. During this period, the rivalry between Jiang He and Sen was wonderful, and every decision was bold and precise. Whether it's dealing with the butterfly superpower, consolidating Mori's position, or trapping Ango into the five degenerates of heaven and humans, and getting acquainted with Jiaoye Zaiju, the plot advances very quickly and the pace is quite fast, but it doesn't make people feel abrupt, as if everything goes as it should, with a just right sense of beauty. Not only is the rhythm of the writing comfortable, but the psychological activities of the characters inserted in the story are also completely non-OC. It seems that if the original characters are put in this situation, they will naturally consider the things that the characters in the article consider and make the choices that the characters in the article make. As a chef in Tiaoye, the early "King of Ignorance" limited skin Tiaoye Picking Chrysanthemum described by the author is also quite amazing to me. Compared with the original "hound" Tiaoye Caiju, he is more confused and more evil. As the saying goes: "He has no wishes and doesn't know what his wishes are... He has nothing that he really wants." And just five chapters later, the prison sentence directed and acted by Jiang He pushed Tiaoye to the side of saving people, and also gave him the wish to "find the sixth cadre and cut him to pieces". The friendship between Jianghe and Jiaoye depicted by Liao Liao in a few strokes is above lies, but it is a relationship that can truly put aside the stance without fading. It is no less than the iron friendship between Jiaoye and Jiaoye in the original work. When Jiang He asked Verlaine, "Why did you get such friendship?", He must have mixed his true envy with the lies that stimulated Verlaine. In the friendship with Jono, Jiang He's inner conflict is wonderful and eye-catching. After the identity of the sixth cadre was exposed, Jiang He said to Tiao Ye: "You attacked me, but I was relieved." Tiao Ye's hug obviously made him feel at a loss. Jiang He felt guilty for deceiving Tiao Ye and directing and acting in the imprisonment incident. And for gaining Tiao Ye's true friendship under the condition of complete honesty, even Jiang He, who had planned everything, would have expectations. When Jiang He faked his death, he traded Yu Yuqian for half a minute of blindness in order for him to see him with his own eyes, to remember him forever, and to say an unforgettable farewell. When I first read this, I was completely shocked. On the one hand, I thought: "The power of trading can actually do so much." On the other hand, I thought: "Does it really make sense for Jiang He to do this? Since he is about to leave, why should he insist on using colors to leave an unforgettable impression in Tiao Zhi?" At the same time, I couldn't help but think, if it were me, what choice would I make if I put myself in his shoes? After thinking about it, I came to the conclusion that it is precisely this kind of unexpected behavior driven by sensibility that makes Jiang He break away from the flat and rigid image of the protagonist in most novels, which is only for readers to substitute, and become vivid and three-dimensional, becoming a real and independent "human" image. Not only the friendship between Jiang He and Jiao Ye, but also the friendship between Gotao, the friendship between Jiang He, Dazai, Jiao Ye, Feijia, and Odasaku, and the relationship between Jiang He and everyone in the group, they all made me sigh. The author is really good at figuring out the psychology of the characters, and very good at controlling the bonds that have been born and have not yet been born between the characters. In this novel, due to the limited perspective, readers can only infer the characters' motives and purposes through their words and actions, and these contents are often revealed only at the last moment. Even if readers "see" the world in the book through Jiang He's perspective, Jiang He's own purpose, plan, and layout will not be clearly revealed to the reader at once. Reading this book, rather than simply reading, you are personally involved in the game between Jiang He, Jiao Ye, Dazai and Fei Jia. Following the author's writing, you can guess the future direction of events, explore the inner logic and motivation of the characters' actions, and explore their positions, emotions and purposes layer by layer. There are just over a hundred chapters, but after reading it, I felt a sense of loss, as if I, along with Jiang He, had escaped from the world in the "book". In addition, regarding everyone's he ending, as well as the protagonist Jiang He's not-so-he ending, about Fei Jia's ultimate goal, and about the author's conception and writing style, I originally had a lot to say and praise, but then I thought that this is enough to express my love for the article to the author. I have been into the literary genre not long ago, but I have read most of the well-known literary novels. Although many of them attract me, if I had to choose my favorite one now, it would be this article. That's why I chose to write this long review to express my love for the author and at the same time hope that more people can read this novel (although it may not have any effect) When I look back after writing such a long paragraph, I can notice that many of the expressions in my text are not very clear, and the connection between paragraphs is not smooth. I have only read the full text for the first time in one sitting, and my understanding of the article is still relatively shallow. Please bear with me and correct me if I have a biased understanding. All in all, after writing so many words, the first thing I wanted to express was that I was very happy that the author created this book, and I was very honored to read it. I hope the author can continue to create, and I hope I can see more excellent works by the same author in the future. By the way, the author's other novel is also very good! It's just that I haven't seen the latest chapter yet (

So Jiang He has been wearing the rabbit mask so that Qingyuan can show his face after he returns... Right?

Xiao Jiang has returned home, and Jiao Ye will never forget his close friends, including Dazai! After reading it, I felt a sense of loss, as if I had woken up from a big dream.

It's over. Chasing from Xiao Shuo to Jiang He was really a wise choice for me [Spreading Flowers]

There is no other fanfic that I think has the highest ceiling in Chinese culture!

Second brush, I'm so happy, this is indeed the No. 1 Among the Fumino fanfics I've read, even after three years.

It's good to watch, but it's a bit brain-burning, and the main character's thinking is too out-of-the-box (but this kind of out-of-the-box thinking is more suitable for the gloomy leader Zai). It's okay to stick with it. The writing is very good. The writing of Jiao Ye is very touching, and the CB created is also very charming. I hope there will be more extras.

So cool! It's just that I'm too good at it and I didn't understand QAQ.

After reading it, I feel very emotional but I can't express it. This story really amazed me. The wandering wanderer found his way home and redeemed everyone. I couldn't bear to see it end. I hope to see a sequel in the future.

What a great ending. I'll review the plot of the book when I have time, it's really exciting.