Can a Pampered Couch Potato Really Be Pope?

I don't know if the author's mentality has changed when he wrote this book. At present, the three stages of "sweet love with different values ​​​​" - "coming out of the closet and bloody family ethics" - "reunion after breaking the mirror" are very separated. The early stage was relatively good, but the pregnancy took a turn for the worse in the second trimester. The focus of the article shifted from "the protagonist solves the incident" to "the parent-child feud between the protagonists", and there were a large number of characters and their descriptions that had nothing to do with the protagonist's growth. The last two chapters suddenly switch back to "resolving the incident", trying to show the growth of the protagonist, but it is very rushed. If the author develops an outline before writing the article, is the outline too simple? The time and rhythm were not set in advance, which directly reflected the serious problems in the progress and development of the plot. The focus kept jumping between "protagonist growth" and "family conflicts". If the "Family Conflicts" part is also intended to reflect the growth of the protagonist, the current content does not reflect this at all. I don't know why the ending chapter was released a month later without following up. Judging from the previous chapters, the author has a lot of reading and accumulation. I hope he will write better and better in the future.

I think the writing was quite good when the two of us had a conflict before. But it turned out that it was a hard fight that could never come back together. It was so weird that they reconciled without saying anything about it. [Cracked] [Cracked] [Cracked] I couldn't write anymore, so I ended it hastily. [Methodized] [Clown]

The ending felt rushed, and the relationship between the two of them progressed strangely. The ending is a bit broken

Help, I looked pretty good at first, but it ended badly. . . . .

I feel like the author can't keep it together and wants to end this book quickly. The more I read, the more it looks like three marriages. Before they got together, they were pursuing sweet words. After giving birth to a child, the love is really getting weaker and weaker. It feels like the only thing that matters when two people are together is the child. The family is blocking it but they don't love Xuebao that much. Only the mother can do such a big thing as giving birth to a child. Mom, Dad also accused Olaf of being messy. The pressure of parenting and work are all piled on Olaf, an eighteen-year-old child. Lao Hei is obsessed with love and can't see where the responsibility lies. The more I read, the more I feel that everyone is OOC. I really regret ordering it all. This author is only suitable for writing short stories. He obviously can't write longer ones.

When I saw this book, I didn't like the rhythm. There was a lot of dancing in the middle, but why were there still quarrels? It's so awkward to fall in love. Isn't the copywriter with a baby? The child was born in just two lines, and Gongya didn't even know. As I said before, don't bother anymore. I didn't understand my chapter either. Didn't Shou ask Gong to go there? Gong didn't say anything, just telling the truth. I'm not saying that two people can't quarrel, but Shou seemed to really dislike it when they quarreled. Wouldn't it be nice for everyone to be more straightforward when talking about something? It's because they love each other, and then the fantasy scene in the West doesn't show off the devil, rectifies the church, and revives the light, but just struggles with family ethics issues.

It looks good in the front, but the pull on the back is a bit too long.

I was really convinced. I was so numb after watching it that I collapsed to death.

I felt awkward when I saw it [laughing and crying] and it felt like my wife was also fighting with the left and right sides of her brain. On the one hand, I felt that it was really too much for Hazel to get pregnant when Xue Fei was 18 years old, and on the other hand, I had to let them have sex [laughing and crying]. In the middle, I also felt that Hazel was a bit abducting a minor. Xue Fei felt that she was still young at 18 years old. This is where I can't handle my psychology and morality.

I was emotionally involved for a long time and didn't understand what I was doing. I was in such a hurry later.