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I'm a New Writer. I've Just Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Could Someone Give It a Review?

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I'd like to read something similar to *The Legend of the Dragon King: Misty Clouds Defying Fate*. It's the author's first time writing a story that's over 80,000 words, and now they want to work hard toward 400,000, aiming for that kind of length. They're bored at home after just finishing their first semester of college, and their writing style...

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101 The Biggest Villain in the Martial Arts World Rainbow in CoffeeMartial Arts122k WordsOngoing 5Reads—Score—Shelves
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How about this one, a martial arts villain with multiple female protagonists?
102 If Everyone Is Obese, They Will Become Stronger. I Am the Only One Who Works Hard to Build Muscles. Fisherman's WordsEastern Fantasy115k WordsOngoing 13Reads—Score—Shelves
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The second book has just 80,000 words, everyone will like it!
103 Overcome the Calamity [Lingtide Tribulation] Hei XiaoyaoAncient Romance375k WordsCompleted 2Reads—Score—Shelves
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This is the first book for a newcomer. [Pauses face] It must be poorly written. I haven't read it yet.
104 Desolate Ming No Whale ComingEastern Fantasy352k WordsCompleted 64Reads8.7Score—Shelves
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The first one, three hundred thousand
105 After College: I Started by Setting up a Barbecue Stall Cicada Hiding in the DarkUrban247k WordsOngoing 25Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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If you have nothing to do, push it. If you have something to do, push it.
106 After Entering the Infinite Stream, I Gained the Ability to Read Minds Lu ChaochoranMystery237k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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Please give me some advice, I will take it.
107 Three Moves Iron Ball DriverUrban60k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I really don't know how to write it. Please give me some tips for newbies. I have a lot of ideas in my head, but the response is so bad that I don't know what to do. Can you give me some advice?
108 This Detective Is Extraordinary, He Can Become Stronger If He Falls in Love Iron DeepMystery1.8M WordsOngoing 4.8kReads9.0Score491Shelves
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This is the first book by a new author. Let's see if you like it. The main male protagonist's reasoning is urban suspense.
109 Frequency of Confession Swallowed up by Growth Rings Mori XiaoxinUrban130k WordsOngoing 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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The first one is mine, please review it. I basically like to read the following books (listed in no particular order), I think they are all very good, especially the book about tanks, it's too sharp [smile]
110 My Way Starts from the Mortal World Lazy King 007Eastern Fantasy195k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Look, one of the two people is slower than the other
111 Arrogant Girl, Please Respect Yourself, I'm Just Your Boss Uh-Huh, No, Huh-HuhUrban180k WordsOngoing 5Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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If you don't dislike the book I wrote, just read it [Sending my heart]
112 When I Inherited the Antique Store at the Beginning, I Didn't Say I Was Going to Hell. Poplar Tree in Front of the DoorEastern Fantasy107k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
113 I'm Waiting for You in the Wind, Flowers, Snow and Moon Super Tank Kobe BryantUrban1.9M WordsCompleted 124.4kReads9.3Score14.1kShelves
114 After the Strategy Failed, I Fainted in the Arms of the Yandere Tide of WineModern Romance232k WordsOngoing 1.5kReads5.8Score187Shelves
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I wrote this book myself, and the pace is quite fast. The male protagonist is very innocent in the early stage, but becomes violent and imprisoned in the later stage. The male and female protagonists are relatively talkative, and there is no barrier. The female protagonist is very daring to take action. Even if she knows that they will be separated for a short time, she dares to love and hate in the early stage. It is a sweet story, and there is nothing sad about it.
115 Endless Rebirth Twenty-Eight Eve PassMystery206k WordsCompleted 4Reads—Score—Shelves
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It has just reached 80,000 words, and there are still 16 chapters yet to be published.
116 Brown Mountain Treacherous Area XiaoyiMystery116k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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It was finished, and I realized after writing 80,000 words that the title did not match the content. The application has been completed, but I cannot change the title of the book [crying]. [You think]: Folklore horror, mountain village ghost stories, adventure decryption [Actually]: Imaginary fantasy, dark depression, female awakening, PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds
117 Shopping for Talismans Online, Heavenly Master Taught Me How to Catch Ghosts Online A Thought of Peace of MindUrban422k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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New book for newcomers. Nice looking bag
118 Locke Kingdom: Forbidden Eye Qiu Shizi165k WordsOngoing 282Reads—Score—Shelves
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I am also in the 80,000-word verification period, please give me some advice.
119 I Lived a Long Life in the Three Kingdoms A Thought of Peace of MindHistorical308k WordsCompleted 2Reads—Score—Shelves
120 Yuanhe One Page DraftMystery420k WordsCompleted 4Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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The first one is my book, it is endlessly suspenseful. The next few books are recommended.
121 My Neighborhood Has Traveled Through the Apocalypse Long Song and FireSci-Fi & Apocalypse31k WordsCompleted —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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The first one is a novel written by me. A ten-year-old bookworm has begun to try to develop into a novel. If you have seen it, can you give me some suggestions? Thank you very much!
122 After Falling into the Water, She Held Two Murders in Her Hands to Kill Through the Darkness Li NianqixuanMystery147k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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The first one was written by me, please don't scold me.
123 Is It Reasonable for a Slime to Defeat a Giant Dragon? Sanfeng 11Urban3.4M WordsCompleted 186.8kReads9.7Score22kShelves
124 Be Happy, Gong Bajiu! User60447125Modern Romance216k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
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I'm jealous of all the Tomato writers, all of them write worse than me! But red flowers need green leaves. Look at the green leaves.
125 To You and Me Who Fight Side by Side The Possessed Old ManUrban418k WordsOngoing 115Reads—Score—Shelves
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The large group portrait articles written in Tomato Novel are mainly about fighting World of Warcraft with superpowers in the end of the world. The early stage is more relaxed and campus style, the middle stage is about fighting World of Warcraft, and the later stage is about protecting the world. There are many characters, and there are also some emotional lines, including bgblgl. The story line is also relatively long, and there are many branch lines. However, the main line is more important than the emotional character, so there is a growth arc, and it is not just a cool novel. I hope you will support me, thank you! I hope someone can support me
126 I Will Become Stronger by Eating Ghosts Sanfeng 11Mystery3.1M WordsCompleted 152.6kReads9.3Score16.1kShelves
127 New Book [I Am a Killer in the Supermarket] Great Spiritual RainEastern Fantasy108k WordsOngoing 2Reads—Score—Shelves
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Signed a new book, signed it on the first day, a series you have never seen, unlimited streaming, please recommend it~
128 Spring Is Still Good, Let's Go Boating with You User60447125Ancient Romance310k WordsOngoing 3Reads—Score—Shelves
129 I Sell Fried Rice at the End of the World Qian JueSci-Fi & Apocalypse461k WordsCompleted 979Reads—Score104Shelves
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Newcomer, doomsday survival, not the Holy Mother, salted fish, teaching how to cook
130 Time Agent: Final Love The Refreshing Breeze Makes People Drunk364k WordsCompleted 772Reads6.8Score119Shelves
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Written by a new writer 😜 Very nice
131 No? Host, Who Is the System? Picking up a Boat to Spend the WinterEastern Fantasy104k WordsCompleted 2Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Please review, first time writing a book
132 Ginseng Xuan LeisurelyEastern Fantasy235k WordsOngoing 5Reads—Score—Shelves
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Say "fellow Taoist, stay".
133 The Tribulation of Zhenyu User60447125Ancient Romance138k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
134 Swordsman and Prodigal Son Travel in Rivers and Lakes Madness After MidnightEastern Fantasy31k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Uncle 40 is writing a book for the first time. I don't know how to go about it. Should I stick to it?
135 Prince Consort, Don't Come Here User60447125Ancient Romance344k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
136 Bamboo Shadow Knocking on the Sky Gate West Coast LiuEastern Fantasy399k WordsCompleted 24Reads—Score—Shelves
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Traditional fantasy written by myself, in stand-alone mode, I plan to write a million words [plus one on bookshelf]
137 Lao Deng Fishing Diary After the Prosperity, It Will Eventually Become DullUrban293k WordsCompleted 27Reads—Score—Shelves
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Recommended to people who like true stories, fishing enthusiasts, readers who reflect on modern life, and middle-aged people who need a little laughter and warmth. Reading suggestions: Prepare tissues (you may cry with laughter or be moved to tears). Don't read late at night (you will get hungry easily and want to eat fish). After reading, you may want to find a reservoir to sit for a while. Even if you are not fishing, you are just sitting.
138 The Tenants Are All Cultivators, so I Help the Big Guys Do a Little Job. Please Drink Coke GingerUrban412k WordsOngoing 3Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Stably updated every day, please give me a book review, please give me a reminder...
139 Apocalyptic Battle Royale: I Have a Black Market System Nan Xinjiang AcridineSci-Fi & Apocalypse100k WordsCompleted 3Reads—Score—Shelves
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Newcomer, new book, please come and support me, thank you all [love] [love] [love]
140 Peace of Mind User60447125Modern Romance135k WordsCompleted —Reads—Score—Shelves
141 Keep the Remaining Memories for Three Days in Exchange for Immortality AnonymousEastern Fantasy99k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Recommend it to a friend, fantasy genre. After three years of hiatus, he said he recently wanted to pick it up and revise the previous content.
142 Divine Realm RuilunEastern Fantasy153k WordsCompleted 4Reads—Score—Shelves
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Good health, good health can be a meow
143 Miss Sea Otter's Skybird Time Bread816k WordsOngoing 2.8kReads8.2Score586Shelves
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Come on, come on [shy][shy] You are today where your thoughts have brought you; You will be tomorrow where your thoughts take you Your today comes from your past thoughts, and your tomorrow comes from your present thoughts
144 New World of Super Powers Dream DreamModern Romance96k WordsCompleted 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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Add me one, add me one
145 I Have a Small Chaotic World Yuan Kun Who Loves Grilled TomatoesUrban520k WordsCompleted 406Reads8.1Score—Shelves
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An accident caused Hong Mengzhu to transform into the male protagonist's Dantian. The male protagonist becomes a being beyond the Holy Body.
146 The Training of the Dungeon Boss ZimuyuanEastern Fantasy383k WordsCompleted 1Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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Behind the scenes, create different identities to enter the world
147 A Guide to Fishing in Another World: Collect Enough Fragments and Run Away Yu YouqiEastern Fantasy110k WordsOngoing 34Reads—Score—Shelves
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New books can help each other
148 Carrying a Sword to Survey the Sky HaizhoukeEastern Fantasy517k WordsOngoing 5Reads5.8Score—Shelves
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This is my new book, the novel has been signed, support it
149 Duchenmeng Thirteenth ChordEastern Fantasy206k WordsOngoing 2Reads—Score—Shelves
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I just signed a contract and there's not even a single person there, pathetic!
150 Biographies of Immortal Cultivators Marisa WhiteEastern Fantasy184k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Not long after I signed the contract, I wrote a story about an ordinary character who got a Yunxia Holy Stone, transformed into the Five Elements Spiritual Root, and embarked on the path of cultivating immortality. It included martial arts, no pretentious scenes, and no things that the storage bag cannot be destroyed. It also took into account the scope of language communication. Has anyone come to take a look? Thank you.