I'm a New Writer. I've Just Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Could Someone Give It a Review? 萌新作家，第1次写满8万字，能不能有个人来评价下
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My Dao Begins in the Mortal World 吾道自凡起
The vast continent is home to countless races. Gods and demons hide among the highest heavens, while monsters and ghosts lurk in the deepest abyss. Mortals spend their lives seeking immortality and the Dao, all to escape the fate laid out for them. A young man leaves a remote border town with an ancient bronze ring no one recognizes. With one step, he shatters the mortal world; with one punch, he breaks through the heavens!
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- 152 After the Loli Succubus Spy Was Captured 萝莉魅魔间谍被捕后 [Yuri, angst, cuddly romance, succubus, Cold War setting, groveling for her wife’s forgiveness, misleading blurb (not really)] Beneath the iron curtain ruled by succubi, hatred is etched into bone, and love is born in purgatory. The Red Alliance’s blade, the “Silver Fox” Alia, carries the blood feud of her slaughtered clan in her petite frame. She succeeds in striking at the heart of the Beacon of Freedom, its hypocritical energy minister, Amelia Canglan. But victory leaves her cornered, and the 229Reads8.4Score131Shelves
- 153 I Inherited an Antique Shop from the Start, But I Never Said I Wanted to Go to Hell 开局继承古董店我没说要下地狱啊 Growing up is as painful as having your bones ripped out. After Zhang Cheng's family falls into ruin, his only dream is to open the biggest antique shop in Cairo. But life is full of surprises: his lover, who disappeared years ago, suddenly turns up beside his sworn enemy at his father's side. Should he try to hold on, or shout those words of bold ambition? According to the Book of the Dead, Amur cuts his wrist and crosses between the realms of the living and the dead to save his father, seeking —Reads—Score—Shelves
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Endless Rebirth 无尽回生
[Infinite flow + no harem + wild imagination + healing] Zhang Hua just took an afternoon nap, only to wake up in the world of the dead. Then, for some inexplicable reason, a group of demons started hunting him down. But when he discovered he couldn’t die, he began confronting gods and demons. It might look like a novel about saving your progress and fighting monsters, but this book is really about people, dressed up as an infinite-flow story. Everyone here has a unique story of their own. I hope
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The Supporting Male Lead Should Do More Than Drive the Plot 男配不只要推动剧情
The purpose of a supporting male character is to make the protagonist shine. Xu Qianyan was no exception. But he wasn't willing to accept it. Why did he have to be the one laying the road for someone else? He had once fought back against the System, but fate had already been written. His resistance was nothing more than a futile struggle. So he began to comply, test the waters, and quietly nudge the protagonists of each little world off course. System: [A masterful move.] Xu Qianyan: Even the m
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South of 90 Degrees North 北纬90度以南
Wen Nanyue and Song Beichen were like two lonely boats on parallel courses, each drifting alone between the world's crossings, until a stray puppy covered in snow became the unexpected point where their paths met. Back then, Wen Nanyue viewed life with detached eyes, believing that everything in the world was merely a scene to be painted on a canvas, devoid of warmth. Song Beichen was different. He would wrap the puppy in his scarf during a blizzard, and willingly lose a whole month's wages to p
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Dreaming of Immortality in Water and Moonlight 水月梦仙
Work Description: This is where I’m supposed to write the work description. I may not have readers or the platform’s recognition, but that’s all right. I’ll keep writing diligently and eventually become a true author.
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From the Start, I Perform Magic and Leave Everyone Stunned! 我，开局表演魔术，震撼全场！
I'm Chen Yu, an ordinary magician! But I have a System, from graduation to my professional career, from meeting someone to falling in love! Years later: “Magician Chen Yu, how did you become a magician back then?” “Sorry, I can't answer that question!”
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I’ll Just Kill You in My Memories 就把你杀死在回忆里
As I write these words, I can no longer tell whether this is a novel or a letter that has arrived far too late. The person in this story was once at the center of my universe for the latter half of my sixteenth and eighteenth years, and most of my nineteenth. Now I feel more like an archaeologist, trying to piece together the shape we once shared from the ruins of memory. Some stones have weathered away; others have grown too smooth from my repeated touch. So let me be honest: what you are about
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The Plant-Zombie Chronicles: Fusion 植僵异世录：融合
[Fusion version + harem + transmigration + foreknowledge + plant pictures included] Original version: Golden Sunflower. Hybrid version: completed every Adventure challenge. Fusion version: completed Adventure mode and Travel mode. A regular Plants vs. Zombies 2 player. A Plants vs. Zombies fan: great, no need to say more. The female leads come from various species: humans, plants, and zombies.
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I Pranked My Online-Brother, but He Got Carried Off by a Bunny Girl 网恋整蛊哥哥，他却让兔娘拐跑了
(Original World) (Sugar-Coated Bullets) (Single Female Lead) (Mild Angst) (Ensemble Cast) Just after being accepted into the Imperial Defense Force, the young Xing Rui is tricked by his younger sister into going to a cafe to meet his online girlfriend, who supposedly looks like a rolling log. The girlfriend doesn't exist, but a girl with rabbit ears perched on her head is sitting in the reserved seat: Lan Lan. "Qianyu? Hey, kid, you've got the wrong person, don't you?" "Your sister played a tric
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Whoever I Write About Dies: First My Best Friend, Then My Ex-Girlfriend 我写谁谁死，先写好兄弟，再写前女友
Whoever I write about dies. First my best friend, then my ex-girlfriend
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Old Codger’s Fishing Diary 老登钓鱼日记
Everyman’s tale + dark humor + wild fishing + survival + plot + romance A middle-aged man tears up his divorce certificate and mixes it into his groundbait, swearing he’ll remarry his wife once he catches a ten-jin (five-kilogram) mandarin fish. Instead, he accidentally exposes a pollution scandal by the reservoir and becomes the internet’s favorite “hardcore old geezer.” This is an absurdist realist odyssey about fighting life with a fishing rod and stubbornly defending what’s clean. Core Setup
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The Swamp of Futility 无效泥潭
A sweet love story about Lei Zi and Yue Yue, with everyday bickering and short stories in a variety of styles, ready for you to enjoy. See Chapter One for the full introduction. My new work is out now, so please come read it on Tomato Novel. I hope you’ll enjoy it. Your support is what keeps me writing, and I’ll do my best to tell every story well!
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- 165 The Top Outdoor Adventure Streamer Nearly Died Live on Camera 户外探险第一网红，差点死在直播间 The biggest outdoor adventure streamer nearly died live on camera 22Reads—Score—Shelves
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The Unending River West 河西未央
Beneath the dry sunlight of the Hexi Corridor, bright enough to bleach every memory, there is an “unfinished story.” They shared an unspoken understanding: paper airplanes launched from the old Great Wall, snatches of music overheard outside the practice room, and a split second brushing past each other on morning runs. But youth is a sudden, brief rainstorm over the Gobi Desert…
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- 167 Creatures of the Three Realms, Listen Up: I Am the Great Sage Equal to Heaven, Sun Titiankong 三界众生，听好了，我乃齐天大圣孙替空 Hear me, all beings of the Three Realms! I am the Great Sage Equal to Heaven, Sun Tifukong 31Reads—Score—Shelves
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A Good-for-Nothing Heir? Let Me Borrow Your Body for a While 摆烂世子爷？身体借我玩玩
Shocking! A Wicked Heiress and a Dandy Swap Bodies and Go on a Rampage Before they swapped souls, all of the capital hoped these two troublemakers would destroy each other. Then Yu Yanran, wearing Xie Linfeng's face, wrote ten brilliant essays at the Imperial Academy; while Xie Linfeng, wearing Yu Yanran's skin, dazzled everyone with a sword dance at a palace banquet. “A spoiled heir studies day and night to become the top scorer?” “A wicked heiress is so strong she can tear her enemies apart w
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Hey, Hey, Hey, I’m Not Zero! 哎哎哎，我才不是零呢！
[Dual Male Leads + Fantasy + Ensemble Cast] Dual male leads!!! The author has suffered for far too long from the lack of fantasy novels with two male leads!!! So I’m writing one myself for me and fellow fans. Don’t miss it if you happen to come across it!!! I’m on my knees begging all you wonderful readers to give it a patient read. An ensemble story about growing together, working hard to level up and fight monsters, and the hilarious adventures of the seven-member Big Dipper Seven team. Fang Y
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The New World of Superpowers 异能新世界
On the surface, Lingling is an ordinary student. In reality, she has the extraordinary identity of a superpowered student council president. Beneath her outwardly innocent, adorable demeanor, she is a scheming girl. Is she good or evil? Then an accident pulls her into a conspiracy. When it is all over and the truth comes to light, will she have the courage to stand up and reveal it? Faced with the truth, her feelings, her innocence, and her own interests, what will she choose? Once the truth is
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This Detective Is No Ordinary Man: Falling in Love Makes Him Stronger 这个侦探不一般，恋爱就能变强
Zhang Xici had endured a lonely, miserable life, and just as he was about to retire, he got caught up in something huge. An enormous scapegoat's burden was dumped on him. With his frail build, how could he possibly bear such a huge burden? He was crushed to death beneath it. But who would have thought that a disaster would turn into a blessing: he was reborn. After being reborn, Zhang gained the support of a System and finally became a force to be reckoned with. Unfortunately, his System wasn't
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Death Game: The Sole Survivor 死亡游戏：唯一生还者
When death becomes a bargaining chip, staying alive is the cruelest gamble. Lin Mu, a top crisis PR expert, dies inside the perfect lie he crafted himself. When he opens his eyes again, he finds himself standing with a group of the dead in a sinister, dark labyrinth. A black tattoo appears on his arm like a living thing, and a number ticks down without mercy: the countdown to the end of his remaining life.
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From the Start, I Cultivated the Ruthless Way. Former Sect, Stay Away! 开局怒修无情道，前师门别来沾边
[Beast taming + no romance + regret and reconciliation + satisfying power fantasy] Shen Li is recognized by her sect as a genius beast tamer, but is also the source of good fortune kept and exploited by everyone in her sect. She gives her whole heart to her fellow disciples, only to be betrayed and set up time and time again. Everyone treats her like she’s worthless, while the new, delicate junior sister is cherished and doted on by all. Even her longtime spirit pet abandons its old master to s
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A Corporate Drone’s Cultivation Record on Flower-Fruit Mountain 花果山社畜修仙录
“Attention, residents! Attention, everyone!” The loudspeaker of Pangu Property Management blared like it had gone mad, crackling through the primordial chaos like a string of firecrackers and making everyone's ears ring. “The countdown to handing over the property is now 10,800 years! The construction crew is about to do its final clearance, so watch out!” The Jade Emperor was sucking on an e-cigarette, legs crossed as he scrolled through his social media feed. Hearing the Clairvoyant's shout, h
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Tsundere Girl, Know Your Place: I’m Just Your Boss 傲娇少女请自重，我只是你的老板
[Tsundere Heroine] [Everyday Romance] [One Heroine] “Hey, this milk tea's pretty good. Try some,” Cheng Yan said, holding it out to the girl beside him. Lin Tang huffed, knitted her brows, and glared at him. “Who wants to drink from the same cup as you?” “Fine, I'll go buy you another one,” Cheng Yan said with a helpless shrug. “Wait here.” “Hey, wait!” Lin Tang hurriedly grabbed his hand and snatched the drink away. “What made you change your mind?” A smile tugged at Cheng Yan's lips. “Didn't y
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- 176 The Haunted Tomb 诡坟 [This is no ordinary paranormal story. It's all about horror and suspense: no mindless wish fulfillment, forbidden yin-yang lore, no cultivation, and a ghost wife. If it's not good, you can break my legs.] People laugh at my family's poverty and say that all my blood relatives have died, so there must be a ghost in our house. I don't dare argue... because there really is a ghost buried in our ancestral grave! ...My name is Zhang Asi... I was born at four in the morning on the fourteenth day of t 40.2kReads8.8Score3.8kShelves
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Peerless Sword Emperor: It Began When a Fairy Raided Me at Night 绝世剑帝，从被仙子夜袭开始
Also known as: Peerless Sword Emperor: From Abandoned Disciple of the Immortal Sect to a Reversal of Fate My name is Li Qingfeng. I was once a prodigy of the Taixu Continent, but from the age of seven, my cultivation stopped advancing. In the end, I was cast aside by the Immortal Sect and mocked by everyone! After nine years of silence, on the eve of my sixteenth birthday, I finally awakened my Great Dao Sword Body. From this day on, I will show the world who the true prodigy is! Forge an indest
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Biographies of Cultivators 修仙人列传
Wang Di transmigrates into another world, but has no spiritual root in his body. Then one day, the Cloudglow Sacred Stone descends and transforms into a five-element spiritual root within him. Relying on cultivation techniques taken from a demonic cultivator whose attempt to seize his body failed, Wang Di eventually uses the Cloudglow Sacred Stone to become the Netherworld Corpse Venerable of the Southern Wastelands cultivation world, leaving behind an immortal legend.
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Chronicles of the Eternal World on a Winter's Night 冬夜常世录
If the world were sunk in a winter night, this would be recorded as an ordinary story, seen only through the eyes of ordinary people. As for how long and far the journey stretches, we who stand in the present need not reach for its end. We can simply take in the scenery around us, and let every moment of time unfold into something wonderful.
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When the Wind Rises, the Clouds Soar 风禾尽起云飞扬
I was born to a military family in Yunzhou, on the frontier. My youth was marred by hardship, and I was sent far beyond the border. After surviving countless brushes with death, I finally returned. Then my father and brothers were framed, and I had no choice but to come to the capital to save them. Heaven be praised, they were unharmed. The emperor showed me kindness, and I bore him a son. In times of crisis, I rooted out treacherous officials, defended against foreign enemies, and safeguarded t
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Apocalypse Battle Royale: I Have a Black Market System 末世大逃杀：我有黑市系统
The apocalypse hits, and zombies surround his door. Su Qingyu binds himself to the Black Market System, thinking he’s about to take off. Then the System opens its mouth and asks for money. He checks his pockets: 242 yuan. “Type 54 pistol, 200. Eight bullets, 40. Balance: 2 yuan. Please keep trying, Host.” Su Qingyu looks at the zombies scratching at his door, then at his empty wallet. “System, are you messing with me?”
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The Luo Shu Counting Rods 洛书算筹
The misty, rain-soaked lands of Jiangnan conceal surging undercurrents. Shen Moheng was heir to the declining Shen family, a cultivation clan. He spent his days tending the family’s ancestral “Study of Things,” living a poor but peaceful life, while his father, Shen Mingyuan, tried to pass on his “unorthodox” cooking skills. Then, in the family library, Shen Moheng disturbed a taboo passed down for hundreds of years: the Luo Shu and He Tu. A rare treasure had appeared, its spiritual radiance s
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Chuunibyou: I Became the Lord of the Abyss Through Delusions of Grandeur 中二病：我靠中二成为深渊之主
[Chuunibyou] [Invincible Protagonist] [Feel-Good Read] [play the pig to eat the tiger] [System] [Ensemble Cast] [Funny and Lighthearted] "An Ling, are you fighting the air again?" "Hahahaha, there he goes again! This time he even gave himself a new nickname: Lord of the Abyss!" "Ignore him. He's just another chuunibyou." An Ling stood in the middle of the sports field and slowly covered his left eye as the entire school burst into laughter. "I'll gladly accept your ridicule." No one actually bel
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The Wasteland's Cry 荒鸣
Bodies lie buried beneath the Dragon-Spine Tree, yet even the Sea of Eternal Night cannot bury their souls. A clan with a legacy spanning a hundred thousand years is brought to ruin in a single day because of an act of kindness. Red flowers of the other shore bloom upon white robes. A black thorned banner is planted among mountains of corpses and bones. The surviving child of the Wilds seeks answers through confusion and sinks into the currents of fate...
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One Child, Three Dads 三个亲爹一个娃
[Little girl + three biological fathers + heartwarming family bonds] [Transmigration + sci-fi + a touch of palace intrigue] After her mother died, six-year-old Leng Wanwan was taken along on a transmigration journey by a System called 0328. The System said she had three biological fathers in ancient times. She had to find them all if she ever wanted to stop being an orphan. But after going to so much trouble to find them, she discovered that her fathers were... a little hard to recognize. Empe
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C-Rank Appraiser? I Command the Supreme Treasures of All Ages c级鉴宝？我执掌万代至尊
In the year 2012, a dark star hung in the sky, and dimensional rifts of every size tore open around the world, unleashing countless monsters. Human firearms barely harmed them. But Source Crystals began to grow all over the world, and people who came into contact with them started awakening special talents, giving humanity a way to fight back. Even so, humanity endured sixty years of darkness. It was only when the Twelve Kings of Mankind had fully come into their own that humans could stand toe
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The Whole World Is Against Me? So What? 举世皆敌？那咋了？
[Ensemble-Style Story + Rival Nations + Political Schemes + Jianghu Heroics + One Female Lead] [An alternate-world novel. It is not based on history and should not be treated as a historical reference. This is not a mindless power fantasy. The plot is carefully developed, the logic is rigorous, and there is no System or golden finger. There are no idiotic villains or plotlines that make characters stupid. Readers are asked to be patient.] In the depths of winter, the young Su Que lost his closes
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Reincarnated with E-Rank Stats, a Good-for-Nothing? I Draw Cards and Grind My Way to Godhood 转生全E废柴？我靠抽卡爆肝成神
[Western fantasy world + gaming + fantasy + card draws + adventure + slow burn + System] An Shiya woke up to find she had transmigrated into a five-year-old baby with E-grade stats across the board, starting out on hell difficulty in the slums. Her father was worried about scraping together the taxes, her older brother couldn’t afford to take the civil service exam for children, and the family was so poor they could only drink rice gruel. Don’t panic, I have the [Hero Summoning] card-draw System
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The Twelve Dongling Peaks 十二峒岭
This book has been abandoned. It’s a collection of mystery stories... The moonlight at midnight lay over the quiet town like a veil. I curled up on an old sofa in the attic, flipping through a yellowed diary. The scratch of my pen echoed through the empty room. This was my third month living here, and the thirtieth night I had spent recording the secrets of this old house.
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- 190 Taboo of the Living 活人禁忌 When I was nine, I found myself in mortal danger! To save me, my grandfather made a decision that would change my life forever... 16kReads9.2Score2.1kShelves
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Honkai: Star Rail: A Lone Wolf’s Self-Cultivation 崩铁：孤狼的自我修养
[Game transmigration + no romance + follows the main storyline + level-up progression + lone wolf] At three in the morning, the Simulated Universe interface suddenly went black. Gu Sheng’s consciousness was dragged by a System notification into the Dual-Phase Paradise of Honkai: Star Rail, where he became Lin Deng Scott, an Interastral Peace Corporation employee who was supposed to have died in the Common Wish Building. His shattered round glasses, the bloodstain still wet on his chest, and the
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I’ll Give You Three Thousand Melodies 许你乐音三千曲
On a rainy night on the highway, Xu Meng clutches her child and huddles inside an out-of-control car, unable to think of anything but Lin Shuye’s words: “You just don’t have what it takes.” For the sake of his comment, “I like people who are musical,” she devours music theory books and practices until her voice goes hoarse, despite being tone-deaf. Her talent proves impossible to hide, and she outshines his ideal woman, only to hear: “We’re not right for each other.” After Xu Meng dies, Lin Shuy
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What Kind of Immortal Are You Even Cultivating? 修的什么鸟仙
[A completely unhinged novel. Either the author or the readers has to be crazy!] “Old man, I owe two million spirit coins to the Great Love for All Alliance Bank. Can I help you up?” “You’re only at Foundation Establishment and you owe that much? Son, take this old man’s advice: don’t go down the crooked path of cultivation. Lie down next to me. When a Golden Core big shot’s flying sword passes by, we’ll split the compensation fifty-fifty. How’s that sound?” “What Golden Core? I’m Nascent Sou
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- 194 The Yin-Walker 巡阴人 Applying makeup to the dead, reading the winds and assessing the land, preparing bodies for burial, and performing rites on the seventh day after death. Scorched corpses: cleaning the body, applying rouge, painting the features! Bodies cut in half at the waist: removing the organs, filling the cavities, and stitching the body back together! I was born into a family that made its living from the dead, so I grew up dealing with corpses. I’ve seen all sorts of bizarre ways to die and countless inex 8.4kReads9.1Score1.1kShelves
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Back from the Apocalypse to Beat Up My Fiancé and Best Friend 末日归来暴打未婚夫和闺蜜
[Strong female lead + feel-good novel + supernatural powers + revenge thrills + battle thrills + a male-oriented power fantasy masquerading as a female-oriented novel + a brutal apocalypse + absolutely no do-gooder heroine] I was reborn. In my past life, I did everything I could to protect my fiancé and best friend through the apocalypse, only to be betrayed, framed, and killed by them. Reborn once more, I'm going to smash those two scumbags' heads in.
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- 196 You Hired Me to Collect Bodies, So I Dissected My Ex-Girlfriend 让你当收尸人，你直接解刨了前女友 In anatomy class, the corpse turns out to be my ex-girlfriend... After that, I went through all sorts of unbelievable things. A bus that only goes up, never down, and runs straight to a reservoir. An old scholar tree in the hospital, lush with branches and leaves, that swallows people whole. A giant catfish by the Qingshui River, begging people for help every night. And a deadly brothel hung with human skin, open for business without end. It went on and on, as if it would never come to an end... 62.6kReads9.4Score2.3kShelves
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The Song of Heavenly Craft 天工谣
My heart is an open book, as bright as the sun and moon. Whether in a humble cottage or a glittering palace, The green mountains stand firm, and so does my resolve. Even trapped in the gutter, you are all I see; Even if I ascend to the highest heavens, you are still the one I cherish. Reform and conservatism, entrenched class divisions and breaking monopolies, true love and love’s tribulations, personal dignity and worth, sharing knowledge, sacrifice and growth.
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- 198 Taboo of the Living 2 活人禁忌2 Heaven Official's Blessing, no taboos under heaven. The second installment of Living People’s Taboos! 8.3kReads9.1Score1.3kShelves
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The Cold and Cruel Young Master Is Reborn, and the Fake Heir Is Spoiled Rotten 冷戾少爷重生后，假少爷他被宠疯
[Proud, cold, and ruthless true young master Duan Qiaoran]× [Gentle, cool, and aloof fake young master Jiu Yuhang] What will happen when the calculating, ruthless true young master is reborn? One day, the unhinged true young master Duan Qiaoran wraps an arm around the waist of the frail, aloof fake young master Jiu Yuhang... Heh, boy. I remember perfectly well how you told me you loved me in our last life. The fake young master might be in love? The true young master assures everyone with absolu
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Wait, Host, Which One of Us Is the System? 不是？宿主，到底谁才是系统？
Shen Zhidu was a deadbeat shut-in, but then good fortune came knocking when he went out, and he accidentally transmigrated to a cultivation world. Though he possesses endless treasures, he’s an ordinary mortal who can never cultivate. To his surprise, he even has a System? System: “Quest triggered: kill the first-rank demonic beast, the Bloodthirsty Snake, in front of you. Reward: 5 Grade One Marrow-Cleansing Pills.” Shen Zhidu: “You kill it, and I’ll give you ten Grade Two pills.” System: “?” “
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