I'm a New Writer. I've Just Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Could Someone Give It a Review? 萌新作家，第1次写满8万字，能不能有个人来评价下
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Still the Mind 息神
1. I have a System. I can do whatever I want. 2. Whatever happens, take it up with my System. Don't come to me! Stars shift and all things grow. Just as Shen Xing thought he would live out an ordinary life, a Azure Dragon Token from the Realm of Breath suddenly arrived in his world. What he didn't know was that a pair of eyes was watching him from above the heavens...
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Destiny Planner 命定规划师
A complex world where star power and source power intertwine, a crimson abyss of mutation and devouring. Can Xu Mo, the chosen one from Earth, change this malformed, bizarre world and chart a new course for his life? Hello, fellow readers, I'm Liurian. This is my first time writing a book. I'm just getting started and have little influence, so I hope you'll give me three parts teasing and seven parts support. A bow of thanks to you all!
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- 3 Heavenly Abyss 天渊 (The print edition has been published and is available to buy online) A hundred years ago, Chen Qingyuan entered a forbidden zone called the Heavenly Abyss. His soul lamp went out, and everyone believed he was dead. Today, Chen Qingyuan has emerged from the forbidden zone alive, but his cultivation has been destroyed and his spiritual roots severed. With his beloved breaking off their engagement and the various sects bullying him, what is Chen Qingyuan supposed to do? “Chen Qingyuan, you have tw 981.4kReads9.4Score102.3kShelves
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The Gray Wolf of the Wilderness 山野之苍狼
(Transmigration + rebirth + mystery + treasure hunting + business warfare + ruthless ambition) Zhen Buhui, a modern-day underachiever and frustrated shopkeeper, is egged on by his childhood friend Erdan to set off under cover of night with the heroine, Zhang Ying, and carry out a plan at Mount Bai. Who could have guessed that beside a spirit stone, they would be surrounded by a pack of wolves... and accidentally transmigrate to the late Qing dynasty? Faced with the desperate struggle to surviv
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- 5 Remarried to the Rough-Hewn Neighbor, the Young Bride Is Spoiled Rotten 改嫁隔壁糙汉，小媳妇被宠上天 Original title: "Left Alone at Home, the Neighboring Roughneck Has His Eye on Her" [1980s | Countryside | Realistic | Devoted Couple | Possessive Favoritism | Age Gap | Love Rival Showdown] In 1980, Li Chuntao is married off in exchange for her older brother’s marriage. But on their wedding night, her groom elopes with his old flame. Overnight, she becomes the village’s target of scorn, branded a woman who brings bad luck. Her mother-in-law calls her a jinx, while a pack of old bachelors eye 38.3kReads8.6Score1.6kShelves
- 6 Into the Wild 见野 [The print edition is now available] Xia Wanwan died suddenly after spending twenty years tightening screws at a factory. To her surprise, she was reborn. But why had the factory director's son from her previous life shown up in this one? Jiang Ye, the big shot at No. 1 High School, had somehow taken an interest in Xia Wanwan. Everyone thought Xia Wanwan had offended Jiang Ye and that her days were about to get rough. At last, one day, Jiang Ye and Xia Wanwan got into a huge argument, and he 6.3kReads9.5Score1kShelves
- 7 Fallen 堕 That year, I was twenty-nine, and Mo Huai was thirteen. When I, someone who no longer wanted to live, met him, someone else who no longer wanted to live, we somehow found the strength to keep going, at least for a little while. So we decided to rely on each other and make it through together. 45.5kReads9.6Score5.3kShelves
- 8 EN Ten Days to the End 十日终焉 2024 Tomato Novel Annual Peak Rankings TOP 1 | 2024 China Online Literature Influence List | 2024 China Good Novel Award | Over 2 million copies sold (No harem, no formulaic tropes, no invincibility, no System, no mindless antics, no wish fulfillment. Read with caution if these bother you.) Just when I thought it was an ordinary day, I discovered I had been captured and taken to the End. Just when I thought I could escape by continually taking part in death games, people began awakening supernat 1.7MReads9.9Score209.2kShelves
- 9 Earth's Last Live-In Son-in-Law 地球最后一个倒插门女婿 That day, he was abandoned by six billion people, left alone on Earth to slowly await his death. That day, the edge of the universe began to collapse, shrinking like a deadly zone. Those who ran too slowly had no way out but death. 123Reads8.4Score—Shelves
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After I Transmigrated into a Book, My Husband Became the Male Lead 穿书后，我老公变成了男主
[Transmigrate into a Book] [Yandere and Unhinged] [Redemption] Wen Shuran was complaining to her best friend about a video she'd recently watched. The male supporting character was incredibly handsome, but the screenwriter had killed him off. She swore she'd kill the screenwriter herself. In her dream, Wen Shuran chased the screenwriter, demanding justice for the male character. Then, by accident, she transmigrated into the novel. In the novel, the heroine marries the hero's older brother, Fu Si
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Even Cowards Must Escape the Cage of Youth 胆小鬼也要逃出青春的囚笼
[New Author, New Work] + [Bittersweet Unrequited Love] + [No Harem] Su Lian is insecure and withdrawn, and his bleak youth casts a shadow over nearly all the years of his life. Then, after transferring schools countless times, he returns to Jiang'an, the city that buried all his sunshine, and meets Bai Gongliu. From the moment he sees her, a bright moon hangs above his dead sea. This grand pantomime goes on for two years. He thinks he is the only one performing in this one-man show. But that br
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The 304th Confession in the Black-and-White Village 黑白村庄的第304次告白
If I told you this was my three hundred and fourth time coming to this place called Black and White Village, would you believe me? If I told you none of you are yourselves, that you are assembled from consciousness, would you believe me? If I told you that this place was created by someone from Earth, would you believe me? If I told you that the last time, you were yourselves, and yet not yourselves, would you believe me? Would you really believe me? (There are bonus extras in the author's notes
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The New Neighbor at My Desk Is a Good-for-Nothing at Life 新来的邻家同桌是生活废柴这件事
[One Female Lead] [Slice of Life] [Light Novel] [No Soap Opera Drama] [No Villains] [Both Start Out With Extremely High Affection] [Pure Romance] [No Push and Pull] The day before school started for the second semester of her sophomore year, a new neighbor moved in next door to An Ningsui: a beautiful girl who looked about her age. But when the new semester began, a beautiful transfer student also joined An Ningsui's class. When An Ningsui got a good look at the transfer student's face, she coul
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Bone-Rust Punishment 骨锈罚行
[Dark justice × cultivation crime investigation × Lovecraftian horror × Chinese-style horror] “Someone has to forge themselves into a coffin to contain the great evil of this world.” Three hundred years into the Rustbone Era, the spiritual energy of heaven and earth has turned corrupt. Some cultivators use their own flesh and blood as furnaces, and rusted bones as fuel. Yang Yu, the sole survivor of a family slaughtered to the last, wields an evil blade that devours the marrow of sinners. Wherev
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What's a Hollow Disaster? I'm the Hollow Knight! 空洞灾害是啥？我可是空洞骑士！
[Zenless Zone Zero] [Hollow Knight] [Follows the main story] Lu Li (the Knight) dies in an accident one day. After turning into the Little Knight, he transmigrates to the world of Zenless Zone Zero. “I'm supposed to fight Radiance? Are you serious?” Behold! He is the mightiest knight from the Abyss, the guardian of Hallownest. Now he has arrived in another world, where a one-of-a-kind adventure awaits him. So, what interesting things will happen next?
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First Frost in Beijing and Hong Kong 京港逢霜降
A rotten man with a real heart × a prickly little white rabbit Class gap + substitute romance + reunion after years apart + the pursuit of a runaway wife The first time Wen Shuangjiang met Liang Jingxu, she knew they were from different worlds. They crossed paths on a film set. His car splashed mud all over her, and he drove off without a word of apology. She lost her chance at the job. When they met again, she was flinging her room key at a producer’s face. He had a curvy woman in his arms,
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- 17 Moss Never Meets the Stars 青苔不逢星 [Male unrequited-love perspective + younger crybaby + insecure male lead + light ensemble cast + college campus + universally adored heroine] [Gifted heiress × insecure, loyal puppy] Lu Wangyu's youth was a quiet, damp patch of moss. He came from a modest, loving family, had an unremarkable personality, average grades, and was the most ordinary boy in any crowd. He loved someone far beyond his reach... Xia Muzhi, a girl blessed by heaven, lived a life entirely different from his. She was the sol 236Reads—Score102Shelves
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Plunge! 坠！
I was born in a small city blanketed in coal dust. By chance, I reunited with the girl who had once lived next door, whom I hadn't seen in many years. There were many versions of the rumors about her past, and it was hard to tell truth from fiction. This time, she slowly told her own story. I had just finished reading Fallen. Her life had some similarities to Mo Huai's in the book, but the differences between them were fundamental. I wrote down this memory not to compare whose fate was more trag
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I Sell Secondhand Mirrors Online, and the Buyer Says Someone in the Mirror Is Watching Her 我在闲鱼卖二手镜子，买家说镜子里有人在看她
I sell secondhand mirrors on Xianyu. The buyer says someone is watching her from inside the mirror.
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Game Descends: Owing the System 200 Million from the Start 游戏降临：开局欠系统两个亿
[Game Descends] [Worlds Merge] [No CP] [A Touch of Ensemble Cast] [Strongest Female Lead, Number One on Blue Star] Lin Yuanyuan was born with congenital ectopia cordis and abdominal organs, with most of her heart growing outside her body. After joining a game open to everyone, she was targeted and killed. Her heart exploded into a top-tier crafting material. Her consciousness attached itself to the item, and she lived on as its spirit for more than two hundred years. Over those two hundred years
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Transmigrating to the Underworld: What Does It Mean to Have a Crime Pouch in My Face from the Start? 穿越黄泉，开局罪袋怼脸是啥意思
Honkai: Star Rail fanfiction. Lighthearted, everyday life, snark, no System, dual souls, Luocha stays, a touch of ensemble cast. Concept-projection characters (Guilt Bag, MiHoYo Hime...) No major alterations, no OOC, and faithful to the original characterizations. Many characters will be added, along with original plots that still tie into the main story. Guilt Bag will appear in a few scenes later on. “No, no, no, I’m definitely furious.” “Let me see what timeline I’ve transmigrated into. Wait,
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After Yixiu Was Reborn, Why Is the Big Fat Orange Crying? 宜修重生后，大胖橘怎么哭了
[Empresses in the Palace Fanfiction] [Yixiu Reborn] [Saving Her Son] [Revenge] [Harem Intrigue] [Mother-Son Bond] [Villainess Power Fantasy] [The Emperor's Long Road to Winning Her Back] Yixiu died. She died in Jingren Palace, after the words, "May we never meet again, in life or death." Only as she lay dying did she understand. All her life, she had hated Rouze, Zhen Huan, and those who stole the emperor's favor, yet she had forgotten to hate the man who had truly taken everything from her.
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The Hunting Game: Back to 2012 猎局重返2012
Urban rebirth + business warfare and mind games + revenge and wish fulfillment + entrepreneurial growth Hahaha, this is tough. Hardship at every turn. Gu Yan was betrayed by his very best friend. As he fell to his death, his good friend even laughed and said: "Gu Yan, you're the longest game of chess I've ever played." When he opened his eyes again, he was back in the summer of 2012. He hadn't graduated from college yet. His parents were still alive. And the "friend" who had ruined his lif
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- 24 I Pretended to Be a Fool, and the Possessive Villain Coveted Me Night After Night 装傻后被偏执反派夜夜觊觎 System life extension | Play dumb to stay alive | Possessive male lead | Push and pull between two hearts | [Soft on the outside, ruthless within, playing-dumb heroine x gloomy, obsessive, possessive villain] [Synopsis] After waking up from drowning, Ai Ni binds herself to a life-saving System. The System issues a cold warning: [Host must have intimate contact with the villain Tao Cixi and maintain it at regular intervals. Otherwise, your intelligence will regress, and you will permanently becom 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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My Sister Says She'll Steal Everything I Own 姐姐说，我的东西她都要抢
[Both Pure, Happy Ending] Her sister's fiancé turns out to be the childhood friend she has secretly loved for years. In the bathroom Ling Shaoyang looked a little awkward. He opened his mouth, trying to explain. "You threw up all over yourself just now. I was helping you..." He didn't get to finish. Huo Ran seemed not to understand his explanation. She gazed at him quietly, then reached out to tug at him. Water splashed everywhere. "Brother Shaoyang," she said, her voice hoarse and soft, blurred
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New Utopia 新，乌托邦
[Political Thriller] [Montage Style] [Psychologically Oppressive] [Dystopian] (The plot moves slowly at first. Please be patient and read to the end.) After the catastrophe, a city-state rose from the ground. People called it New Utopia. Beneath its gleaming order, those in power had long since ceased to be human. Monsters wore human skin and occupied the highest offices. Their eyes were connected, and everything was under surveillance. A colossal beast hung in the sky, while monsters roamed t
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Go to Sleep, I'm Here 睡吧，我在呢
Go to sleep. I'm right here.
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- 28 The Food I Deliver Has a Recipient Who's Been Dead for Three Years 我送的外卖，收货人死了三年 The person who received the food I delivered died three years ago. 1.9kReads—Score—Shelves
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Everyone Transmigrates: From the Start, One Island, with All Supplies Drawn by Lottery 全民穿越，开局一座岛物资全靠抽
[Full transmigration] [Ocean exploration] [Island upgrades] [Faction conflicts] After transmigrating en masse, Yang Wei, a 996 worker, gains an SSS-rank talent: the Lucky Prize Wheel. The ocean is home to all kinds of unknown creatures, while the land is occupied by various factions. He must gather supplies, upgrade his island, and survive. Along the way, he will also encounter eccentric merchants and terrifying Lovecraftian creatures. I, Yang Wei, keep spinning and spinning, but why do I always
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The Language of the Three Corpses 三尸语
You’ve heard of people who died with their eyes open, but have you ever heard of a dead person whose mouth wouldn’t close? His grandfather’s death turns the life of a broke college student upside down. A corpse glares, a soul is hooked; a corpse opens its mouth, and disaster strikes twice. As one bizarre incident after another unfolds, he accidentally discovers that there’s far more to it than ghosts…
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Eternal Demon 永魔
Traditional cultivation. The protagonist is ruthless and merciless, no holier-than-thou hero, no heroine, dark fiction! No System!! If you want to become an immortal in the heavens, you must climb the road to immortality over the bones of others. This isn't AI-generated. I wrote it by hand!!!
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- 32 The Peerless Assassin Possessing a Catgirl Assassin from Another World 附身异界猫娘刺客的绝世杀手 [Possession] [Many Transmigrators] [Alternate World] [Slow-Paced] [No Angst] [Nontraditional Western Fantasy] Bai Ye, a professional assassin betrayed by his organization during a mission, unexpectedly transmigrated to another world known as “Kalantia.” He possessed Wuyue, a rookie assassin, and became her master, helping her navigate a thorny world step by step. Together, they completed the tasks given to them by the will of the world, witnessed the vicissitudes of life, and beheld all its sple 346Reads8.0Score—Shelves
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A Geisha’s Dream 瑰夏之梦
One midsummer day in my second year of high school, I glimpsed Xiao Ruohua at the library, bent over her books by the window. She became the Guixia rose I kept hidden in my heart. For twelve long years, I watched her from afar. I saw her shine as she sang onstage and dazzle everyone in debate competitions. I also saw her hide beneath the protection of the Chu family, suppress all her talents, and become an obedient, almost invisible stepdaughter. I watched in silence and quietly made my way towa
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Who Says a Factory Worker Can’t Achieve Their Dreams? 谁说工厂普工，不能实现梦想
Who Says a Factory Worker Can’t Achieve Their Dreams?
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- 35 Strict Family Rules! I Married the Young Duke Just to Lie Flat 家规太严！我嫁小公爷只为躺平 The Family Rules Are Too Strict! I Married the Duke's Son Just to Lie Flat 2Reads—Score—Shelves
- 36 Yizhi Xiaoqi's 17th Book 一纸小旗第17本书 A country boy with superb medical skills lands a job at an electronics factory in the kingdom of women. From then on, there's no stopping him. With charm and skill to back him up, he thrives and rises to the pinnacle of life! 1.3kReads8.1Score139Shelves
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The One Who Wants to Become a God 想成为神明的人
[Alternate World] [Combat] [Fantasy] A fantasy stage where anything goes! If I'm not gutsy, I'll do something reckless. There's no time to walk! I have to run! “Someone has to die! If that someone is me, then I'm willing!” “Ancestors, bear witness!” “Your unfilial child...” “I'll blow you to hell!” The early chapters are a little rough, and the protagonist starts out extremely weak. No System, slow pacing. This is an original story, and any similarities are purely coincidental. Please go easy on
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- 38 Abducted by Bandits, I Became the Female Emperor 被山匪掳走后，我成了女帝 After Being Abducted by Bandits, I Became the Empress 1Reads—Score—Shelves
- 39 Me and My Dongguan Sisters 我与东莞姐姐 [A Tale of Passion and Brotherhood] [Love and Longing] Gao Yang, a country boy with an uncanny talent, leaves his hometown for the first time! He heads to Dongguan to seek refuge with his older sister, only to discover that people are far more sinister than they seem. Through a series of coincidences, he ends up working in a factory, quickly rises through the ranks, and finds himself surrounded by romantic prospects. In the end, he gets dragged into a gang war and sets out on a path of no return 7.9kReads6.4Score460Shelves
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The Record of Crossing the Dusty World by Boat 参舟渡尘录
The martial arts of the world are a mirror of the heart. But what about Lu Jinghe? He's just a shopkeeper selling paper offerings. When he was seventeen, his father disappeared, leaving behind only a two-hundred-year-old account book. Later, when the paper shop burned down, he learned the truth: It wasn't an account book at all. It was the Chart of the Hidden Boat, concealing the dynasty's secrets and the world's greatest treasure. The problem was, the book was gone. And to make matters worse, h
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- 41 Oh No! My Consort and I Share a Dream 不好！我与驸马共梦 Oh No! The Prince Consort and I Share Dreams 1Reads—Score—Shelves
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After I Died, My Corpse Began Cultivating on the Cliff of Certain Death 我死后，尸体在绝命崖自动修炼
[Corpse Cultivation] [Wild Premise] [Leveling Up] [Decisive and Ruthless] [Revenge] Betrayed by his fiancee and senior fellow disciple, Jiang Ye had his innate spiritual root ripped out and was thrown into the Deadly Abyss. Everyone believed Jiang Ye was dead. But his soul was trapped in his corpse, which could absorb baleful energy and cultivate on its own. He could not attack on his own, but whenever an enemy struck his body, it triggered a retaliatory corpse fiend attack, harvesting the enemy
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Divine Ability Wielder 神通者
Among the living things of this world, some are born with strange bones. These bones can be inscribed with wondrous arts, granting their bearers immense power: conjuring fire and wind, summoning thunder and lightning, swallowing the sun and plucking stars, suppressing demons and imprisoning gods. These are Divine Ability Bones. Those born with such bones are called... Divine Ability Users.
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- 44 The Village Doctor's Romance 乡村神医的爱情 Wang Hao worked night shifts at a factory. When he got home, he discovered his girlfriend cheating with her boss. He lost his job because of it and had no choice but to return to his hometown. Then one chance encounter changed his fate completely, and from that moment on, he began living a very different life! 1.4kReads—Score101Shelves
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The Quest for Enlightenment 欲求得道
[Dragon Mom] [Transmigrated Before Birth] [No CP] [Hoarding Hamster] [Fantasy Cultivation] [Business-Savvy Young Prodigy] A sweet girl from Sichuan and Chongqing transmigrates to another world. In the year she comes of age, she joins the Hehuan Sect, then stumbles upon a huge flower-covered egg in a secret realm. From then on, she begins a journey of growth and adventure...
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- 46 The Carefree Little Country Doctor 乡村小神医真逍遥 A university student who graduated from medical school is terminally ill and has little time left. One day, by chance, he ruins someone else's plans, but turns misfortune into fortune and receives the legacy of a mysterious person... He brings blessings to the people, enjoys a carefree life in the countryside, and roams the world at will... 297Reads7.0Score105Shelves
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After the Village School Closed: Teaching the Heavens with a System 私塾关门后：带着系统教化诸天
[Steady protagonist + System + exploring the myriad realms + mysterious cases + founding patriarch] The protagonist has a strong moral compass. After a future event, he sets out on the path to invincibility. Much of the early story lays the groundwork. Su Changming, a private-school teacher on Mount Taicang, may be the most “unprofessional” schoolteacher in all the myriad realms. By day, he wields a ruler and teaches children to recite, “Man at his birth is naturally good.” By night, he has to
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Winter in the Fertile Crescent 新月沃土的冬天
[Niche] [Western Fantasy] [No Female Lead] [Coming of Age] [Multiple Storylines] The torch of the Renaissance pierces the benighted long night of theocracy, while the verses of The Divine Comedy become a sacred hymn guiding the pioneers onward. Their flesh no longer crawls beneath the stone steps of divine revelations. They raise their heads and challenge the gods who once seemed beyond their reach, winning the chance to stand as their equals. De Revolutionibus Orbium Coelestium listens to the s
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This Dharma Says, Let There Be Light 本法说，要有光
[Legal Fantasy] [Path to Godhood] [Cthulhu Mythos] [Corruption] [One Female Lead] [Pure Love] [Dystopia] "Teacher, why is Earth the only place in the galaxy with life?" "Because that's what the law says." "Then where did light come from?" The teacher flipped through the legal code. "I know this one. The law says, 'Let there be light!'" The technology and civilization of the past have fallen silent, and an unprecedented power now rules the new world. It is neither arcane, inscrutable magic nor ce
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The Final Hunt in Ten Days 十日终猎
A new work is here! Welcome to read my story on Tomato Novel. I hope you enjoy it. Your support motivates me to write, and I'll do my best to tell every story well!
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