I'm a New Writer. I've Just Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Could Someone Give It a Review?

1 息 Breathe God Mu WanquUrban120k WordsCompleted 22Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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The first one is written by me. I just signed a contract for 30,000 to 40,000 words. Please review it. The last three are my favorite books, in no particular order.

5 规 Weird Stories About Rules: Change Your Destiny with One Word Super Invincible Fruit PieMystery167k WordsOngoing 1.9kReads—Score308Shelves

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You can read my book and support me more.

6 谁 Who Said She Was Just an Assistant? Yan HuishiFantastical Romance118k WordsOngoing 386Reads—Score—Shelves

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This is also a new book

7 胆 Even a Coward Must Escape from the Prison of Youth C1yyzzUrban121k WordsOngoing 132Reads—Score—Shelves

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Recommend your own, newcomers' new works, daily campus literature

8 我 I Am a Priest in a Church, but I Am a Death Row Prisoner Three-Point Heat Steaming190k WordsOngoing 380Reads—Score—Shelves

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I'm not forcing it on you, I just want to make a promise with you. If you like western fantasy, come here, it's not mindless, it's slow but has great stamina. As long as you continue reading, please leave your book review or traces of your visit. I just started recommending, I need interaction, please.

9 元 Yuanxu Ember Without ImageEastern Fantasy146k WordsOngoing 395Reads—Score—Shelves

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Very nice [exploration]

10 坊 The Owner Just Wants to Serve the People The Pine Nuts Are GoneEastern Fantasy161k WordsCompleted 130Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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The couple's first new book [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

11 大 Master Zun Cheng RuEastern Fantasy318k WordsOngoing 14.7kReads—Score993Shelves

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A veteran in the world of martial arts traveled through the world of cultivation. Relying on his wife's nepotism, he entered the fairy gate. Senior sister, junior sister, saint, great elder, sect leader... Pure and cool, invincible, not brainless, with explosive force, absolute IQ, dark belly, good person on the surface, but full of evil. Pull the tiger's skin, pull the banner, and convince people with virtue. Sprinkle lime, knock on the sap, and use skill to break the force. Talking about north and south, talking about east and west, his words are invincible. He became a son-in-law from an immortal family and eventually became a great master. [Smile]

12 宜 After Yi Xiu Was Reborn, Why Did Big Fat Orange Cry? Jiang Mimi's OwnerAncient Romance414k WordsOngoing 8.4kReads—Score920Shelves

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Book recommendation for newcomers! Please recommend, urge for updates, listen, read, and comment~ Now in the recommendation period, 1-2k words are updated every day, and there will be no more updates! After Yi Xiu was reborn, he no longer had a love brain and would never do anything to his children again. Rou Ze will not be written as a pure evil girl. She has made mistakes, and her innocence is not an excuse to hurt others. The sisters will still fight and fight, but it is Yinzhen who really pushes them to tragedy. All women and Yinzhen will eventually be together. From being in love to hating each other, Zhen Huan, Chun Yuan, and Yinzhen will not have a good ending. Can interact with each other

13 重 Reborn as a Sophomore in High School, the Empress' Roommate Has Not Confessed Yet Cute DevilUrban185k WordsOngoing 723Reads—Score—Shelves

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Urban martial arts, love, funny and relaxing

14 欲 Desire for Enlightenment Nangong MeiyueFantastical Romance236k WordsOngoing 1.1kReads7.3Score142Shelves

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[Dragon Mother + Absolutely Beautiful + Picking Up Pregnancy + Pregnancy + Prenatal Transplantation + No CP + Folding Ears + Tunnel Rats + Upgraded Cool Articles + Weird Spirits], the "sweet girl" from Sichuan and Chongqing traveled through a different world, and after she got hairpins, she actually hatched dragon eggs in the Hehuan Sect? Book title: "Desire for the Tao" [What]

15 猎 Hunting Bureau Returns to 2012 XiaotanUrban111k WordsOngoing 83Reads—Score—Shelves

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Urban Rebirth + Shang Zhan Zhi Zhi + Revenge and Revenge were not considered in the series. There is no female protagonist in the series. Gu Yan was pushed down from the twentieth floor by his best brother Zhou Yanbai. Before he fell to his death, Zhou Yanbai said with a smile: "Gu Yan, you are the longest game of chess I have ever played." When he opened his eyes again, he returned to the summer of 2012. Haven't graduated from college yet. Parents are still alive. The "brother" who had ruined his life was smiling at him with a cup of soy milk. In this life, Gu Yan no longer pretends.

16 穿 After Time Travel, Adults Are Always Forced to Follow the Plot Baili RuiAncient Romance292k WordsOngoing 45Reads—Score—Shelves

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It's almost 300,000, but not many people are crying watching it

17 永 Eternal Demon A Continuation of Some InkEastern Fantasy671k WordsOngoing 3.9kReads5.4Score369Shelves

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The traditional cultivation of immortals includes Qi training, foundation building, elixir formation, Nascent Soul, and spirit transformation. The protagonist is decisive in killing, cunning, cold-blooded and ruthless, and will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. There is no system, no heroine, and it is a dark novel without brain damage.

18 命 Destiny Planner Durian Is so ExpensiveUrban147k WordsOngoing —Reads—Score—Shelves

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No one reads more than 100,000 words, who would be worse than me [face covering]

19 瑰 Gesha's Dream Black and White PictureModern Romance162k WordsOngoing 96Reads—Score—Shelves

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👉 Click to read "Gesha's Dream" Twelve years of secret love, one day it was broken. It took him twelve years to make himself worthy enough to go to her. "Everyone in the world knows that it is a marriage of interests. Only I know that this is the beginning of a secret love of twelve years." Her name is Xiao Ruohua, 985 Master of Laws, assistant judge of the Municipal Intermediate Court. For eight years in the Chu family, she hid her edge, kept her eyebrows low, and became a stepdaughter who was "unable to take action". His name is Su Youli, the eldest son of Su, and a rising star in the business circle. In everyone's eyes, he was Chu Yanqing's fiancé - a well-matched marriage of interests. No one knew that he had liked her since the summer of his sophomore year in high school. No one knew that he had been giving away that bunch of green chrysanthemums for twelve full years. No one knew that he had laid out a long chess game just to let her come to him innocently. He is not a domineering president, he is a coward who only dared to approach after being guarded for twelve years. She is not Cinderella, she is a sonorous rose who is sober and independent and never attached. This is not a marriage between a wealthy family, but a man's long-term forbearance and careful planning in exchange for the qualification to love her openly and honestly. ,

20 大 Dao Tianjiao Returns to the Doomsday Earth Ng LiuliEastern Fantasy143k WordsOngoing 373Reads—Score—Shelves

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[Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

21 三 Three Corpse Language Luo XiaoyangMystery1.1M WordsOngoing 75.3kReads9.3Score10.6kShelves

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There is no contract, 80,000 words have passed and it is still deserted, and there are no comments. Is it poorly written? [Almost crying]

22 私 After the Private School Closed Down: Bringing the System to Educate the Heavens Talking About Old ThingsMystery531k WordsCompleted 6Reads7.1Score—Shelves

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Hello everyone, a newbie is here to report [laughing] The first book at the beginning was written by me, and the other few are masterpieces in my opinion! I hope everyone can provide guidance and evaluation [asking for attention][asking for attention][asking for attention]

23 参 Participating in the Boat Crossing the Dust Record Dongmen Old DogEastern Fantasy154k WordsOngoing 56Reads—Score—Shelves

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Friends, please pay attention~Thank you very much

24 山 Mountain Wolf Ye Xiaozhou, One of the Vast SeasHistorical113k WordsCompleted 4Reads—Score—Shelves

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The first one was written by me, and I think it's pretty good, with some data! The other three books are very successful, so they can be considered bundled to gain popularity.

27 十 Ten Days of Hunting Da MingfuUrban245k WordsCompleted 22Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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"Hunting in Ten Days", are you a coward? Prey? White rat?

28 盛 The Great Medical Detective Xiaoyao LingziAncient Romance393k WordsOngoing 13Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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Recommend a good book, watch the heroine write a legendary life on her way to counterattack, it is worth recommending!

29 人 People Are in Fantasy, but They Become the Savior of the Common People Cold PineEastern Fantasy244k WordsCompleted 2Reads—Score—Shelves

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Mengxin's first book, 170,000 words, was conceived for nearly half a year. It is a traditional fantasy. I think the writing and rhythm may be lacking, but the story is still good. I have been single-player for so long and my mentality is about to explode. I really want to continue writing. I hope someone can give me some encouragement.

30 空 What Is a Cavity Disaster? I'm the Hollow Knight! Sunshine Color Red Little Ika70k WordsOngoing 422Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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I just signed a contract and have only written 30,000 words. Could you please give me some advice?

32 新 Winter in the Fertile Crescent Ming Ye LanEastern Fantasy125k WordsOngoing 2Reads—Score—Shelves

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It's not even 80,000 words long. No one is reading it. I want to cut out a copy.

33 神 The Supernaturally Gifted Tiancan TudouEastern Fantasy312k WordsOngoing 1.8MReads9.2Score198.9kShelves

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Recommended fantasy novels

35 穿 Crossing the Underworld, What Does It Mean to Be Scolded by the Guilty Bag at the Beginning? Seventy-Eight Treasure Porridge133k WordsOngoing 394Reads5.8Score188Shelves

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The first one is my own, a funny article written by a fan of Bengtie. Please read it...[I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend][I also strongly recommend]

37 秦 Chronicles of Qin Dynasty Painting and DyeingEastern Fantasy214k WordsOngoing 13Reads—Score—Shelves

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Signed, made debut, data is deserted and binary [almost crying]

38 不 After I Stop Being a Clown, I Work as a Temporary Worker for the Underworld King of Hell. Dreams Come TrueUrban45k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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The first book is by a new author. I think it is well written, with detailed descriptions, a single female protagonist and a group portrait. It is worth reading and has a great world view. The world view of the second book is smaller, but it is absolutely a masterpiece.

40 沙 Sea of ​​Sand: Sleeping Together in the Abyss Yunzhichuan406k WordsCompleted 668Reads8.0Score105Shelves

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Written in 16 words.

41 谍 Spy Codename I Am Waste Barbed Wire Not Hot in WinterUrban2.8M WordsCompleted 207.4kReads9.5Score19.9kShelves

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The first new book has 120,000 words written, but not many people are following it yet. Time travel, fantasy, tomb robbing. But now it has been taken off the shelves in the book desert. You can only search the book title in the book store or click on my homepage. The title of the book is "Tomb Raider Notes: Restart", and the author is Bang Bang Bang Bang Rama IV. This is a long novel, no matter what, I will continue writing it!

43 十 Twelve Cave Ridge Night CharmMystery81k WordsOngoing —Reads5.8Score—Shelves

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The first one is mine, and the rest are basically pretty good too. I also have a supernatural novel. If you are interested, can you read it? Thank you! New author. We are all ordinary people. Please support me! Thanks!