Hogwarts: The Obscurial's Redemption

I have watched too many childhood sweethearts, but I like to watch this kind of strategy from scratch [smile][smile][smile] Blessed are those who like to watch the cultivation series [smile][smile] The pace may be a bit slow in the early stage, but it is all laying the groundwork to make the subsequent psychological changes reasonable.

Make an objective evaluation of this book (I've only read Chapter 44 so far) So far, there are basically no poisonous points. The plot is biased toward daily life. The author has not made much innovation in the plot. Of course, there is very little plot advancement now. Although the author is quite good in daily descriptions and the emotional lines are okay, I hope the author will still be more innovative in the plot and write some different feelings. If you keep following the mainstream plot, it will be very boring in the later stages and it is easy to get aesthetic fatigue. , The original work of Harry Potter, also has many unfilled holes or flawed plots, such as the mysterious door in the Ministry of Magic and the curtain of death, Strylin's Chamber of Secrets, and the idiot professor in the second grade (in my opinion, the plot in the second grade is flawed. Perhaps the author Rowling did not consider it well at the time. A student learned from a top student. The students who graduated from the college were unable to deal with elves, but they could successfully attack so many brave adventurous wizards. I feel that the author could expand this and explain that Dumbledore threatened him with evidence and asked him to serve as Defense Against the Dark Arts professor to deliberately disgust Harry and stop him from being obsessed with fame and glory). All in all, this book is relatively rare in Tomato. If you like daily life, you can read it.

A really good book Compared with traditional HP novels, there are no systems or time-travelers in this book, but simple natives who are friends with Draco and have childhood sweethearts. In addition to the main plot, they also have their own independent background and story, and the plot with the heroine is also interesting. It makes me feel warm. Although I have already guessed the subsequent development of the story when the background is revealed, it still makes people read. I hope the author will add the clothes delivery link at the beginning of the story to key chapters. It will be the finishing touch. I look forward to new updates [Please update]

So far, it's pretty good. The protagonist is an indigenous person who doesn't know his identity. He has a kind-hearted character, but has a dark underbelly. The plot is generally more daily, focusing more on the emotional line with Hermione. It's not an invincible novel. The protagonist's strength is only on par with Malfoy and the others. , The mastery of Obscurus will definitely improve quickly in the future, but so far it is an ordinary little genius type. The only thing that stood out to me was the emotional line with Hermione. Finally, there is no such thing as childhood sweethearts who like each other right away. This is still very good. I still recommend this book to those who like to watch emotional dramas.

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Encourage the author, don't let you run away. The author can actually slow down the pace. He can create some original plots or add some herbal types using the herbs in Xiu Xian. Hermione and Julian can have more interactions.

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Four stars first. I hope the author doesn't have a Chinese title in this book. I came to read Harry Potter's British-style novels, not Chinese-style campus romance novels [face covering] Well, the author still stays true to his original intention and maintains his own Chinese campus romance Harry Potter style, but it is relatively better than the previous book, probably because the protagonist is now in the same grade as the protagonist group. Readers who can accept Chinese-style titles and books that are very close to our country can read [face covering]

I ask again, isn't pure bloodism the Nazis?

Woc, the writing is so good, I stayed up all night to read it without realizing it. Just too little. I hope the author won't get lost halfway. If I keep writing at this level, I will probably be able to maintain a score of 9 or above by the end.