Hogwarts: The Little Lion in Ravenclaw's Clothing

The single heroine Hermione's emotional line is well written, neither abrupt nor embarrassing. It's not like other writings that are pretentious, savage, or a bit emotionally invasive, but the emotional line only begins to develop from the 20th to 30th chapter. 🤦 And in terms of combat power, the first grade can almost beat the third grade in the first few months of school. The combat power is just right for the current Tomato, neither too strong nor too weak. 😏👍 In summary, the author wrote very well. This is the second most beautiful HP article I have read so far. For the sake of my reward, author, can you give me 10 sticks a day? [Smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] Second brush 😢😢😭😭

To be honest, among the many HP fanfics I have read, this is an outstanding one. The process of the protagonist's participation in the main plot is designed very smoothly and does not give me any sense of abruptness. It is like it is natural and should be like this. Moreover, the emotional line of this book has also been greatly improved compared to the previous book. The relationship between Hermione and the protagonist does not have the feeling of separation as in other novels. I really like the transition and development of the emotional line in this novel. It took a long time, and I experienced several interruptions in the middle. I have completed this journey with a lot of stumbling. Congratulations to John and Hermione on finding the life they wanted. I also wish the author better and better writing and five-star praise.

It's good to read, I recommend it. I hope the author can solve the problem of Hermione having to free the elves when she becomes the heroine. The winner is the king and the loser is the bandit. Stop liberating the elves. Respect is okay, but liberation is not.

It's a pity that there is only one female protagonist Luna appeared before Hermione and had more scenes (Hermione only officially started playing after more than thirty chapters). If I hadn't known about the single heroine Hermione in advance, I would have thought it would be a single heroine Luna or a double heroine. The hero saved the beauty once before. It's a pity that it's not a dual heroine of Luna and Hermione.

It can be seen that the author's writing has become better after the accumulation of the previous book. The protagonist still has the style of Kevin from the previous book. The pace is comfortable and Hermione's emotional development is also very good. The author has changed the cover, but the blue cloak is still there

I asked why there was a familiar flavor in the writing. It turned out to be you (whose wizard duels with a crowbar)? It's also your book. I love it. Come on, author, and write more warm and daily life!!! My little gifts will keep coming!!!

I finally got to the end of it. I have read both of the author's books. I personally think this book is much better than the previous one, but why is the rating lower? The setting of the heroine being a senior is really novel, and the emotional line is very natural, especially the part where they are confused together, and you can fully see the greenness of first love. Although the emotional line of the supporting character is not detailed, the flaws are not concealed. In short, everyone has a bright future. This is what I want to say to the author. I look forward to the next work. I believe it will get better and better.

It's very interesting. I accidentally clicked on the author's homepage and discovered that Crowbar is also yours. That book is also on my bookshelf. They are both very interesting. However, when the title of this book is Hermione and Luna, it's a bit uncomfortable to add a sister at the end ( Such as Sister Hermione, Sister Luna), even though I wear it, I am not used to it. My personal idea is to remove this sister. The other plots are very smooth and comfortable to watch, so it is still a five-star ୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨

It's very comfortable to watch, the pace is a little slow, and the emotional aspect is well written, but I want Luna too😭

It's okay, it's okay. When will the protagonist's combat power be mentioned? I want to see the battle be fun.