Hogwarts: Starting with a Blank Slate, I Begin Adding Talent Points

The text is excellent, the plot is exciting, and it has its own original design. He is not Harry's follower, but a real protagonist. It smoothes away the regrets of the original story (and has the protagonist's inner activities, like a real person), and incorporates some other elements. Even if you open your eyes, you will not know the plot arrangement. As soon as I finished writing it, it ranked first in my heart. The latest chapter is so affectionate, and it completely captures the power of love in the original work.

This is not an innocent fairy tale but it is full of beauty. It is not a grand epic but it is equally shocking. It has the sophistication of the original work but occasionally goes off the line. It has the tragedy of the movie but it is always satisfactory. The legend needs to be proved. This is the author's proof. It is absolute gold.

Well, here are a few updated pictures for you. I have never heard of them before. It's fun for me to see. Everyone raised their staffs. This reminds me of the last part of Fantastic Beasts. Mr. Nico's all curses are final. It's okay 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰

I don't understand why the rating is so low, but I really think the author has written it very well. The plot is interlocking, there are many foreshadowings and they are all filled in. There is no problem with the logic. The character of the protagonist is also very three-dimensional. I don't understand why some people call the protagonist a virgin. But if you read it carefully, you will not think that the protagonist is a virgin. I hope the author can write some extras [sending my heart]

I once warned hp authors not to play with time. Not only that, there are many things in this article that go against my principles. But there is a saying that either you don't do it or you never do it. The structural design is really clever, and the climax is climactic enough. Some places gave me the special feeling I had when reading the original novel when the truth was revealed. That's enough.

Although it has the feeling of reading an outline, and the writing style has the stiff and incoherent feeling of Japanese light novels translated into Chinese. But at least (the beginning, I haven't seen the back part yet, I don't know if it is artificial or not) it is artificial, and the author did not use hate intelligence 🙂 Okay... The author started to use hate intelligence in Chapter 40 or 50... I know it is really convenient, but... Alas...

Tomato is a rare example of living humanities, which is very precious in the current environment where AI articles are everywhere. The pace is a little fast, and sometimes it jumps to the next scene and the next thing without any transition, but the feeling of reading it is not bad. It has the feeling of a light novel from the country next door. Overall, it is very good. I like it very much. I hope the author will pay more attention to the detailed distribution in the future. Come on, I highly recommend it! ! !

Although it is not a very good HP article, I can feel that the author wrote it carefully.

It's pretty good, the writing has a bit of a literary flair, and the protagonist's character is quite fleshed out.

Although I really only wanted to give it four stars, I still gave it five stars. After all, this is one of the few Harry Potter fanfics that is pretty good. At least it can be considered a good source of food, maybe? As long as the prerequisites are maintained and the holes are filled, nothing will happen. Generally speaking, the poisonous points are there, at least they didn't poison me. Maybe it's because some good books I've found recently are being serialized. I'm still willing to give this book some encouragement. Come on, author, please update soon.