Teaching in the Harry Potter Universe

It's very interesting [laughing] As a loyal heroine of Hermione, I think it's very interesting, but I would suggest that the age doesn't need to be that old and can be made younger than 15 years old. Of course, I'm just a suggestion. [Laughing evilly][like] Then there is the idiot duo. In fact, there is no need to shamelessly stick to it. After all, Hermione actually has her own social circle, right? [Eating Melon] But I think the author actually wanted to show that Ron would be like the original when he wrote Ron's conflict? [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] Are you jealous because of the protagonist? But isn't it a little early? After all, Ron's relationship was probably in the 3 or 4 original novels? I don't know what the author said, after all, everyone understands [eating melon] However, I currently feel that the protagonist's B is not pretending enough [smile][smile][smile] Besides, don't you mind if there are too many B's (I am referring to the B who is pretending to be B) Overall, I like it quite a lot, and the setting is also quite interesting [smile][smile][smile] I will give it a 4 points first so that the author will not be proud.

Not bad, very good, but the introduction said that there is a single heroine, but it is too close to Qiu Zhang. I thought it was just a character to increase Hermione's sense of crisis.

The protagonist is 16 and Hermione is 8, so I need to feed some 7 and 62, right?

70% - 80% AI writing,

It was originally four stars, but after counting the minor flaws, I decided to give it three stars. The reason is that it is better than most Hermione heroine stories on Tomato. There are no major flaws, but many minor ones, including: 1. The protagonist says he is invincible but does not show any signs of it. This may be because the protagonist is a peripheral character in the main line. Seeing that the protagonist asked Qiu Zhang to call her by her real name, Malfoy's attitude towards the protagonist made it seem that the protagonist not only has no professor airs, but is even a bit out of character. 2. The protagonist's personality problem is very strange. He is too divided and too humble. Another chicken intestine? The latest update and Hermione's entanglement made me feel sick to my stomach, including the decision to take revenge on the students later, which made me feel that the protagonist is a little mentally unfamiliar. 3. The daily life is a bit poisonous, including picking up squirrels and robberies. I agree that the protagonist and Hermione have no magic at all. You can say that Hermione If Trace Silk cannot be used, then the protagonist is a professor, so he cannot use magic casually. So if McGonagall and other professors meet Death Eaters outside, they cannot use magic, right? Besides, don't you know how to use thunder? I want to ask, even if you don't want Hermione to worry, why don't you just explain it? .

Personally, I feel pretty good about it, but I think it might be a little weird to combine one person with Harry Potter, but that's okay. (It depends on the future plot. Generally speaking, it is very good. By the way, will the male protagonist's memory confusion be restored in the future?)

I don't quite understand what the author wants to write about. Hermione has to be the main protagonist. The male protagonist's role is sporadic. It would be more interesting to write about the daily relationship between the male protagonist and Hermione. Now it's neither fish nor fowl.

"Sweet Love" [face covering]

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If the protagonist doesn't know the plot, just assume that he doesn't know the plot. Every time he remembers something after it happens, it feels like the useless protagonist is just trying to make up the numbers.