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A talented author who can't write anything these days
Lord Farming is the only protagonist.
No one has such business acumen. I thought about the transaction endorsement for a long time and couldn't think of a better solution.
What is the use of experience? Ahhhhhhh
After I finished speaking, I laughed while listening to a novel.
Recently, I have started to talk about something, and everyone knows about the God of Dayan.
I said it was a cool novel, but it didn't make me happy at all. It made me have high blood pressure. The pig's feet forcibly reduced my intelligence. After the 300th chapter, it became more and more cool.
You can be obscene if you have a problem, but don't be submissive and accept it as you should. You are the author. Don't you just make up whoever you want to kill? I don't understand if I can't accept this or that in the comment section. Don't make me laugh, okay?
I don't understand. Could it be that the author still thinks Flanders is a good person?
I don't understand why the author wrote about Shrek's origin. It has no connection with what follows. Could it be that I was afraid that the protagonist would not be able to defeat the Shrek Seven Devils in the future, so I got to know him in advance (my imagination is wide open). Then there's the protagonist's unusual respect for Fred, which I don't understand either. Could it be that the author thinks Flanders is a good person? The college he opened admitted fifty or sixty people and graduated more than a dozen without refunding the registration fee. These are all trivial matters, and I admit it by resorting to any means necessary. He told the Shrek Seven Devils that he was unwilling to accept funding from his aristocratic grandfather (expressing his contempt for the aristocrats). In the end, wasn't Shrek the aristocratic academy? The most difficult thing is his dog-licking attribute (he actually matches the person he likes with others), which can kill a fly with my eyebrows. Apart from other things, Tang Shenwang Douyi barely looked like a human in the early stage (he just got sick at every turn), and overall he was still on the alert. Look at what he did in the later period. He won the war and immediately put away the hidden weapon, saying that he did not want to cause unnecessary killing. Qibao is a hidden weapon that I bought directly. Not to mention Dou 2, using his daughter's soul to plot against others. Can you find out whether Tang San in 1.2 Is a different person? Do you know whose shadow I see in Tang San? He is worthy of being Shrek, the strong man of double standards and the owl of calculation. It can be said that Flanders is as defiant as Gangzi (ps: he has not surpassed the jar)
What a fucking idiot. If you don't grab the resources, you won't cash them in. If you don't grab the resources, you won't accept them. If you don't grab the opportunities, everyone won't save them. If you don't have money, don't grab the opportunities, just practice cultivation. It's a lot of money. If Meiyan goes to get it in advance, you will have money, and there will be thunder spirit seeds. If you do it with the scaly skin monster mother, you will have wind spirit seeds. In the end, you don't do anything, and you are envious of Mo Fan. You also said that you don't remember the plot. You should sort out your memory as soon as you wear it. It's a waste of money.
It was okay in the front, but it sucked in the back. In the end, it was a mess, and Qing Lin paid the wrong price.
Can't the pace be faster? Why do authors who write about Tenmu Ryu have to be so watery about their subject matter? It was only after Chapter 19 that I reached seventh place.
A bit long-winded, but quite interesting, or very interesting.
Good looking! ! ! Come on, wife of the author
Why does this article feel so familiar to me?
I don't know why, but I hid the cause of my brother's death from my father.
The books that are free for members do not last long enough to require free chapters for members. Samsung is just trying to get into the evaluation system, it's really a piece of cake
It feels like it's going to be popular. I remember someone wrote a book where you can choose your own soul skills.
From Kuaishou, (dog head dog head dog head
Are they two heroines? Which brother can reply?
There is no level that determines the power of ninjutsu. It is the immortal body and the chakra of Asura. The chakra is enough for C-level ninjutsu to be able to perform S-level forbidden jutsu. The author is really a treasure critic.
Update: I read two chapters in one day and read it in one second
hang small
It's rare to see such a small hook, even less
The number of words is too small, why not continue to update?
Personally, I don't think there is any big problem, but the various behaviors of the male protagonist are a bit difficult to say. The male protagonist is very stressed and overreacts when encountering various things, just like Hakimi, which is a bit weird anyway.
Accept all female characters, you must accept them all
The golden elixir of the Demon Sect can defeat the transformation of mortals, and the foundation can last for five lifetimes. No matter how you look at it, it will collapse.
25DAY丨Advice
Go through the dungeon with Ah Wu, and you can just have some fun. Don't make Ah Wu angry or unhappy, everyone is friends~
It's more of an obscenity than a fanfic. I personally prefer the harem, but to be honest, it's perfect, Zhe Tian. There is no need to accept too many characters in this kind of world, especially low-level characters, because in a world like Zhe Tian's grand world view, there will always be female characters. Ye Fan, Weiwei, Yan, etc. Ruyu, Qin Yao, Ji Ziyue, etc. Appeared, An Miaoyi, Yao Xi, Fenghuang, the major saints in the four poles of the Dao Palace, the ancient princess in Xiantai, Yi Qingwu in Ziwei from outside the territory, the Yueshi Fairy in Starry Sky Ancient Road, etc. There are too many women to count, many female characters have average talents, average backgrounds, and not special looks. Don't stand out. It doesn't do any good to the protagonist from a profit perspective. Most of the original novels have become strangers in the later stages, which is completely cumbersome. From the plot point of view, there is not much writing. Many readers even have no impression of some female characters. In addition, the dark background of the series "Zhe Tian", if you start with Ye Fan, then the protagonist will be the same. Generally speaking, you need to have the cultivation speed of two hundred years of enlightenment. How can such a speed give you the time to fall in love with ordinary female characters? You must find someone with a background and talent who can help with training in the early stage and can barely keep up in the later stage, such as Xia Jiuyou, Yan Ruyu, Golden Goddess, Huo Lin'er, Wanlong Princess, etc. Those who have their own background or imperial soldiers and have talents, such as Weiwei who has the ability and talent to easily cultivate, such as Yi Qingwu and An Miaoyi who clearly say that their appearance is particularly top-notch, and even Princess Shencan, Tianxuan Saint who is strong and can protect the Tao in the early stage, and the remaining Heavenly Saints such as the Purple Mansion Saint and the Yaochi Saint The talent is okay, the background is also acceptable, and she is barely qualified. Finally, Ji Ziyue, Qin Yao, and Xia Yilin have average talents and average status and background. Qin Yao is the most attractive, and has no other advantages except for her appearance. Ji Ziyue, Xia Yilin, can be said to be the daughter of the emperor and the patriarch, but in fact she only needs more love every day. , No matter what she is used for in important matters, her talent is average, and her appearance is average. Being able to become a heroine depends entirely on sharing the hardships with the protagonist when she was weak, such as Ji Ziyue in the original work, but she is also involved, and it is troublesome to get involved. She is not even a little bit different from the top female characters who appeared in the later period. Ye Fan in the original work is step by step Growing up, Ji Ziyue is a heroine who shares adversity and is normal, but the protagonist of a fan, especially a passionate fantasy like Zhetian Perfect, who knows the world view, opportunities and dangers, shouldn't they make leaps and bounds, practice as quickly as possible to become stronger, and start a harem with the goal of being a top female character?
The author would like to give a small suggestion. I have read novels of this type before. He paid for membership. The chapters I reviewed earlier were very well written and attractive, and not too verbose. But when it comes to the paid chapters, things change. Dozens of chapters can be written about one of Ye Fan's small moves in Luo Liba. One chapter only involves Ye Fan punching him, and the rest is just one comment from this person and another comment from that person. I paid to read dozens of chapters with sentence review. I'm tired, so I stopped watching it. In the past two days, I saw that you were clean and tidy in the front, so I kept catching up with you. But I saw that there is a trend in this regard in the back. As for Ye Fan's calamity in the third life, Ye Fan moved, and the rest are dialogues from other great emperors and ancient emperors. Of course, this is just a suggestion, and there is no other malicious intention. I still give you five stars and support you. I have been following the update for three days and I can actually give you a monthly pass. However, I am very disappointed with what I see every day. Shui Diabai will not give it to you.
This plot is quite interesting. If you like it, please urge me to update it. If the author doesn't update it, I will send you a razor blade😎😎
To be honest, it's really interesting to read the introduction. You can keep following the updates.
Outrageous
It's outrageous to come all the way here just to borrow 1,000 low-grade spiritual stones. These spiritual stones are too precious.
25DAY丨About Advice
If I want to give one piece of advice to players and NPCs who are in the same dungeon as Si Wu, it should be that everything goes according to our Si Wu and she should answer everything she wants to know. Don't question us Si Wu casually, and don't provoke Si Wu.
Otherwise, the author should write a ten thousand times increase. This 1-10 times increase feels weird.
The little medical fairy is dead... Is the poisonous body of the poisonous body completely gone?
[25DAY丨Please write a piece of advice for players/NPCs who do not have the same copy as Si]
Advice to Er Er: 'Er Er, you have to be strong, no one in this world can help you, you can only get out of the predicament by yourself; also, hold Si Wu's thigh tight😑'
25DAY丨Advice
Please treat our Siwu children with enthusiasm and have the vision to make friends. This will affect your life and death.
I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Posting it will make you jealous, wouldn't you envy me? Are you jealous?
I have read this book several times and I like it very much. I hope the author is in good health and creates more similar works.
The writing at the beginning was not good, some paragraphs were very long, and the punctuation was not correct, but the later words were corrected. But overall, the article makes readers emotionally ups and downs, and the part where emotions are harvested is not very good. Some places are too descriptive. The most important thing is the beginning. The sense of substitution is not very good. Although most people have watched Douluo, most people who watched Douluo have been watching it for a long time. I think you can explain some key characters and key plots appropriately. If the title of your book is eye-catching, but the title of your book is completely missing from your introduction, what I mean is that your introduction has absolutely nothing to do with the title of your book. And I feel that your plug-in is not well designed. Not only does the introduction not reflect your appearance, but the plug-in in your main text also does not feel very prominent. I have read about fifty chapters now, and your plug-in has also changed several times in order to better fit the main plot. At present, those who write about Douluo are all based on Tang San, but I feel that you have not expressed it well. There is no emotional tension between the words you write, and it feels really flat. The conflict between Tang San and the protagonist doesn't feel very big. Moreover, the overall introduction feels a bit bland, especially at the end of the introduction, which has no hook and is unattractive.
25DAY丨Write a piece of advice
Follow the boss and reach the top. If you disobey the boss, your butt will be beaten to pieces. Stay away from the big guys and nothing will happen. Rage against the big boss, the ancestral graves cannot be saved, and the corpses are in pieces.
[25DAY丨Please write a piece of advice for players/NPCs who do not have the same copy as Si.
Our Si Wu'a just looks irritable, but if you really want to try to mess with her, I can only wish you good luck.
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The author will try to adjust the time difference tonight~ If you really can't sleep, get up and type. If you fall asleep, you'll update during the day tomorrow. Don't worry, everyone. Updates will not be discontinued. Thank you for your support from good friends who have votes.
The writing is really good, and the most important thing is that you get free chapters.
25DAY丨The twentieth day of check-in
25. Cherish life and follow Siwu. Those who rebel against the company will perish, and those who obey the company will prosper. Please use your spirit of unity and friendship and do not fight or kill.
[25DAY丨Please write a piece of advice for players/NPCs who do not have the same copy as Si.
"Don't mess with that cutie in a light pink coat. The pinker she wears, the more violent the fight will be. She's crazier than the monster in the copy."
I read in the comment section that I read another work and it looked too similar at the beginning. However, regardless of the setting of the previous book, this one is pretty good.
Isn't there an evil god? What's he doing? I personally feel that Huzi and Longzi are at the same level. They are both of the same God King bloodline and have bug skills. Ditian has Dragon God's Claws, and Huzi has Arena of Life and Death, but this male protagonist seems like he has never seen a woman before.
25DAY丨Advice
Advice to the NPCs in Si Wu's dungeon - stay away from Si Wu, otherwise you will become unlucky.
Licking a dog will lead to a bad death. If you like to watch dogs licking, you can watch it