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You, a Chengdu-Chongqing author, can just write some northern stories. The key is the place names. I am really speechless. Even though Hong Kong has returned to China, I still don't dare to write about it. I'm also dizzy.

The preface does not match the postscript!
The preface does not match the postscript, and the names of people change! The plot is full of loopholes: The eldest son was abducted by his grandmother when he was full moon. On the way to chase him, he didn't return home all night, so his husband suspected that the third daughter was a bastard? ! This timeline is too ridiculous! There are a lot of logical loopholes: What was the situation in the country in 1930, so that a country peasant woman could control a high official (a big warlord)? His wife who just gave birth to a baby was tricked out of the hospital, killed and snatched away the baby? ! She has been abused so much since she was a child, but she still allows her to study? ! Still in high school? How old are you from elementary school to high school? From 7 or 8 years old to 15 or 16 years old? ! From 1937 to 1945, it was still the period of the Anti-Japanese War. Where in the countryside could there be books? ! There are just too many poisonous points! I can't stand it. I can't stand it!

It's great. The most exciting part is the beginning of the organization of the "Village Super League", and the "give and take" is also very well described.

Fantasy stories are the result of big brains
This is the result of the big brain opening up! A cloud can be turned into a fairy cloud, this is amazing! And it is even more novel that this auspicious cloud can have its own thoughts and wills, and it has evolved into an impulsive and ominous situation for seven generations... Tsk, tsk, tsk, it can be seen that impulse is the devil, impulse is the devil!

The writing is very good, but the updates are too slow. Why did you stop updating?

I don't know what the psychology is, but there are only a few patterns in Douyi. Either he can crush them all to death, or his strength can hold him back. If he waits for Tang Shenwang to rise, everyone who is not Tang Shenwang's younger brother and domestic slave will die. No one can survive.

Update quickly. The author is addicted to reading. Please update me Chapter 180.

Ye Lingling is so miserable, and she still wants to live in a black family. The author is not a human being. Even if she wins in the finale, she still loses the key point. Is there any connection between Rakshasa God and Jiuxin Haitang?

Take a look at [url=bn]Gu Yuena[/url] and find out her true level
Green garlic Gu Yuena looks oppressive but is actually tasteless Just two mechanisms, space blockade Elemental Thunder Tribulation Original text: His body is still hanging in the air. At this moment, only he and she can move, and his body slowly falls to the ground. -- With Tang Wulin's cultivation level, he was unable to move in an instant. It was the core of the Dragon God that flew out and immobilized him. -- He held Gu Yuena with one arm and waved the other hand in the air. Suddenly, the previously solidified time and space shattered, and everyone became able to move. -- Conclusion: With four calculations, Gu Yuena is 119, Tang Wulin is 117, 117 Tang Wulin can ignore the space blockade and break it with one hand, and 119 Gu uses the core of Dragon God to control Tang Wulin. Next, let's take a look at Tang Wulin's Dragon King's forbidden method. Original text: The Dragon King breaks all forbidden laws! With his cultivation as a half-step god king at this time, he was able to restrain the Crimson Mother in a short period of time, creating opportunities for the two leaders. -- The darkness between heaven and earth was felt not only by the Demon King, but also by all the creatures present. To ban the world is to ban the entire plane. Not only the Far North, but almost the entire Douluo Continent is shrouded in darkness. -- Conclusion: The space blockade alone cannot lock 117 Tang Wulin, but the Dragon Emperor's forbidden method can control Crimson alone. In groups, the Dragon Emperor's forbidden method controls almost the entire Douluo Continent. The Dragon Emperor's forbidden method is comprehensive > space blockade. Next, liquidate the elemental thunder tribulation. Original text: When he released the thunder tribulation, his body also suffered similar power, but Xian relied on the elemental stripping to greatly weaken the destructive power of the God of Annihilation to himself. -- The pain caused to him by the seven-element explosion was not too intense. The powerful defense of the four-character battle armor, coupled with the stress reaction of his own dragon gang, -- Conclusion: Dou Si knows that Elemental Thunder Tribulation will also deduct blood by itself, so Gu Yuena's attack on Crimson is just a support, because she can't bear it, and even if it is weakened, it will only deduct blood. The Silver Dragon King's body is far inferior to that of the Golden Dragon King, and in terms of single-target attacks, Elemental Thunder Tribulation has contributed to the record of defeating Tang Wulin. But Gu Yuena, who competed in martial arts to recruit a bride, was 99. Tang Wulin was still an ordinary titled Douluo, and he also suffered from the short CD of the Dragon Emperor's forbidden spells. Later, the CD of the Dragon Emperor's forbidden spells made great progress. In the sixth move, the priest destroyed most of the body of the second-level sacred monarch. Original text: At this time, Dragon King Po is much more mature. That's why he was able to use it in such a short period of time -- In the palm of his hand, a strange vortex surged wildly, swallowing up the violent elemental storm completely. It is the Dragon King's forbidden law, which prohibits all laws, and the Dragon King breaks it! -- With the golden dragon body, coupled with the Golden Dragon King's true body and Dragon Gang's protective body, most of the explosive power was eliminated. Moreover, he himself was constantly baptized by elemental thunder tribulations during the process of heavenly forging, and he was favored by the plane, so the direct damage caused by elemental explosions to him was somewhat weakened. Therefore, although he looked embarrassed, in fact, he was not really injured. Seven big fissions exploded on his face, and the entire competition stage was already filled with a dazzling colorful halo. At this time, Gu Yuena finally paused as if she wanted to take a breath. -- The Demon King's eyes flashed with light, "I didn't expect that you have reached this level. When did the Spirit Transferring Tower actually have the existence of a god? If I feel correctly, you have already reached the god level. It's just that you are under the pressure of the plane and cannot use your god-level power. -- The Holy Lord of the Abyss lowered his head and looked at his body, which had been broken by the Dragon King's radiance for most of his body. The smile on his face became even stronger. -- Conclusion: In terms of output, the Elemental Thunder Tribulation deducted one's health. In performance, 99 Gu Yuena defeated 93 Tang Wulin before winning with one hit. 99 Gu clearly mentioned in the battle of the abyss a year later that he had already entered the divine world. Here is 100 Gu beating 93 Tang to 99. Wulin, seven seven-element fission cannot break the defense of 93 Tang Wulin. He can only use elemental thunder tribulation. However, Tang Wulin's sky forging can increase elemental resistance and physical strength, weaken the damage of thunder tribulation and temper the body. The further to the back, the lower the damage caused by elemental thunder tribulation to Tang Wulin. Later, in the state of the priest, the Dragon Emperor's forbidden method destroyed most of the body of the second-level sacred king, and the ordinary title Tang Wulin Dragon Emperor's forbidden method was effective on 99 peak Gu Yuena, but the CD was short, and the CD came up later, and whether it was the ending or the contest to recruit a bride, Gu Yuena Yuena's seven elements were never able to cause much damage to Tang Wulin, so she could only use Thunder Tribulation, but the Thunder Tribulation deducted his health bar. However, the more Heavenly Forging Tang Wulin became, the more resistant he became to Thunder Tribulation. At the end of Dou San, Tang Wulin's elemental resistance would only be stronger than that of the martial arts match. Gu Yuena is essentially just relying on her half-step to the full realm of the God King to rest on her laurels. When Dou Si becomes the goddess of life, she clearly mentions that she is an auxiliary. Dou San relies on the dragon god core to break the Wuding storm. Original text: At this moment, the core of the Dragon God above Gu Yuena's head suddenly fell downwards, and her eyes were suddenly rendered into rich nine colors... The silver dragon spear in Gu Yuena's hand stabbed out, and she picked it lightly on the golden halos. -- Their cultivation can also reach the level of half-step god king. Even Tang Wulin's cultivation has taken a step forward and entered the realm of half-step god king. This is Gu Yuena's most powerful power, the Silver Dragon King's cosmic origins! -- Under the cosmic origin of Silver Dragon King's core evolutionary magic skill, she mobilizes the power of the universe, using herself as the base point to amplify her partners. At this time, she was like an auxiliary soul master, but the increased power was so huge -- Conclusion: Gu Yuena feels so oppressive just after watching it, and after careful analysis, she feels particularly flattering. 100 Ancient Seventh Elemental Fission, which was suppressed to 99, could not break through 93 Tang Wulin. He could only use Thunder Tribulation to bully Tang Wulin, whose CD was short. But later, Tang Wulin's CD came up, and because of the resistance to the Sky Forging Elements, Gu Yuena's space blockade field was unable to lock 117 Tang Wulin under the level of suppression, and was broken by the latter with one hand. Gu Yuena relies solely on the complete realm + dragon god core to fry fish

There is no golden chapter three, there is no golden chapter ten
It's all garbage daily plots that have nothing to do with the wizarding system. This is the bad book model.

Wow, this is pretty well written, but I don't really like it because I'm from the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus family. But now I feel that I can change my mind, because there is no such bloody plot where the protagonist is an orphan and is bullied by others, and he is a waste, or has parents, and the parents don't like him. I just don't know what the author's protagonist will do to the family if he finds the fairy grass? In fact, I hope not to give them fairy grass, because if it is not the protagonist, but a time traveler, and becomes such a waste, they will not care about the protagonist. Why should the protagonist give fairy grass to them? And those elders are not good things, but the protagonist was born in this family. Good things should be given to his father. The Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Rex family is benevolent to the protagonist, and the protagonist's parents are still directly related to his mother or his parents' friends, friends, and close relatives. However, when the Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus Rex family is destroyed by Wuhun Palace later, the protagonist can protect them. It will take a long time anyway. How big will Bibi Dongcai be in the future? How old was Yuxiao just now? But I really don't want the protagonist to give these to those family members after finding the grass jelly, because it would be too wasteful to give them to them. If they find it, will they give it to the protagonist? It's simply impossible. Will it give the protagonist parents? Definitely for his own family, so I hope that the protagonist will not be one of those bad good guys. The protagonist can grow up and protect them for a while. Because the protagonist has been arrogant and protected by his parents, the kindness he has received is from his parents, not from the Blue Lightning Tyrannosaurus Rex family. So, don't be a sect slave, don't be like Tang Hao. In fact, if the protagonist doesn't let them go first, I always feel that someone will say that the protagonist is a white-eyed wolf or something, and then the author will write about giving the fairy grass to those people from the elder family, so I don't like people who come from a family, even if they come from a family, they also come from a family that is more united, not this kind of intrigue.

😋700 pictures are too many previous simulations. Fang Yuan drove the hearse and knelt. There is also a real-world supernatural story at the beginning. The ghost controllers in the ghost prison later all become Taoist priests or people from the Zaohuo Cult. Isn't the secretary a ghost master?

Thank you, I was so sweet. . . After being reborn as a child in two lives, I can really "speak sweetly to my mother..." This description is so sweet to me, so sweet. . . Sorry, you don't have to experience death and rebirth! In this life, now I am already old! I can no longer remember how innocent I sounded decades ago! I can't pretend anymore. . . 🤗🤗🤗Slip away.

Quick update, can't sleep at night I've finished reading the previous tweets on other platforms, so I rushed to support them.

Collapse of combat power The setting of the protagonist Goldfinger is a failure, because this does not mean that the game has infinite monsters, or that there cannot be infinite super monsters of the strongest or next level. In particular, Goldfinger's experience gain is reduced by downgrading, and the experience required for skills is exponentially higher. At least the settings of the first few levels are basically like this. So there will be a scene where ten monsters of the same level are upgraded at the first level, and 10,000 monsters of the same level are upgraded later. By the last level or two levels, there are no more monsters to kill. Another problem is the setting of Tianjiao. This involves the author adding experience to the protagonist at will. Please refer to the above point of view. The upgrade will only become slower and slower, but the protagonist sometimes needs a few days to upgrade and sometimes it takes a month to upgrade. This is the author's golden finger. But no matter what, the golden finger of the protagonist must be beyond the monsters in the world. Anyone who can surpass him is no longer a genius monster. It is called a forced setting by the author. Someone commented that I got 66 points on the test because I could only get 66 points on the test, that the genius got full marks because he could get full marks, and that the monster got 100 points because he had 200 hidden points. Phew, the setting here has a perfect score of 100, the protagonist has 10,000 hidden points, and the various geniuses have 1000-100000000000000. How can the protagonist compare with others? It's nothing more than a plot to kill the mentally retarded, so it's too brainless.

I couldn't stand it in the first picture. The protagonist's formation couldn't even be seen in the sky. Does this mean that the formation is more powerful than that of a saint? Then why didn't the protagonist achieve enlightenment?

It's very beautiful. The shortcoming is that it's watery, but this is normal. After all, it belongs to this type of research. The only problem I see now is the protagonist's level 30 soul ring. After getting it, the level increase is too little. Not to mention taking so many medicines. I ate a fairy grass when I was at level 30 before getting the soul ring. Then I used a lot of rare materials in the Wuhun Palace before getting the soul ring. Then the third soul ring was still 6000 years old, and it only improved to level three. The protagonist still has no ultimate attributes. It's a pity that the later ones cost money.

Can you change chapters 385 and 386?
Can you please change Chapters 385 and 386? Chapter 385 rewrites what was written in Chapters 372 and 373, and the previous one said the sales volume in 2005 was 2.08 Million, and the second one was 2.03 Million. Didn't we already own 20% of Penguin's shares and establish an entertainment company together?

It's true🤢! Licking too much is terrible! Then set whether to time travel or not! It's true that he also filmed Young and Dangerous 🤢... How did this 8.0 Rating come about?

Really low
If you can't be a scumbag, don't look for so many women. Your temperament has been messed up by a woman. Are you sorry?

It's very beautiful. I posted it on another platform 24 years ago and have been following it. Then it stopped updating. Now I'm updating it here. I followed it from that platform to this platform.

Good creativity, but lack of ability
The idea that everyone has a system is quite good, but by Chapter 40 it was revealed that the author was incapable of creating the background of all supermen, and fell into the cliché of using mortals instead of superhuman thinking to solve problems, which led to an inevitable downward spiral in the rhythm and storytelling of the entire book. When I was writing about school, the scene was not big and there were not many characters involved. The author was still able to control the scene. After reaching the larger background of the outside world, he directly pulled it out. But it is also understandable that there are four directions of thinking: big scenes, big creation, great courage and great freedom. There are very few authors who can control one direction. 🙃🙃🙃

Personally, I like it very much. It's still a little uncomfortable in the back. It would be better if it was longer.

Did the author of "The King of Poisons" write it in a psychiatric VIP toilet box?

You have offended the third son of the direct lineage of the family, you don't want to grow up, you are doing all kinds of things, you don't know your condition, you are making all kinds of high-profile, do you think that the third son of the family can't make you disappear from the world? When your strength is low, you don't know how to put your tail between your legs. If you have a golden finger, you don't want to improve your cultivation level. Or are you a time traveler? It's understandable that the natives don't know the twists and turns, but you are a time traveler, can you stop being so naive?

I haven't watched it, but snakes are really not as good as dragons
You ask Doubao to eliminate energy and only fight hand-to-hand and close combat. The Eastern dragon form is the strongest of the same size.

It's rare to come across a new book that sounds good, and I actually cut it. In today's online writing environment, it's hard to find something that can be read.

When I met the great beauty Chen Qing in the 1970s
It's a plain, warm, and long-lasting period story about family life and family life. It's really beautiful😽😽😽 I like a heroine who has such righteous views, has thoughts, abilities, means, is resolute and resolute, has revenge, and is dedicated to serving the country and the people, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha I really like Chen Qing. I like Chen Qing in Xiao Yu's eyes who is gentle, patient, and super nice to her. I like Chen Qing in He Yuxiang's eyes who is vigorous, mature, and wise at work, but lazy, childish, and disconnected at home. I also like Chen Qing in He Yuan's eyes who is coquettish, violent, beautiful, and dazzling~ The author writes everyone in the story very vividly, especially Xiao Yu. How could there be such a cute, kind and outstanding girl🥰🥰 I love reading it. Please write more interesting stories as soon as possible. Come on😽😽😽

I received a big thank you letter from the writer
Posting it will make you jealous, wouldn't you envy me? Are you jealous?

It's so supermodel. The primitive element started to absorb a million-year soul ring at level 40 after its creation? What do you think? The treatment that the Asura God's son, Ya Sandu, doesn't have

The plot of "Shield" is so bad, is this the only thing written in the third golden chapter? Unlike the 26-year-old book

Why did the author stop updating so that one picture is not enough? ? ? ? ? ?
















