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Tell her earlier that the destruction of Zhang Lexuan's family is related to Moon. Then the protagonist can run away as soon as possible. It would be bad if she is completely tied up. It would be best if the heroine is Zhang Lexuan and can persuade her to run away.
Multiple heroines?
Gu Yue (no Na'er? No split?) + Ye Xinglan?
Although it is a second creation, many contents still follow the original work. I like it.
Let me tell you whether it is a single author or a hundred authors.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
Another book recognized by the laws in the Chaos City of the original universe. Original Universe: Why are you so stupid?
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
Thoughts
I've been testing the waters recently. Thank you all for your favorites and recommendation votes. The elder sister and Gu Yuena are the heroines and do not have a harem. Try to write it as logically as possible. I am still improving the protagonist's abilities recently. After all, the name is not very easy to think of. The name of the soul skill has been changed to three characters following Ye Xinglan's tradition. If you have good ideas, you can also mention it. This is my first time writing a book, thank you all.
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
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don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
Your first book is great at the front, but rubbish at the back. If you read this book the same as your last book, I will send you the razor blade. 😎😎😎😎😎😎
Just complaining about the first three chapters, the second chapter is a little bit annoying
I have the experience of watching more than a hundred Douluo books, and it's not like I have never read Douluo books mixed with Owen. The first three chapters can only be said to be average. The beginning is the classic Lao Huo self-destructing the Tang Shenwang, and then I saw the Spark War. There is no problem after one chapter, but the poisonous point in the second chapter It came out, let alone the fact that Lao Huo dragged Huo Yun'er away as soon as he came back without any foreshadowing, which is very inexplicable. Just Huo Yun'er's character and the maid's thoughts to leave so obediently put a question mark. In the original book, Huo's mother and son were suppressed for several years, and Huo's mother never thought of leaving. Lao Huo It was not that she had not been persuaded to leave here. Huo's mother still firmly believed that Dai Hao would seek justice when he came back. Only when Old Huo was beaten to death could her mind be shaken. Also, the Duchess was at the door as soon as she pulled Huo's mother away, and those few paragraphs were a bit embarrassing and poisonous. Concentrated here, the situation in the third chapter is slightly better, at least not as poisonous as the second chapter, but it is not much better. The author tries to sort out the normal questions. Such a good subject cannot be wasted. After simply reading the first three chapters, the impression is not very good, and it is easy to persuade people to give up.
I didn't watch much, but it was enough for me.
In the first few chapters, the protagonist joined Shrek, and then said that he would protect Shrek's glory.
I wonder what the author was thinking? Everyone knows that it is a plug-in, but I still write a test experience there. It was written by a real person or by an AI. It's so smart.
The author actually read the original work to dig out the details.
Starting poison
The poison was released at the beginning... The planet's first-order belt realm could not defeat the planet's second-order warrior. It was a life-saving grace for Hong and Lei Shen, but it did not help at all and prevented revenge...
The author will update it soon
I can fish Tang Buddha into a dog. I hope the author will update more.
The first part is pretty good, and the second part is pretty good too. The first time was okay when the heroine was distracted, but the second time she still thought about the guy she had a crush on before, and felt a little mentally unclean. If she had a normal crush before, why would she have such a big reaction later when the dolls are already there... If it was a surprise for a fellow countryman, you should be able to hear other people's shouts. It felt too overwhelming. You can skip a few chapters to read, and everything else is fine.
The plot is good. You can check it out. Come on, the author.
It's beautiful, but the updates are a bit slow.
Starting from Song Beiyun when I read this book, the villains in every book were finally cleared by you and brought to shore. Now Qin Hui has been reviled for thousands of years in reality. I believe that with your skills, you can also clear his name and come to shore.
Come on, the author has so many female protagonists that he gives five-star reviews.
After reading the beginning, I want to ask the author if he really thinks Tang San is a heinous villain, or if he is just trying to slander Tang San to please the audience. I think it's the latter. If it's the former, as long as the protagonist is not a villain, he will face Tang San sooner or later. But the plot should be conceived to develop normally and not match up with Tang San, so I had no choice but to add at the beginning that Tang Hao has an inexplicable revenge for killing his father, so that he can confront Tang San.
Why do you have to write down a bunch of exercises from Taoist scriptures every time you practice? Every time you fight, there are a long list of names of moves you practice, and you don't even know what they are.
Yes, many female protagonists will receive five-star praise directly.
Yes, the author is just too slow, otherwise it would be five stars.
I've been reading your book for a long time, and I feel like the protagonist is just eating hard. Nothing has changed. It's as if he's just stuck there and hasn't improved much in life. The protagonist seems to be looking for conflicts all the time and doesn't want to live a peaceful life. It should be trouble that comes to you. It's not you who is looking for trouble, but he just carries a bunch of inexplicable grand narratives for no reason.
good
Not bad, just make up the word limit casually
It's so beautiful. Don't stop updating. Come on, author.
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I won't rate it, because after all, I don't even have the desire to read it, and writing a review is just to give the author a suggestion. When I saw the synopsis, I didn't want to read it. A man transformed into a woman and traveled through time to become Xin Ruyin, and then took over Qi Yunxiao. Don't you think it's superfluous? This is a bit baffling. Wouldn't it be better if you just take over Qi Yunxiao? Why do we have to do this so much?
Come on author, if you like reading, please don't stop updating.
Chapter 317, the location of the gathering has been changed Chapter 128, the golden dragon body is changed to the golden dragon hegemonic body
I really read Chapter 3. This book is like shit in a pit.
It really looks like Buddha of the Tang Dynasty, it's too abstract
A little bit more poisonous. Content shaping is average. It's better to rely on scolding and fighting. The author said that the fifth generation of directors is the author of movies, but it turns out that he himself is the same. Not catering to the public, but trying desperately to suppress the protagonist, the story progresses slowly because the author himself said that after the protagonist becomes a big shot, readers will feel that the protagonist is omnipotent. So write more stories where the protagonist is struggling. Even if the protagonist becomes the boss in the country. There are still six major foreign countries. Not enough for you to write?
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Everything is just the same routine. Without any innovation, it will just be a copycat. , You can even adapt some famous movies into novels.
Personally yy, okay
Don't use your brain too much. You can still watch. Don't think too deeply. Don't always think about being persecuted.
Why not pretend to be the emperor? . . . . . . . Hahahahahahaha
It's been a while since I've read a novel...I can't stop reading. The female protagonist is extremely charming, and the orc male protagonists are all paranoid, affectionate, and full of tension. The plot is high-energy, sweet and refreshing, the more you watch, the more addictive you become😷😷😷😷
No, bro, can you do a little less and separate the guilty and innocent at every turn and kill them all? I don't want to see them all kill, kill, kill.
What you wrote about the Ye family of Jiuxin Begonia is too deceptive! Although this martial spirit can only exist two times in a lifetime, for example, where is Ye Lingling and her mother now, and her father? Where are the grandparents? Even if one person dies after awakening his martial soul, what about the others? You have to know that this martial spirit is very good at saving people/it's written in the original work and there are a lot of favors and so on! In addition, there is no way to achieve results, so the target is so powerless? The seven-ring food system of the original Shrek is said to be ranked in the top five. What about the people/followers that the Nine-Hearted Begonia Soul Saint has made friends with? Guard? Not to mention that there is no Contra! There must be Soul Saint/Soul Emperor! The writing is too miserable, why can't all the elders die? The whole family is being forced? No escort? Impossible! In the original work, Ling Ling is also in Tiandou Royal Academy/and has such a good relationship with Dugu Yan, so what do you think? There must be a title in the family! Dugu Bo even went to her elders for treatment, etc.
I'm still wondering whether I should write it or not. I'm having a headache chasing after it. I really want to uninstall it.
Isn't it updated? 😭😭😭I've been waiting for a long time