Mortal's Mediation Cave Heaven

Your protagonist is a female, why do you want a male channel?

Anything is fine, it's just a heroine story😓cough, you're not used to it, you can't stand it

Are you a boy or a girl? Will you be able to consummate your Taoist mind in the future? Can you accept that the person in your heart who was born as a man turned into a woman? I won't say much more about your immediate predecessor being a woman.

Men wear women, the author has a heart to marry

How come a female channel has become a male channel? You were originally a man and then you traveled through time and became a woman. What do men think of you? Where can I find the sense of immersion?

I read the first eight chapters and I think it's okay, but the author changed that to layers. Your setting must be based on the setting of the original work. This fanfic is because it is based on the story of another protagonist derived from another novel. As long as you don't collapse and write well, then I support you and I will read it. As for whether the male protagonist is dispensable, in Han Li's case, it is either to maintain the relationship as a Taoist friend or to be the male protagonist. The author makes his own choice.

What a brainless heroine. She would have been killed by someone every time she took out so many thousand-year-old elixirs. She can live for so long and has no idea of ​​being low-key.

Make a hook magic weapon. Since it is the inheritance of Daluo Jinxian, there are so many magical weapons and innate spiritual treasures. It would be great to imitate them. The protagonist's fire-based skills would be great to make a Nanmingli Fire Sword.

I'll give it 5 stars first, then come back and criticize it if it doesn't look good.

It's just that you might as well just write about the protagonist's rebirth instead of time travel. After all, this type of male-to-female style is still quite controversial.