Douluo: Conspiracy Theories Are Not My Fault

It feels like the protagonist is like Tang San after becoming a god. When I was weak, I no longer even pretended!

It's a new book written by a newcomer. The writing is immature, but the plot is good. While following the original drama, I also have my own understanding. I originally thought the characters were O○C, but they turned out to be rounded out. This author likes to use foreshadowing. Things in the first two chapters are not used until more than ten chapters. Goldfinger is still a game system, not new. At present, this thing can only be used as a training accelerator, and I don't see much use for other things. Not counting the grass jelly, it's fine as a food ration to pass the time. It is recommended that those who want to watch it should first raise it

Why is your book different from other people's books and I can't give out monthly tickets?

The writing at the beginning was not good, some paragraphs were very long, and the punctuation was not correct, but the later words were corrected. But overall, the article makes readers emotionally ups and downs, and the part where emotions are harvested is not very good. Some places are too descriptive. The most important thing is the beginning. The sense of substitution is not very good. Although most people have watched Douluo, most people who watched Douluo have been watching it for a long time. I think you can explain some key characters and key plots appropriately. If the title of your book is eye-catching, but the title of your book is completely missing from your introduction, what I mean is that your introduction has absolutely nothing to do with the title of your book. And I feel that your plug-in is not well designed. Not only does the introduction not reflect your appearance, but the plug-in in your main text also does not feel very prominent. I have read about fifty chapters now, and your plug-in has also changed several times in order to better fit the main plot. At present, those who write about Douluo are all based on Tang San, but I feel that you have not expressed it well. There is no emotional tension between the words you write, and it feels really flat. The conflict between Tang San and the protagonist doesn't feel very big. Moreover, the overall introduction feels a bit bland, especially at the end of the introduction, which has no hook and is unattractive.