Sit and Watch the Fairy

I have read Chapter 44 so far, but I have not read the rest. So far, the plot and story concept are quite good. However, the first 5-6 chapters are a bit inconsistent, which may be due to the author's revision of the text. I have read a lot of books on this software, and rarely give a five-star review sincerely. From what I've seen so far, the bird food written about is pretty good. Very recommended! ! ! ! Well said. Next, comment on the flaws. Hahaha don't mind. First, the system structure and practice theory are very flawed. The Three Five Methods of Qi Refining in the article. It's more of the Spring and Autumn style of writing, which is the same as one stroke. Because I am a fan of Shenji (strictly speaking, I am a fan of his rigorous system, stable structure, and strong logic) because after all, you are writing about immortals and immortals. There must be architectural coherence. (For example, the body, the soul, the five elements, yin and yang, the unity of heaven and man, etc. Are the manifestations of these realms) Practice various arts, alchemy arrays, puppets, spiritual values, witchcraft, etc. . . . . Secondly, I still don't know what kind of skills the protagonist practices? What's the name? What skills did the students in the academy use? What magical powers did they use when they were taught the first battle? The only thing they saw was a lightning palm thunder! The protagonist practices swordsmanship and has been practicing basic swordsmanship. The same goes for Yujian, which is all developed by myself. Except the storyline is pretty good. The protagonist is really a bit careless on the road to spiritual practice. This is also a common problem among most authors at present. The system structure is becoming more and more perfunctory, or clichéd. It can only be conceived in terms of plot. The system of cultivating immortals is always inseparable from the mortal's spiritual root settings of 1, 2, 3, 4, and 5. People are inherently yin and yang and have all five elements. Doesn't this mean that they become "disabled"? This is also the reason why I am a fan of Shenji. Don't take factors such as spiritual roots, qualifications, and physique. These are not the only ones, they only have some additive effects. It is very universal and can be practiced by everyone. Even in a certain aspect, it is a system that can be used in all worlds. From low to high in Yangshen martial arts, from skin, flesh, tendons, and marrow to martial arts and human beings, where in the world can't we cultivate the physical body? The three thousand avenues of the eternal life system, after three thousand eras, the system is different in each era. Everything you can think of and unexpected has been experienced, and the technology is available. It is indeed applicable to Sanqian Avenue. The systems of the heavens and the worlds are different, but the laws that make up the world are indeed similar. The Holy King System begins by naming "Qi, the source of all life. Qigong is the practice of the origin of life. "Needless to say, the Galaxy Spiritual System, let alone this, can be practiced as long as humans or intelligent beings have the concept of the mind. As for the Dragon Talisman, I won't mention it, it's a bug. Hahahaha, I mentioned a lot of digressions. Back to the topic, it looks good so far. The five-star rating is a sincere evaluation. The only bad thing is the flawed system structure. I hope I can add more later. Finally, the path of foot is also the path! ! ! !

Those who like to watch cultivators will become addicted. The author writes a lot about urban genres because of his reputation as a cultivator of immortality. It's just a novice, and I can't understand the pitfalls it dug. [Emot=default,41/] is so stupid that I can't write it anymore because I don't deserve a girl. The protagonist's talent is invincible, so it's better to write it down to the end. There are also offerings to the immortals Brother, isn't this fantasy? There is also a bug between the Dynasty and the Immortal. Can't the Dynasty's resources produce a genius? There are also two family geniuses. It's the most humorous thing to have the imperial examination in the middle. Do you want to sew history, fantasy, fairy tales, and love together? I really laughed at the title and introduction of the novel😀.

I came to read this work with high expectations. The author's previous work was said to be quite good. I didn't like to read the city, so I read this one. I have read about a hundred chapters and spent money on it. I think I am qualified to review this novel. The protagonist is well portrayed, the three views are positive, and the author's writing style is not bad. The world structure is relatively traditional and innocuous, but it is disgusting because everyone is smart and clown. It is easy to become a top five boss. The protagonist is a wild cultivator who has no background, no guidance from a master, and no resources. He insists on cultivating to the lower three realms before the age of 20. The result is that everyone still thinks that he is not good and is not as good as the family, because he is just a wild cultivator. The reason given by the author is that the protagonist is not as stable as the aristocratic family, and then after the protagonist breaks through to the upper fifth realm, those people think that the protagonist is still not good enough. This time, not only are they compared with the aristocratic family, they also start to compare with those who have become the disciples of the upper fifth realm, saying that he is not qualified. Yuan is like this in his life, and marriage is of no use. He is not as good as those direct disciples who can't wait for the protagonist to grow up. Pay attention, those direct disciples are at a higher level than the protagonist at this time. What I mean is that if the protagonist has resources and background, can you invest? Marriage? Shouldn't it be more important to invest more in wooing the protagonist since he has nothing but talent? Are you waiting for the protagonist to become successful before investing? After reading novels for so many years, we also know that novels need dramatic conflicts to be interesting, but the author has started to go crazy, everyone has become a clown, and the protagonist is pretending to be cool. There are also some little poisonous points that I won't go into one by one. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. It doesn't matter if everyone has different opinions. In essence, I still hope to see better novels. I am not instructing the author to make changes according to my instructions. I am just posting the things I am dissatisfied with so that everyone can be mentally prepared for agreeing with such poisonous people. But I still want to say something to some readers. Don't say anything. If you are so awesome, just write one. For such people, I just want to tell you that I am a reader, not an author. Just like a gourmet, you may not know how to cook.

Isn't this just a pretense and a slap in the face? The protagonist is looked down upon wherever he goes, looks down on whatever he does, and can be found with reasons for his various achievements, but why is he so praised? A bunch of various blowjobs look good.

It is more clear whether the queen will be a harem or not, and the plot is also very draggy. The first part was okay, but the more I listened to the book later, the worse it became.

What kind of Goba stuff are you writing? If you can't write, just be a eunuch.

I am too used to writing my own love story. Lack of passionate description. Such a male protagonist? What kind of setting is it? From the beginning, you have been practicing your body every day, irritating children and people every day, and there are only a few characters in Qingyun? Or has the story not unfolded yet? It lasted three months. Write well. If you can't write, just continue on the same path as before. Stop touching your feet all day long. What era are you still touching your feet all day long?

The reviews are all good, and the rating is only about 8 points. If you look carefully, it will probably only be between 7 and 6 points in a while. It makes me laugh to death. It's not well written and people won't say it, isn't it good to entertain yourself? You are still a great god, a god of shit.

The interaction with the heroine is very well written. Perfect description of daily life But it's really not good in other aspects The setting of the realm is illogical, and it is inexplicable that the protagonist needs to ask his mind to make it difficult for him to pass. With so many concepts in the book, is it easy for everyone to ask questions? It's purely because the author insists on limiting the number of words. The constant back-and-forth of private practice in the countryside is also very annoying. It was really interesting the first few times, but did I not expect the content? Keep repeating the same plot There is little advancement in the content of each chapter. The same things are repeated over and over again in each chapter. The number of words is too confusing. Next, the description of the fighting is super vague. It is the least thoughtful book I have ever read. The protagonist barely learns any moves or techniques from the beginning to the end... He just cuts with one sword and slashes with the other... Update -- Now there is another night watchman, I really don't know what is going on... The entire Seven Immortals Sect is written like a gathering place for idiots No one has a brain. If your intelligence is reduced to this, why don't you just write a funny novel? Give it a little more chance, I won't want to spend money if it sucks again

The third golden chapter is just bad, and it's a bad joke from the beginning. The protagonist was raised and did nothing for 2 years. Ordinary people can't cultivate immortality. It's so funny. It's a brainless setting.