Douluo: the Most Masculine Person with Strange Velvet Reaching to the Sky

To be honest, if you change the outline and take the Spirit Hall route, Shrek and his gang will be really poisoned by their bad reputation. It's actually quite simple to change. Just change the awakening person to someone from the Wuhun Palace. In the original work, Yue Guan is pretty good, but he's a bit effeminate. Instead of worshiping Yue Guan as your teacher, you can worship ghosts. Then you can grow up step by step. At around level 30, you can become a fairy. After getting the grass, his strength will increase. Then Ju Gui will break through level 96, enter the enshrinement hall, and get rid of Bibi Dong. This way Ju Gui will have a lot of free time, whether it is the opportunity to cut off the Hu after completing it, or the mentality of joining the protagonist group, there will be a lot of room for development. Hope you adopt it

Let me give you a suggestion. Delete the Shrek line. It's too annoying. Change it to the awakening of the Wuhun Palace, and then let Ju Douluo find the protagonist. Later, use the fairy grass to arrange for Gui Mei and Yue Guan to break through level 96, and join the Enshrinement Palace to get rid of Bibi Dong's control. Don't Lick Bibi Dong, otherwise it will be extremely poisonous. Ju Douluo has been in the Wuhun Palace for decades and does not have a soul bone in his body, let alone lick Qian Renxue. In the original book, Qian Renxue had the idea of selling Ju Gui to win over Tang San. In Qian Renxue's eyes, Ju Gui is not even as good as 🐶

I saw someone writing about fairy grass. You wrote it like this. It's so poisonous. The master-disciple relationship is very important in Douluo Continent, okay?

Alas, why are you involved with Flanders? Also apprenticed to Flanders? Such a good subject matter is wasted, are you still a time traveler? The first soul ring is more than 300 years old. What do you think, author? Change it quickly, otherwise you won't be able to stand it anymore.

If you had studied under Ju Douluo from the beginning, this book would have done well.

Bibi Dong is a mad woman with white eyes, Qian Renxue is a cold-blooded and love-minded woman, she doesn't look like a human king, the worship hall is a house, Yue Guan often has to do things for Bibi Dong, and she even hunted down Dugu Bo, so the fairy grass can only be snatched, hey, really, I don't feel safe, I don't know what will happen next for the protagonist, the life is destroyed as a couple, I guess it can't be passed down, good and evil are not related, Shura is probably Tang San's nanny, is he taking the path of creating his own god? According to the original work, it is not useful. I look forward to the author's interesting stories.

Juhua Guan is better than Flanders

Author, please re-open a book with this setting. The best thing is that you started studying under Shrek and the others. He is destined to be a loser. Starting from scratch, even if you are a casual practitioner, it will be better than now.

It's too boring to take the Shrek route and play the game of betrayal and alienation.

Join Shrek, find any soul ring, and waste your talents