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Author, will you update? Feeling pretty good
Use words to describe your heart, put pen to paper, and wait for it to blossom.
The author's writing style is delicate and his words are melodious. Although the writing is green, it is vigorous and powerful, and the description is profound and of extraordinary significance. Tribute to the author's first novel
Good-looking (♥∀♥) If you don't like it, don't comment.
The time doesn't match up, it's only 51 years, so the first, second, and third uncles came. If you have a golden finger and good craftsmanship, you are still afraid of being an old loser. If you tell the military control meeting about your situation, you will naturally find a job.
Uh-huh-huh-huh-huh-huh-huh-huh
A waste of time, waste material will always be waste material, even if it fails
It's a very good novel that makes people want to put it down. The author is really a genius at writing silly plots, which makes people very curious about what kind of clever plots he can write in the future. 👍👍👍👍
Teachers will check if you are born with full soul power. There is no way to fake whether you are born with full soul power. What's more, you've been in school for a year and you don't even have a soul ring. It's so fake. Are everyone fools? ?
The so-called Western University peanut allergy:
Western University does not really have that many peanut allergies. Their allergies are purely caused by unclean peanuts, harmful substances such as lead and metal, radioactive substances, and genetic modification.
The next volume will continue the Empire series
I plan to go back to writing Western fantasy. I can't let go when writing historical texts. I dare not write about historical figures casually. . . . We must also respect historical facts, tired! This month I plan to continue publishing a new book in the Empire series.
Danzo: I'll break the line
Second Generation: Okay, let's break up the queenship. After Hiruzen, you will be the Third Hokage! Sarutobi was a powerful clan, and there were Inoga and Butterfly following him. Hashirama even specifically mentioned this to Madara, and Madara also agreed that it would be better for such a ninja clan to join them. The second generation of disciples, only Sarutobi as Hokage can suppress the situation, others cannot suppress the wealthy families of Konoha.
An is too embarrassed to live next door to his brother.
Another book into the trap
Originally I was just looking for a random book to complete tasks and get medals, but I found out that this book is pretty good and leaves a mark hahaha. Another book by the author has also been added to the bookshelf. The time for reading is to be determined💩
What kind of pure nanny is this novel thing?
I feel like this book is so niche. I've read it a long time ago. It's quite interesting. I just don't know why the ending sucked. I can't accept it at all.
Why is it not updated? It's a bad review.
Not pure enough for a cool article😁
Strong recommendation
The physical book I read when I was in school still looks great when I revisit it after so many years.
Interesting. It's just that the pace is fast and slow, which makes me a little uncomfortable.
Look up to the sky and laugh loudly and go out. How can we be the people of Penghao?
Zhizi sat there kneeling as if lost in thought. When Jiang Yu was about to leave the living room, Zhizi suddenly stood up and asked: "Wall-facer Jiang Yu, what is your plan?" Jiang Yu turned around and made an invitation gesture: "Please come and break the wall!" Amid loud laughter, Jiang Yu walked away. After Jiang Yu's wall-breaking process was broadcast live, it caused an uproar in the country of the solar system!
I saw a familiar book title (I read it many years ago) and clicked in to read it. I was stunned. It was about to be updated into a history book. The author insisted that it must be five stars.
When are you going to have a baby? Why haven't you had a baby yet?
Fang Yuan, what on earth did you do?
What would I watch without a heroine? It's very simple. I just need to be the heroine. After saying that, he no longer disguised himself in women's clothing, grabbed the financial owner and treated him to a treat for refining.
The first day of reading "Nine Star Poisonous Milk"
The Pilipipian Jiang Xiaopi is still humorous. The plot feels like a routine update. The attraction lies in the characterization. I like to watch these funny protagonists.
More and more behind. The more abstract it becomes, the more watery it becomes
I have been a regular reader of online articles for 20 years, and I have never seen someone reborn as a dog licker. This author has incorrect views.
I just wrote about supporting roles. Others just spend half a chapter introducing it, which is a lot. You are the goblin clan that will die as soon as you appear. Being able to spend 10 chapters describing ecology...
The clown hero The clown hero The clown hero The clown hero
Highly recommended
The writing is good, the lines are good, and there are no narrations. As an uneducated bookworm, I can't fault it.
It's really frustrating to watch. It's fun to watch the same fan. I don't want to say how cool it is. At least it's not frustrating. It's not as good as Yang Jian in the early stage of the original work. He directly revealed his weaknesses and then was severely manipulated by the headquarters. Those shabby things fooled him.
So holy. I feel like the main character is a bit stupid.
Qingdai falls into a trap every time she goes out. She is so stupid that she has high expectations for her after seeing the scene in the prince's dream. In fact, because of that Lu, he knows that he has a fiancée and does not care about the heroine's situation. Without thinking about it, as a maid, she can climb into a man's bed. Does the heroine still have face in front of outsiders? And she also wants to find someone to take revenge, so use your brain. It's obviously Qingdai herself who wants to rely on her. When the heroine was embarrassed twice by Princess Shuhui, she began to think about how smart she is but she can't escape being embarrassed by others. It's all just cleverness. And after the heroine came out after being splashed with water, Qingdai knew who did it. I went to kill him. In fact, I have no ability at all😐😐😐. Come on, the heroine was only thinking about being a stepmother throughout the whole process. In fact, those actions were to draw a clear line between herself and the hero. Isn't everything she did just trying to be ambiguous with the hero? It's time to stand again😐😐😐😐😐
Overall good, but a little flawed
The part about the protagonist's family is uncomfortable to watch. If you change the genders of the protagonist and the heroine, you will find that it is a very cliche plot. The villain Shen falls in love with the heroine Chen. The heroine's parents want to curry favor with each other because they want each other's family background (they like Shen). Because the heroine is not a biological child but an adopted member of the clan, and the villain also likes the heroine, they want to marry her regardless of her wishes. Normally, the heroine should meet the protagonist and slap the heroine's parents and villain in the face, but here you can only accept the arrangement and marry someone you don't like. By the way, when did the protagonist know for sure that Shen likes her? Some of Shen's behaviors when the male protagonist didn't like her (as a lover) and didn't express his feelings gave me the feeling of studying hard for three years in high school but not signing up for the college entrance examination.
Damn it, I wasted more than ten dollars, there is a fat cow behind it.
Is this book rewritten to log into the future ten thousand years?
The style of writing is a bit fragmented and the characters cannot stand up.
The writing is quite fluent, which is good, but there are a lot of private goods, and it's funny to have a foreign prophetic church. From the protagonist's words and deeds, it can be seen that the author is a sophisticated egoist, extremely selfish, and it doesn't matter if he doesn't want to destroy the world. This is normal. I am not criticizing or The author will judge you morally and according to your style. I suggest that next time you write a new novel, the protagonist should be a gangster or a gangster. This way the overall style will be very unified and the characters will stand up and be full. Don't use characters like affectionate and pitiful orphans. If the taste is wrong, you can't write well.
That's ridiculous, innate level 30? Where did you come from? Innate level 20 is given by the gods. Which god are you related to or have a system?
I only read one chapter and I knew this book wasn't for me.
Scientific thinking and cultivation of immortality
Great author, can you still see the end of this book?
I can only say that it's okay, but there are too many loopholes and many places where the writing is too taken for granted. For example, there is no fire in refining the weapon. Do you want to take a look at the seventy-two earth evil techniques you wrote? If it is as awesome as what you wrote, spitting fire will never be so simple that even the immortal fire cannot be practiced! Also, the gods think so well. If the gods were really that good, then there would be no so-called demons and ghosts massacring the city! I thought that after acquiring the seventy-two Earthly Sha Techniques, I would be able to practice most of them. As a result, I learned four or five of the awesome Earthly Spirits in your mouth and then started to acquire the 36 great magical powers of Tiangang. If you are afraid of biting off more than you can chew, you still managed to acquire the great magical powers. You have to strive for excellence. You haven't even fully mastered the four or five skills you have learned! Overall, it's okay to watch but not a high-quality one!
How to cast a monthly vote and there are restrictions
I have no idea. It's because my fan level is not high enough.
The whole story is nonsense. I feel that the protagonist is like an idiot, and the content is also very unreasonable. If you touch Orochimaru, he will be a traitor.
Very good very good very good very good
Dear adoptive fathers, look over here!
Let me tell you all the adoptive fathers who have clicked on this book. I am the author of this book. The protagonist in the beginning of the book is relatively young. He is about 8 years old and has a mature and stable personality. He does not like such a protagonist. He thinks it is too brainless and looks bad. First of all, I would like to apologize to these adoptive fathers. The poor writing made you laugh. Let me tell these adoptive fathers here. I will explain to you in advance. After understanding it, you don't need to open this book, so as not to make you feel uncomfortable after reading it and scold me later. I also felt uncomfortable after reading it and didn't know how to reply to you adoptive fathers. Let's just relax. If you don't like the young protagonist and think it's unreasonable, you can read books by other great authors and give the kid a chance to eat. Thank you all foster fathers! Of course, if there are some upright adoptive fathers who really want to criticize me, then I can only be transparent and delete the offending posts. As an author, I have to have character and not curse, so I can only use this method tactfully.
Except for the poor writing style, it is a good little white text. If you want to read it more happily, you can read it.
Is this an AI text? Should I write a diary or an autobiography? I was so angry when I read it. It was the first time I felt speechless because of a fan novel.
Good, good, good, good, good, good
I wrote more than 100 chapters about you, you guys. I'll give you my money back. I read a few chapters and they were all about inner descriptions, storytelling, and reasoning. Return it to me
I can't say, every time I read thirty or forty chapters, I don't want to read anymore. I don't know why?
nice! Looks good! Nervous and exciting!
It was so funny to see the ending! It feels like Minister Wen worked for a long time and not only paid for himself, but also only paid for half of it. The heroine only wanted half, and the remaining half was jealous and restrained! I want to laugh but feel sad!