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"All the characters have flesh and blood! Even the supporting characters have complete character arcs. The villain's behavioral logic actually makes me hate and pity... The protagonist is even more amazing. The growth line is like a slowly unfolding landscape scroll. Every choice has a trace. Now I can still see their shadows when I close my eyes.
Do you treat the army as sb? You've already joined the reserve force, haven't you received a title Douluo yet to recruit a disciple? Can't twin martial souls and innate full soul power attract people? You're really just waiting there for someone to come by yourself, right? Aren't you afraid of being kidnapped along the way? Pure idiot 😐
Every recent zero-point update is the previous content, can it be worse?
Check in on 3.23
It's Monday again, why isn't it time for holiday yet?
Don't we have to write about those ants in Douluo Continent to disgust people? All the Immortal King's strength fell to the ground
The book is quite good, but I don't think it would have been better if it didn't write about the relationship between the three of them.
The gap between front and back is a bit big. In the early stage, it was okay. He was domineering and cold-blooded and fighting mad, but later he collapsed. He promised to put some pressure on Shrek, but Ma Xiaotao gave up just because of a few tears. I was a little speechless😙
In the later period, you forgot that Princess Changsun still had to undergo thoracic surgery. What about your system and the things that were unlocked at the mid-to-high level? It was a mistake to set up a medical clinic later. It was equivalent to the author giving up. He didn't want to acknowledge the subsequent works. It's very sad.
Very cool
It's very cool. I've read so many top-notch cool articles among Dou Po fans.
It's great. It's a blast. It's so exciting. Come on come on
I don't know if I can get milk tea No. 90
Hehe, I wonder if I can get No. 90😘
What the hell n novel
Written by AI? ? ? ? Ah ah ah what is this? So cool
Very nice! This is the most alien-like beast novel I've ever read! The protagonist's personality fits Red Dragon very well! When we read novels about exotic beasts, what we see is the nature of animals. This novel is the best one I have ever read!
Day 19
It's the 19th day to check in, it's another new week
reminder
Damn, why isn't it updated? Just wait for the update
What a bullshit, nonsense, sloppy writing, a piece of shit
This is my favorite novel. Even those who don't read novels like this novel.
The update is really too slow! There has never been a book that is updated so slowly and stops updating at every turn. It's amazing.
It's not bad, it has the style of Douluo novels from a few years ago
It's rare to see novels that follow the plot of Douluo's original work. Basically, the protagonist is Tang San. The author changed his name and strengthened each node slightly. And because the writing is not good, the plot is simplified. I don't have anything of my own, so I just follow the original work. The advantage is that it is not easy to write. The disadvantage is that it is no different from Tang San, and the writing is not good.
Post the book review first and then read one by one
I hope you will get what you want in the future.
Day19 Damn it, I met someone crazy while riding in the car.
Well, it is already considered a high-quality novel for Shuangwen, but starting from the novel, the author still needs to work harder. First of all, the content of each page is too little. Although the character description is detailed, it is a bit too much. Come on, the author, this book will become popular if you keep at it, remember to write more
It's very beautiful. Keep it up. You'll have no problem!
It's okay, come on, come on, I believe more people will watch you, it's really good to watch, there's nothing wrong with your plot, come on, keep at it
In one sentence, the original setting of Xiao Yan's nanny is quite nonsense. It just follows the original work and doesn't have much new ideas.
Give me some suggestions
This book is generally good, but it goes off topic. There are too few plot lines in Douluo World. Writing about Douluo Po and the Great Master with Douluo gimmicks is a demerit. You can make the golden finger to briefly travel to other worlds near the opportunity points, and obtain opportunities without interfering with the growth of the protagonists in other worlds. In this way, the world view will not be so big and it will be much easier to write, otherwise the plot will be poisoned and easy to collapse without any writing.
Update quickly. Update quickly. Update quickly. Update quickly.
Author, you only updated one chapter today, and I'm pestering you like a resentful woman.
It's good to read. This book is really good to read. Dou Er's biggest villain boss has become a licking dog. It's a cool article among cool articles.
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
It was quite interesting to watch at the front, but mentally draining at the back. 😓😓😓
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
I think it's pretty, very good-looking
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
Hurry up, one hundred chapters a day, Kuaishou tweeted, there are only 32 episodes over there.
Children, although the logic of this book does not make sense, there are many typos, and the word order is not smooth. But it doesn't matter, because I came from Tomatoes, and I'm good at it.
Why didn't the author update today? Please update soon.
Next to this book is the first Heiners approx.
Keep writing the article well, I will follow you, you know, come on!
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
The detailed description is okay, and there is no big difference from the world view of Warhammer 40K.
A really good book. Everyone has a different meaning in life. It feels like Bailong's identity is becoming clearer and clearer.
There are too many low-sequence garbage time. I saw the resurrection ritual and searched it, but so far it has not worked. If you want to follow the main line, there is no need to get stuck in a low-sequence. You should get to a position where you can operate better. After all, you are a fan and not original. There is no need to lay down the underlying logic. It is almost 1.5 Million words and you haven't written anything yet.
Ε=(´ο｀*))) Alas, it's all set by this family. It's so boring to have to go to Donghai to go to school. A lot of fans have the same plot, they just want to be a different martial spirit. I'm tired of it and I have to keep looking for it.
Does the author still update? Is it still updated? Still updated? ? ? ? ? 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
This chapter is outrageous, 88
This chapter is outrageous, 88
The introduction left me speechless. A person with an innate soul power of level 8 and a half can barely be considered a genius. How fucking stupid can you say this? There are only a few people with full innate soul power in the whole fight. I really thought that a person with an innate soul power of level 9 or 10 is just cabbage.