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Okay, keep it up, don't let it suck, update more often
I still stop updating when I find a good book. Let me ask, if I can't continue writing it, what's the point of starting this book? I have read several fanfics, but they all stop after writing no more than 50 chapters. They say it's not popular. You haven't even reached 100 chapters. What do you want to be popular? You need to be popular at the beginning.
Let Han Feng go. Kill him by Shi Chen. You are the one.
While I still remember, hurry up and check in
The plot of carrying a blood feud at the beginning is not pleasant in the first place, not to mention that some of the plots are a little bit of a conflict between the left and right brains, and there are too many useless plots. The rest of the writing is very good, but it's a pity that the author is a eunuch.
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144 is wrong. Did you get confused while writing? Why did you sneak in a weird rule story 😂😂
The 12-year-old protagonist progresses slowly and is written in detail. Is this intended to let book friends watch him grow up? Others are the protagonists who experienced something when they were young, and then years passed in the blink of an eye and entered the formal process.
Another collection of Ma Xiaotao's trash
Was the writing inspired by "Let That Witch Go"?
When I first started watching it, I saw the familiar setting, the familiar Anna, the familiar witch, the familiar flames, and the familiar rescue plot.
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This is a piece of cake. What I said before is that the movement of breaking through immortality is greater than the movement of the Venerable. As a result, even if there is a heavy treasure, it can only be compared with the elementary one. It's such a waste.
Um, why do I feel like the protagonist wants to be like a dog?
Very good (๑>◡<๑)👍=ᗜωᗜ=. . . . . . . . . . . Red and fiery, in a trance
Open a new book soon
Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this
It's very beautiful. I hope everyone will follow me.
Urge more, Urge more, Urge more, Urge more
nice
It makes me greedy every time I watch it😋The delicious food brings many people together! Because of delicious food, many people are beginning to yearn for the future of life! !
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Look how long it has been since you updated. Please update quickly.
Update quickly, why is the update so unstable?
Nice! Warm and daily flow, the writing and narrative are smooth and comfortable.
I came in because of Goldfinger, but I found that Goldfinger's presence is very low. The protagonist is constantly criticizing people. The criticism is very exciting and the logic is clear, but it is always written in this way? You said that you included so many beauties and big beauties in the book, but in the end you practiced martial arts and attacked people there, just like when you were a child, you only watched the monkeys when you were watching Journey to the West.
It's really ugly, the plot is too watery, and I don't understand why the author wants to write a strategy system. Forget about writing a strategy system, why should he conquer these ants in Douluo Continent? I'm speechless
Just like it if you write about Dragon Clan. It's okay. The author will continue writing.
In the early stage, I was a little confused, but later on I got better. I focused on training. I was stronger than the enemy by a factor, and I could just crush him.
***! His mother knelt down and licked Shrek, acting as a nanny and a dog licker.
A cool article with no peeing spots throughout. Even at the end, the protagonist's power system was not finalized. The protagonist's ability needs to be strengthened in the spiritual direction, but the protagonist's path is purely violent output
I've finished reading the latest 17 chapters, and I think it's okay. Has the author decided on a female protagonist? You can choose a female protagonist who has a small role in the original work. If you have a weak brain and feel unsure about writing a good job if you have a large role, you can choose not to add a female protagonist. Indiscriminately adding female protagonists can easily lead to poisoning.
It's so uncomfortable. I only updated two chapters today.
Doesn't the imperial court care about transporting a large number of horses?
There are too few updates😊Urge for more, Urge for more
Day 19
3.23 It's time to go to work again. I don't want to go to work. I'm so tired.
The years pass by, and the literati are refined.
Is this a eunuch? If you enjoy watching it, please don't update it.
Should be 4.5 stars
It was full of stars, although I knew it was foreshadowing. But jumping around like this is too outrageous. Not refreshing enough. Perhaps this is the helplessness of Shan Douluo colleagues. There are few key plots or they can be easily destroyed. Without the original plot, it would be very difficult to edit. To be honest, with the protagonist's power now, he has no worries about killing Shrek casually. But you have to be jumped in the face by the big waste. It feels like this is the way you write it. Shrek's existence seems like he can't do a lot of tricks. Don't understand. If Shrek is gone, wouldn't there still be Bibi Dong? You can use your wits with her. Not much though. But it's definitely more interesting than Shrek
It looks great, this is the real feeling of fighting with three people
Update after update, update after update, update two more chapters, come on, author, I am optimistic about you, author
A very stupid Extreme Douluo fights Contra and only vomits blood 😐 Guys, have you seen the original work? The real Extreme Douluo fights Contra and can beat him to death even with a little force, and still vomits blood in two strokes.
It looks good. It looks good. It looks really good. Come on, author.
What happened to the heroine in Dragon Clan? I didn't write about her. I forgot about her.
Come on, author
Why are updates always so slow? Update soon
Let me first ask, did Xiao Hongchen travel through time or something?
Madam, madam, so pretty
Now, more than 200 chapters have been updated. It's so good. I've never read this type of book before! What an idea! It has changed all the "unsatisfactory things" in history. Although it is just a novel, it really feels the same now. Every time I see the fate of a character or a dynasty being changed for the better, I am very happy.
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Can someone tell me, is there multiple female protagonists?
Can you add God of Decapitation and Mr. Marvel in China?
When did the protagonist know that the heroine had a copy? Why didn't I see it? That's missing?
Super Giant Gou Ba is boring. How can you watch it and get high scores?
Checked in for 222 days, great! I don't know if I can hold on until I clock in at 369😯