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I still stop updating when I find a good book. Let me ask, if I can't continue writing it, what's the point of starting this book? I have read several fanfics, but they all stop after writing no more than 50 chapters. They say it's not popular. You haven't even reached 100 chapters. What do you want to be popular? You need to be popular at the beginning.

The plot of carrying a blood feud at the beginning is not pleasant in the first place, not to mention that some of the plots are a little bit of a conflict between the left and right brains, and there are too many useless plots. The rest of the writing is very good, but it's a pity that the author is a eunuch.

La la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la.

144 is wrong. Did you get confused while writing? Why did you sneak in a weird rule story 😂😂

The 12-year-old protagonist progresses slowly and is written in detail. Is this intended to let book friends watch him grow up? Others are the protagonists who experienced something when they were young, and then years passed in the blink of an eye and entered the formal process.

Was the writing inspired by "Let That Witch Go"?
When I first started watching it, I saw the familiar setting, the familiar Anna, the familiar witch, the familiar flames, and the familiar rescue plot.

This is a piece of cake. What I said before is that the movement of breaking through immortality is greater than the movement of the Venerable. As a result, even if there is a heavy treasure, it can only be compared with the elementary one. It's such a waste.

Open a new book soon
Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this

nice
It makes me greedy every time I watch it😋The delicious food brings many people together! Because of delicious food, many people are beginning to yearn for the future of life! !

I came in because of Goldfinger, but I found that Goldfinger's presence is very low. The protagonist is constantly criticizing people. The criticism is very exciting and the logic is clear, but it is always written in this way? You said that you included so many beauties and big beauties in the book, but in the end you practiced martial arts and attacked people there, just like when you were a child, you only watched the monkeys when you were watching Journey to the West.

It's really ugly, the plot is too watery, and I don't understand why the author wants to write a strategy system. Forget about writing a strategy system, why should he conquer these ants in Douluo Continent? I'm speechless

Just like it if you write about Dragon Clan. It's okay. The author will continue writing.

In the early stage, I was a little confused, but later on I got better. I focused on training. I was stronger than the enemy by a factor, and I could just crush him.

A cool article with no peeing spots throughout. Even at the end, the protagonist's power system was not finalized. The protagonist's ability needs to be strengthened in the spiritual direction, but the protagonist's path is purely violent output

I've finished reading the latest 17 chapters, and I think it's okay. Has the author decided on a female protagonist? You can choose a female protagonist who has a small role in the original work. If you have a weak brain and feel unsure about writing a good job if you have a large role, you can choose not to add a female protagonist. Indiscriminately adding female protagonists can easily lead to poisoning.

Doesn't the imperial court care about transporting a large number of horses?

Day 19
3.23 It's time to go to work again. I don't want to go to work. I'm so tired.

Should be 4.5 stars
It was full of stars, although I knew it was foreshadowing. But jumping around like this is too outrageous. Not refreshing enough. Perhaps this is the helplessness of Shan Douluo colleagues. There are few key plots or they can be easily destroyed. Without the original plot, it would be very difficult to edit. To be honest, with the protagonist's power now, he has no worries about killing Shrek casually. But you have to be jumped in the face by the big waste. It feels like this is the way you write it. Shrek's existence seems like he can't do a lot of tricks. Don't understand. If Shrek is gone, wouldn't there still be Bibi Dong? You can use your wits with her. Not much though. But it's definitely more interesting than Shrek

It looks great, this is the real feeling of fighting with three people

Update after update, update after update, update two more chapters, come on, author, I am optimistic about you, author

A very stupid Extreme Douluo fights Contra and only vomits blood 😐 Guys, have you seen the original work? The real Extreme Douluo fights Contra and can beat him to death even with a little force, and still vomits blood in two strokes.

What happened to the heroine in Dragon Clan? I didn't write about her. I forgot about her.

Madam, madam, so pretty
Now, more than 200 chapters have been updated. It's so good. I've never read this type of book before! What an idea! It has changed all the "unsatisfactory things" in history. Although it is just a novel, it really feels the same now. Every time I see the fate of a character or a dynasty being changed for the better, I am very happy.

When did the protagonist know that the heroine had a copy? Why didn't I see it? That's missing?

Super Giant Gou Ba is boring. How can you watch it and get high scores?




















