Mortal: Family Ancestor Wei Wuya

First of all, there is too much nonsense, and it is too long-winded. It also gives the protagonist a gold-type heavenly spirit root that has no characteristics at all. You also find him a book on Five Elements Kung Fu to major in. So what do you mean by setting it like this? Another little complaint, the matching magic weapon is a set of formation flags, isn't it? If you want to learn the magic weapon of the Korean model worker, you should learn it more like it. They use the Qingzhufeng Cloud Sword to form a sword formation. But your magic weapon is just a set of formations. When fighting, who will wait for you to set up the formation before getting in and fighting with you? At the beginning, I almost didn't want to set it up. I knew that Wei Lichen was in the Nascent Soul stage in his later period, and he was Wei Wuya's great-nephew. The protagonist you wrote was the same as no one wanted. And I think you still wanted to write about the family's fair competition? Can you write something about how normal people think? The eldest nephew of the great monk of the Empress Yuan Dynasty, your gold-type heavenly spirit root makes you look like a collateral descendant of a small family.

What nonsense, Tianlinggen, Yuanhou's big family, Qi refining and cultivation, you write day by day, there is no plot at all, it's all nonsense

What are you writing about? What does that kind of large-scale war have to do with your small Qi training?

Don't keep thinking about things in the original work, like gold-eating insect spiders, flying purple-striped scorpions, or incarnations outside the body. There's nothing new.

I don't even need to read it. In the past, the mortal fandom still had some flavor. Now, anime is very popular. When female characters come out, they know what they are going for without even thinking, and they hope to write something with content. Just be a harem cool text.

It's long-winded and not creative at all.

Is it really necessary to learn how to make talismans? It's better to just buy it. Anyway, it's a consumable for external use. It saves time and cost.

The writing is good, but who is the heroine?

The eleventh level of Qi training and foundation building, the author is really a talent🙀

Very good but hope to update faster