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What I wrote is a dog💩. It doesn't matter if it contradicts each other, it keeps pushing and pulling.
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
No brains at all. Since he wants revenge but won't hold back, his mindless provocation is just like a 250-year-old. Dutiful son template.
How can you sleep at your age? Come on!
The writing is quite good. If the previous plot creation level and writing style are maintained, it will feel like a high-quality online novel. But whether it can be seen by more people sometimes depends on luck.
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
Meditate on the past and set the setting sun
It's been a long time since I've read a novel in its entirety. As I get older, it's hard to concentrate. Many novels can't be read after the beginning. This article is different. The writing is good and the three views are correct. Maybe it's because my wife also died of cancer and I feel the same way. Write down every bit of Teacher Shen's life, happy and unhappy, and you can't help but smile or cry while watching it. Especially for late-stage cancer, after all treatments have been exhausted, a person becomes as thin as a piece of paper. In despair, he unconsciously becomes Dr. Jiang, hoping to save Teacher Shen. If the quality can be maintained, I will definitely order all of them.
The plot is quite creative, and the humor elements interspersed in it are also very good. The only pity is that it is still being updated and I am not satisfied with it. In addition, I am worried that too few people will find this book a good one, so this book will not survive.
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Very good Chongmei fan work, please update it soon
It's beautiful. It's my top 1 favorite book at this time.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
Can anyone sort out what abilities the system gives the protagonist? There are so many abilities, I don't even know what they are.
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Damn it, this woman can't smoke no matter what.
The platinum author lives up to his reputation! Much better than many mindless articles.
Happy, spinning around
Ah Jiu's books are must-reads. I've read every one of them. Some of them are second-readers. They have a positive outlook on life and are also humorous. I really look forward to every one of them. I don't dare to read them all now, otherwise it will be too difficult😊😊
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
come on
Come on, stay away from eunuchs. I am most afraid of chasing eunuchs.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
Various high-end but useless plug-ins
I haven't read much of it, and I can see that the writing is immature and the writing is lackluster. Let's talk about the relationship between Bibi Dong and Tang Yuan first. He intervened abruptly and inexplicably developed a mother-son relationship for Tang Yuan. There was no description or emotional description of Qian Renxue at all. In the original work, although Bibi Dong Qian Renxue did not deal with it, she still had feelings hidden in her heart. Let's talk about plug-ins, Yin Yang Qi Training Technique, Impermanent Soul Chasing Step, Judge's Life-Destroying Sword, all kinds of high-sounding plug-ins, but in the end, he had a back-and-forth with Yu Tianheng, who was at the same soul level as himself, and also had a super-life soul ring. You say he has strong soul power, but after using it a few times, it completely loses it. You say he is strong, but his strength is too limited. In the author's writing, he has a variety of external skills that are not available in the original characters, but his combat power is a mess. The writing is so stiff that it's hard to read. .
Good, good, good, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of immortal emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains?
The soul method is just a piece of shit. After the soul beast dies, the soul will be captured and used as a slave for eternity. The protagonist who has no brains will treat it as a treasure? Tell the truth and make the soul beast clan go crazy on the spot.
Very meaningful
"Transforming a desert into an oasis" may seem far away to ordinary people, but as long as you dare to think and do it, and work together, there is nothing you can't do! A very meaningful book!
Isn't this just a running account, and it's so watery. I jumped and watched it without affecting the plot. Do you know the gold content of this sentence? I really don't understand why the rating is so high. He is also extremely brainless and likes to play tricks.
The reason why the evil soul master is wreaking havoc is because Tang San destroyed the Wuhun Palace, and also destroyed the city of killing, and the soul method is even more disgusting. Not only does it kill the whole body and soul, but it also requires you to be your slave for eternity. Author, you also wrote that the male protagonist actually regards gadgets as treasures? Change it quickly, otherwise no one will give you high marks even with your soul law enforcement certificate.
Aren't Demon King Qizhao and Hu Jiuling in the same spiritual realm? Which one is more powerful?
I've seen similar cheats where the person who puts them away becomes a slave
To be honest, these people didn't turn into ashes even after they died, and they still left unsolved mysteries. There are other novels in which people are turned into slaves and given to the protagonist to farm and graze in space. The young and beautiful ones are used for pleasure, and when they are old, they are given to slaves.
Anchor teacher, update soon! ! 👿I check your updates after school every day
Nice! ! Yeah, it's so cute hahaha, every time I see delicious food I get greedy😋
I hope you all like this work, because Laodie spends most of his time in class and plays games when he gets home, so he has little time for coding. I hope you understand, hehehe
It's okay. Can the main author change the golden finger in the future? The setting of the urn in the early stage can predict the future, which makes people feel a sense of urgency and excitement. However, the plot of the urn in the back is so long that people can't get into it. When I read the first dozens of chapters, I felt it was very exciting and very interesting. Later, it became more and more flat, and the plot can basically be seen. It's a bit... Tired😵
I hope to write a follow-up to Dragon King after finishing this book.
Why isn't it updated? , Update update update update!
It's so confusing. This section and that section are just water characters.
Author, please update quickly. My membership is about to be lost.
When did you become a calligraphy teacher?
One of the best online reading comprehensions is wrong
Thank you, author, for not giving up halfway! I just like watching slave girls with single heroines
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What a great opportunity life should be
Oops, I almost forgot about it, but I finally remembered it.
The most touching love story in a book I have ever seen
Well, it's a bit traditional, but not particularly traditional. I like to see this kind of thing.
It is really well written, the author must keep writing it
It stretches the crotch too much. Is it just a eunuch? I can't write this.