Douluo: Both True and False

I wrote Sun and Moon Tongcuo for you (although there is only a template for Wanye), and it is not bad, so I will give you a good review. It is much better than the previous fan stories about Sun and Moon Tongcuo.

You have all kinds of karma, why don't you just direct the effect first and then the cause? In fact, in this type of subject, you can write Huang's Selfless Dharma, Chen's The Man Who Stealed the Stars, and Zhenyi's The Sword of Ten Thousand Magics all quite easy to write. Some of the better ones include Gao Haoguang's "False World and True World Preliminary Body" and "Yi Sheng Yi". "Death to the past" is the same as Yhwach in "Death". If there is no corresponding causal and magical confrontation, it will be unsolvable in Douluo Continent. It is a replica of the Holy King. The main character in the Holy King is me who says you are dead, and then the enemy dies. It is extremely boring.

If you don't have a membership and you let me use coins to buy, but if you have a membership and you still let me use coins to buy, then wouldn't my membership be in vain?

Speaking of Chen's Star Stealer, by bringing Wanye from the future to the past, did he help the protagonist group or harm the protagonist? I don't understand it a bit. I saw someone in the comment area saying that if Wan Ye was born directly in the future, he would be born directly in a complete body and the three truths would have no way to fight against it. But Chen brought him from the future to the past, causing Wanye to remain in an incomplete state, often falling asleep and occasionally waking up. Sanzhen has been making plans and has the possibility of winning Wanye. So, has Chen helped the protagonist group or harmed them? I just watched Sun and Moon and I didn't quite understand it. I didn't see the settings about Wanye. If they were harmed, how would the plot develop if Wanye was not brought to the past? I saw that Chen had a conflict with the Three True Patriarchs, and then Chen brought Wanye from the future to the past. I don't know much about the rest.

Why couldn't the first sword of the Five Finger Fist Heart Sword severely injure Gu Yue? He was only over level 20 at that time. The protagonist is over level 30. I feel like the Immortal Killing Tail is too profitable.

What I wrote before was pretty good, but after I went to Shrek, it fell apart. I had zero sense of presence. I was too hung up on it, and I couldn't grasp it later.

The author has passed away... Two days after he issued the announcement...

Authors should not write about multiple women, because I think according to their characters, they would not agree to serve one man together. Of course, the main reason is that most authors write about multiple women. Whether it is about emotional handling or anything else, the writing is a mess.

Can there be no heroine? It would be too troublesome to have a heroine

The setting of this novel is based on the comic "The Sun and the Moon Are Together". It is recommended to read "The Sun and the Moon Are Together"