Chaos Tai Chi Swallowing the Starry Sky

Can you please stop being so stupid? A "reference" for the entire sheet? Apart from changing the name, what about the content? . .

The protagonist is Zhang Sanfeng, and there is no sense of immersion from this point on. Fanfics like this just have to be fun to watch. As a result, if you come up with Zhang Sanfeng, many people will probably quit after seeing this.

There are so many poisonous points that I don't know where to complain. There are many versions of Zhang Sanfeng, so any character can be accepted. But no matter which version, at least he is in a good mood after living for so many years, instead of being unable to control his own emotions and looking like a loser when he sees a woman. And the IQ is also very touching. Why do you think that if you offend others, others can't use small tricks to deal with his family? Are you still so naive after living for hundreds of years? Or is it that the protagonist said that the body of an intermediate student is stronger than that of the previous life, but how did he survive to the 22nd century when his body was weaker than that of the intermediate student? There is also something wrong with your parents, and the house is blocked. You dare to ask your sister to go out to the martial arts gym to call someone. You will die if you make a phone call. Your parents don't have mobile phones? My phone is out of battery and won't charge? Even if I don't worry about my sister's safety, it's still faster than going to the martial arts gym.

The protagonist has already read it and asked some idiotic questions. What's even more outrageous is that he only entered the training camp assessment after more than sixty chapters. It's really curious to write a story that is so long and smelly and has such a high rating.

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First, the original monsters were changed to monsters at the beginning. The reason is explained in the setting of the work. The main reason is that monsters are more suitable for Ultraman. Second, I have specifically researched and found out that the original book explains that the monsters on the earth are a type of monster. Therefore, there is nothing wrong with the description of monsters. There is no need for book friends to get entangled. The specific location is in Chapter 15 of the Sixth World Lord: One-horned Iron Rhinoceros Group The original text is as follows: The monster beast group refers to those who have relatively high intelligence when they are similar to the "apprentice level" of humans. The monsters on the earth are monster beasts. The slightly mature monsters are no less intelligent than humans! It should be clear by now. Needless to say, I haven't read the original work, so I'm so tired.

As a reader who has played Devouring Starry Sky a lot, this fan fiction can be said to be pretty good. There are a few points that I don't know whether they are depressing or poisonous, so I would like to bring them up for study: 1. Background of the time traveler: I personally think that as a fanfic, the identity of the time traveler should be a character who has no actual identity or whom the reader has not come into contact with before. But the author uses Zhang Sanfeng. When the name is mentioned, it is another character. It is easy for him to become a time traveler and there is no sense of substitution. (Indeed, I rejected it when I first saw the introduction, but after reading a few books, I came to read it when I was exhausted). 2. Many of the plots of the author's stories are very close to the original ones, and many opportunities came back to Luo Feng. (I don't know if this is a poisonous point in the fan fiction: the protagonist always allows opportunities to return to the original protagonist, and then escorts him like a nanny. I really don't understand.) 3. The protagonist's emotional aspects are very slow to write. The original description of emotions in Swallowed is relatively direct and generous, and there is not much space to describe it (indeed, there is not much space to write about emotions in the article, but since both parties are interesting, the woman has also taken the first step, why is it kept dragging on in various ways, and then the mother-in-law and mother escape?) 4. Compared with the original work, the characters (high-level characters) have a lot more dark side. 5. The cause-and-effect relationship of the discovery of the earth's special characteristics is a bit reversed (the original work was because Hong broke into the sea of ​​illusion and attracted attention; now it is Hong who is maliciously seeking revenge and is forced to break into the sea of ​​illusion, and then attracts attention), which feels a bit unreasonable (how can the people in the Giant Ax Arena dare to arbitrarily destroy the home planet of the core members of the original secret realm of the virtual universe?) 6. The way the Earth's special characteristics were discovered was a bit procrastinating and childish (in my opinion). The author spent a lot of space describing how to deal with the decisions of the human race's top leaders (it stands to reason that the author combined the snobbery and greed of the top characters, the hesitation of the Chaos City Lord and the giant axe). Not much has been written, so why not just choose to rent it out and set the rules like the original work, or take a risk and collect or move the earth like the original work, and then forget about the grudge left against the human race, and just use relative strength in the future! I don't understand why you spend so much time showing off your skills and jumping around to show off your strength.) I wonder if the above points are depressing or toxic to readers? Really, for readers who have read the original work a few times, these points really feel a bit poisonous.

I suggest the author go back and read the original "Earth Swallowing" chapter carefully.

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This book is so convoluted, it gave me a splitting headache