The Ranger Starts by Seeing the Monster's Health Bar

Project establishment demonstration: T3 level. Work tags: Pseudo-DND, Ranger, Adventure, Psychological Description, Western Fantasy. Rating: A. Goldfinger has outstanding characteristics and is relatively restrained. The details and psychological description give the story a certain sense of reality and immersion; B. The integrity cannot be evaluated temporarily; C. The writing details are slightly rough. A brief review in one sentence: The sense of reality and immersion is acceptable, but it is a Western fantasy novel that needs further observation. 1. Introduction Born into this world, demons are whispering, dragons are circling, goblins are wandering in the wilderness, and dangers are everywhere. Monsters, enemies, and even gods all have a [health bar] suspended above their heads that only he can see. From then on, the ranger's arrow trajectory was redefined. [Weakness attack! -99! ] [Fatal blow! -999! ] A dragon showing off its immortal scales? Interesting, why is there a negative sign of [Old Injury] next to your health bar? Are the saints of the church inviolable? Wait, what is that chain-like [seal] behind your health bar? "There is no real immortality in the world, it's just that the damage is not enough." Bol-Bosk whispered. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot follows a traditional path. The protagonist, who was born in a small border town, becomes a legendary ranger with the help of a golden finger that visualizes the blood bar. The character creation in this book is not very outstanding, but most of the characters are relatively comfortable. It is worth mentioning that the overall social atmosphere is relatively positive, and there are no dark and despicable people who are unworthy of the stage at the beginning. The author's writing is of a somewhat standard but not stable type. The description of psychology and life is acceptable, but the expression techniques are relatively simple. For example, close-ups of lips are used too frequently. 3. Highlights There are two main features of this book: First, it is relatively restrained. In terms of setting, the strength of Goldfinger is not too exaggerated. It is a type that is easy to use but does not reduce the protagonist to a pendant. In terms of story, it is reflected in the smooth and solid operation of several small plots. There is no deliberate pursuit of big news such as facing a life-and-death crisis at the beginning, all teammates dying on the first adventure, or a novice being involved in a shocking conspiracy. The second is the description of psychology and life. There are very few online works that touch on this aspect. Most of them quickly cut into the high-speed feedback loop of fighting, winning, and becoming stronger. This is so refreshing, but the price is that the protagonist is like a ruthless upgrade machine, somewhat lacking in human touch, and the sense of substitution is slightly insufficient. This book contains psychological transformation content, and the scale and magnitude are properly grasped, which can not only make readers empathize to a certain extent, but also prevent them from losing patience due to too much relevant content. 4. Questions ①The opening plot is relatively bland, basically the same old routines that we are used to seeing; ②The author's numerical settings for quantifiable items such as price and distance seem to be open to question; ③ From time to time, you may experience difficulty in reading because of missing words, or even feel that a paragraph is missing.

The plot is okay, a bit like Goblin Slayer, not brilliant but not wrong, and the pace is too slow. Generally speaking, there are no scenes that reduce intelligence. Just like Goblin Slayer, the pace is too slow. I haven't seen the first skill yet.