Shan Yu Jiao

Project establishment demonstration: T3 level. Work tags: No time-travel elements, indigenous non-human protagonist, slow-burning, classical fairy tale. Rating: A. It's quite a pure story about alien cultivation. Let alone the time traveler, the origin of the protagonist has nothing to do with humans; B. The integrity cannot be evaluated temporarily; C. The author's words and the background of the story complement each other, and the atmosphere is quite in place. A brief review in one sentence: A journey of spiritual practice that begins with a wild reptile, focusing on the inability to see, understand, and remember. 1. Introduction The road to cultivation may seem beautiful, but in reality it is like walking on thin ice, and only you know the pain involved. A black snake from a humble background, helpless and alone in the wind and rain, wandering on the edge of the human world. Unable to escape being burned by thunder and fire, struggling hard, the road ahead is unknown... True story. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The main plot is basically consistent with the introduction. It is worth mentioning that the author has a good control over the rhythm, which to a certain extent shows the persistence and regrets of the spiritual path. The character creation is one of the highlights of this book. The characters with more scenes are all flesh and blood, which is impressive. The author's writing is of excellent quality, giving the story a spiritual and elegant classical style. 3. Highlights First of all, as a novel about alien cultivation, this book is extremely pure. It includes all the opening bonuses such as past life experience, time-travel knowledge, and system cheats. The short-sightedness, low intelligence, and parasites of snakes are not left out. It can be said to be quite realistic. Secondly, most alien beast novels usually start with a demon or a mature spiritual monster. It quickly transitions to the demon stage, and the beast part only serves to create the atmosphere. As of the time the book is released, the protagonist can hardly be called a demon. This shows that the author does not just use the beast protagonist as a gimmick; finally, the background, atmosphere, and plot of the book are all in the classic fairy-xia style, and combined with the author's writing style, the effect of one plus one is greater than two. 4. Questions ①The story develops quite slowly; ②The protagonist's influence on the plot is too passive; ③The story is relatively dull and lacks impact.

Excellent quality grass jelly, recommended. From the beginning of writing about the intelligence of animals, the author's writing style is really good. How did a black snake with a humble birth survive a catastrophe and become a dragon? The subject matter is really good, a bit like folklore. The writing and plot are both top-notch. I hope the author can maintain the current quality, and the plot will be more exciting in the future.

Out of the circle index: 93 The humble little snake's journey to ascension through calamities. It has been very interesting since I started writing when my spiritual wisdom first emerged. How does an ordinary wild snake transform into a dragon that can move wind and rain step by step? The writing style of this book is really good, and the author's writing style is also very steady. I recommend it.

At first I was attracted by the introduction, which seemed to be the cultivation process of a humble snake turning into a dragon, which was quite interesting. I heard a lot of legends like this when I was a kid. This is the first time I see someone writing a fairy tale. It should be very exciting. I have collected it.