Supreme Immortal Dynasty

The initial feeling is good, and some details are handled well. But as I approach chapter 100, I personally feel that the plot structure starts to become simpler, and it becomes more obvious later on. The performance is that the halo of the pig's feet is getting bigger and bigger, the pace is obviously accelerated, and the details cannot withstand scrutiny. There are only two types of characters. One is the pig's trotters camp NPCs with shrunk IQs, and the other is the hostile camp with despicable personalities who will hang on pig's trotters sooner or later. Moreover, as long as the character hinders the pig's trotters' growth, they must be despicable. Of course, they will be found and killed in the end. What a pity, I have to look for books again😭

It's okay. I just watched it to kill time. It was quite boring later on.

I have read the free chapter, the book is good. There may be some minor flaws, but I don't think they are any major problems after careful consideration. It is definitely not as disparaging as some people have said, and these people may lead new readers astray. Some people may have limited their minds by watching the traditional fairy fantasy of upgrading and fighting monsters, and they can't accept the official fairy mode all of a sudden; some people may just have no patience at all... No more words, keep reading!

I was very impressed by this book, "The Cultivation of Immortals and Officialdom", but first of all, the emotional line of the heroine is inexplicably drawn. The two heroines are like vases. Or don't write the heroine. The character image of the heroine is not plump. Also, the martial arts part feels so abrupt and boring.

The biggest problem is that the protagonist is reborn and believes that the status of the Immortal Cultivation Sect is low, the status of the civil servants is low, the status of Yin officials is high, and the status of the Immortal officials is high before he resolutely becomes a ghost. Then the protagonist, a high-status ghost, starts to be killed by ordinary disciples of the Cultivation Sect. The reason is that there are people behind the sect. Why do you think you are so useless? Wouldn't it be better to join the Immortal Cultivation Sect directly?

Hey, after watching it halfway through, I found that Immortal Dynasty was surprisingly to my liking. It's not bad. I'll continue watching it tomorrow.

Xian Xia wrote official articles, and he was convinced. Shouldn't Xian Xia cut off all obstacles with one sword? If there are still so many constraints on cultivating immortals and you still have to settle down, what kind of immortality is this?

I have been reading Xianxia and fantasy novels for almost ten years. Now they are all boring and the plots are the same. Now many old bookworms are reading novels in which the protagonist uses technology to benefit the Chinese through time travel.

I wish Qiezi and all my classmates a healthy Dragon Boat Festival and happy reading! 🌹😄Eggplant should arrange time reasonably and pay more attention to health and sleep. I hope every writer can be healthy both physically and mentally and write happily!

The plot in Pingdingshan is so damn vicious, it feels like it was written by someone else's representative. The protagonist's IQ is completely out of line, and he goes to die even though he knows that his cultivation has been suppressed to a mortal level. What's even more annoying is that Pingdingshan doesn't have anything that the protagonist must get, and his relationship with Lu Suyi is even more toxic. For example, when you were a child, you had a yellow-faced neighbor who was very nice to you. When you grow up, you suddenly realize that she is a girl in disguise. Will you fall in love with her immediately? Do you still say she is your woman? Is it disgusting? It takes a long time for everyone to adapt to the fact that the yellow-faced woman is a girl, let alone fall in love with her. I am speechless. This emotional scene is too blunt.

It feels like the author changed in the middle. Late collapse.

When I first started watching it, I felt that Fu Chunlai was a bit toxic. The author was robbed of immortality by Lin Yong in the early stage and the ghostly nature of his robbed Fu Chunlai was actually the same.

I feel like the protagonist's survival is basically down to luck, and he's always seeking death.

I have died of poisoning, goodbye 🙂

Really poisonous, the villains are all mentally retarded😅

The plot in Celestial World is a complete mess, white within a white, written ten years ago. What takes others tens of thousands of years and hundreds of thousands of years to achieve, the protagonist can achieve in just ten years. Even the people around the protagonist are indifferent. They can do in a few years what others cannot do in tens of thousands of years. Originally, the protagonist could complete the book by cultivating to the heaven and human realm in the void world, but the author forced to write another heaven and human realm and ruined the book.

The plot is weird and the writing is pretty good. I can't stand it until I reach seventy chapters.

Ya's martial arts skills were so strong that he was eaten by wild beasts

I feel that the subject matter that is particularly good has not been written well. Well

Of course, a book written in 18 years will be criticized now. If "Journey to the West" was replaced by a modern novel instead of one of the four classics, it would definitely be trash among the trash. The protagonist was suppressed for 500 years not long after he became awesome. Isn't this pure abuse of the master? And the title is definitely cool. But he beats the abuser. Don't be too harsh, okay? Of course, although this is my entry-level book, I will naturally have some filters. So I recently re-read it, and I think it's okay. Although the routine seems a bit old now, it is really good-looking.

The writing is still the same as that of cultivating immortals in the underworld. This kind of book is still comfortable to read by the immortal officials of the celestial dynasty.

I'm not saying it, it really doesn't work. After reading nine chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. I've also been a bookworm for six years, so maybe I'm too impetuous? But I'm not saying that there are really too many flaws, and with the three golden chapters, even if the later parts are worse than the previous ones, which are very good, the book will not be bad.

There are too many golden fingers to highlight the character's characteristics There are also spiritual ears, calligraphy, soul inside, etc., Especially spiritual ears. According to the saying that you can hear other people's words, can you just go next to the minister and hear secrets?

Why is the Yin Official not considered another department? Just like the Dragon Palace, the Yin King of the Ten Palaces is from the third level to the fourth level. The largest Ksitigarbha was at least ranked from the first-level provincial city emperor to the fifth-level king. The city emperor of the state is in the seventh rank, and the general judge is in the eighth rank. The ghost difference is calculated from the ninth level. The Dragon King of the Four Seas is at least from the second level, right?

It's a pretty good book, with occasional flaws, but it doesn't affect the main theme! !

Is there any reader friend who can sort out a detailed division of cultivation realms? The Tao of Immortals, the Tao of Ghosts, and the Tao of Confucianism. I haven't figured out the comparative strength of each after watching for a long time. Headache.

Based on the introduction you wrote, I won't want to read this book! Of course, this is what the public pursues, just for their own personal interests! Lack of passion! The style is too small! Just like when our country was backward, many "smart people" applied for immigration. Because they were backward and poor, they did not want to be Chinese! I no longer want this country to do something, even if it is very small! Maybe this is the human heart! Well! If you write your profile as a mortal, you can take a look. When people get old, the passion in their hearts has not faded!

I have read several books by this author, and this is probably the last one. I can only say that the writing is readable, but the setting and plot logic are very poor. I can only read two to three hundred chapters at most, and then the setting collapses and the plot collapses. Is it all AI ghostwriting or a studio? Oh, yes, the writing also collapsed after ghostwriting. This book is even more so. It feels outrageous to read it for free. Free chapters, writing three or four of the same kind of trash, and then having to accept a bunch of domineering sect trash, it's just a disgusting plot.

The logic of this book is very poor. The Immortal Dynasty in which it was written said that this time he wanted to get involved in the official system, but the whole book did not reflect the benefits of the system. I couldn't write it anymore. It was the last life. What do I remember? Write powerful people as if they are mentally retarded

The author's logic is poor, many details are carelessly handled, and the reading experience is average.