The Birth of a Sword God

Eggplant has opened a new book. I remember starting from Street of Shadows. The most memorable part is the demon chapter. The time setting is amazing and the beginning is very immersive. Unfortunately, I didn't manage it well in the middle and later stages. It's a pity... The last book didn't satisfy my appetite. This time The story of the Sword God has an attractive beginning, and the writing style is relaxed but not dull. It is a good book so far, but the more than 100,000 words are too unsatisfactory. The last chapter is coming soon. I will keep it for now. I will give you two recommendation votes every day as encouragement. Come on, eggplant! 😄

I have read 360,000 words of the book so far. The advantage is that it has a strong beginning and a relaxed writing style. But the shortcomings are also obvious, that is, the rhythm is average, the main line is unclear, and the continuity is not enough. For example, the first main line is about impersonation. This line is good, thrilling and fascinating, and the ending of this line is perfect. The next is the second line, accidentally seizing the Earth Evil Sword and arousing the hatred of the high-ranking senior brothers. This line is relatively weak, with conflicts but not intense, which makes people lack expectations. Why is it said that there is a lack of expectations? Because the level gap between the protagonist and the opponent is too big, the reader's first impression is that the protagonist cannot defeat the opponent in a short period of time. If he can defeat the opponent, then the book will be over. The third line is the Demon King of Han Liang's Tomb. Like the second line, the strength gap is too big and cannot be completed in the short term. What follows is a period of practice, which seems relatively dull without conflicts. Next is the fourth line, I am really speechless... The above two long-term projects have not been solved yet, and a more Evergrande century project has to be carried out, which has inexplicably attracted the hatred of the fairy world. This hatred has no foreshadowing, appears very suddenly, and directly destroys the sect. Seeing this, there is no hope, it would be good if you can not despair. The above words have some emotions, but they are all from the perspective of a reader. In addition to being a pity, I also hope that Eggplant can pay more attention to details and shortcomings in the future, and can write as good an article as the Devil Chapter again. As long as Eggplant doesn't give up on this book, I will always support him 🙏

The Sword Tomb was quite stiff. The protagonist somehow let go of all his guard against Jiaolong and turned into a chatterbox. Suddenly, the protagonist felt like I was so tired and wanted to find someone to talk to. He talked about Brother Jiao, even talking about time travel. It's too deliberate, a sense of déjà vu like Yang Guo's brother Diao

I have never seen a protagonist with normal bones.

I wish this book success! Of course, as a reader, I am still most afraid of the eunuch being unfinished. Come on, eggplant✍🏻

I couldn't sleep, and suddenly I thought of a book I had read in junior high school called The Devil's Chapter, and I thought of the friends I had met through this book. After searching, I found that Qiezi is still writing books, but his ability is limited. I will give you a reward of 100. Come on, Qiezi, your book is my youth.

I'm tired of watching waste materials, and I haven't written any new tricks.

The protagonist who is on the 10th level of Qi training, with a sword, can reach the 10th level of Tongyou from thousands of miles away, and his combat power is greatly improved.

After breaking through the tenth level of qi training and deducing it, Tiandao found out and banned him. He didn't know how to complain. Originally, I was thinking about simply practicing a hundred levels of qi and becoming an immortal directly, but in the end, I got a title from Heaven. The Heaven in this world was taken over by someone from a certain sect. Is it hard to see a genius born in another sect? Otherwise, the realms created by the human race's skills will do the things of Heaven. Not only is Heaven conscious, but it is also afraid that someone will exceed its control? Furthermore, it's only the qi training period, and there are still thousands of miles to reach the way of heaven. I had poor qualifications and no follow-up skills. I finally found some hope, but my account was banned again. And this sect, if it is a little bit more powerful, it will doubt this and that. Isn't it a genius? No one has any secrets. If you ask the disciples of the sect who have not made any mistakes, who can bear it? Not to mention the deviant morality, no one will support it. Maybe one day they will be killed by some disciple who has an unexpected encounter and betray the sect.

After writing so much, it stands to reason that my writing style should be good, but why do I write like a novice?

Although I see it is a bit mediocre now, I will continue to support it silently. Come on eggplant (ง •̀_•́)ง

After it was put on the shelves, I started to feel a little embarrassed. I started practicing Qi, but ended up being sniped? This is outrageous! The protagonist, a young monk, does not pay attention to his own practice, but he can still deduce the imprint of the past and the mysterious sword duel in the world? Isn't it important to emphasize the protagonist's understanding? Shouldn't he be able to walk his own way? Why did you suddenly deduce a sword fight with a back door? Is it so easy for an immortal to be discovered and seduced by the protagonist? Aren't you afraid that all the Sword Jue cultivators who were picked up are just materials? Focusing on the sword, will the Sword Jue lead him on the path of sword spirit? Still thinking about being picked up and taken all the way to the sky? I don't understand why a person like this is taken to the fairy world? This is fattening up, and after tidying up, you can extract your soul and practice treasures. Before that, I had learned about the cruelty of the immortals from the Earthly Sword, so I didn't have any vigilance at all.

Already read, the front and back are not written by the same person at all

The architecture system has been broken. Tell others your insights, and others can upgrade this setting...

I've read Chapter 16. How should I put it, apart from the fact that the words are not right, the other routines are still the same as before, standard waste, standard adventure. Of course, there must be some trouble-making and some pretense, and when it comes to pretense, there must be a few knowledgeable people secretly frowning. In short, it is a very ordinary, standard useless counterattack article that cannot be more ordinary. But it looks quite comfortable. If you are short of books and have nothing to read, you can go in and read it as soon as you close your eyes. If you have books to read, just wait until the book shortage comes again.

It was a bit novel at the beginning, but it became more and more boring later on.

Speechless, any author who dares to write a useless opening, without particularly awesome writing style or super strong plot is a brave person... Silly

There is a problem with the level of strength. Jiaolong is only in the stage of Qi training! The characters on the trip are each more awesome than the last. The protagonist has practiced Qi for three levels to make people feel like a strong person!

It's okay in the front, but as soon as he leaves the sect, he tries to show off, and the villains are all nt. Things that could be explained clearly in a few words are still unclear 😜

It started to become cliche after about thirty chapters, so I stopped reading it. This book must have been written by a studio, or the author just treats the readers as fools, and the more he writes, the more retarded he becomes.

In fact, it was fine in the early stage, but the routine of always pretending to be cool and slapping people in the face was too stiff. Hey, why can't I change it?

Now they are starting to focus on quantity rather than quality.

It's all booked, one monthly pass and three recommendation votes. I hope the author will be more eunuch, can you add some details?

Is it finally over? I feel like with such a good talent, the path to sword cultivation is narrow.

The pace is a bit fast, it's about to end

The writing is good, but Chapter 45 is a bit intellectual. Skipping does not affect reading.

To be honest, I feel that the front part is particularly toxic and a little bit overwhelming.

The author's writing is very good, and it is definitely worth reading and subscribing. Recommend a book that is decisive, sharp, and full of joy: "Old Man in Time Travel Picks Up Rags and Survives by Making Bad Movies" is hilarious...

Chapter 59 Defeat! 😅

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁