The Day of Imprisonment

Nowadays, the weirder and uglier the titles of Qidian's books are, the more likely they are written by novices. A book with such a small title like this one must have two brushes. It's really good to see the latest chapter. I hope you don't become an eunuch. I will definitely order them all.

The writing is very good, but I want to make some suggestions 1. You made the male protagonist too invincible, which makes it difficult to develop the subsequent plot, and the audience will also suffer from aesthetic fatigue and no sense of tension 2. The background story of the supporting characters is complete (referring to the female supporting role only), but it does not reflect other things, such as one's own thinking and inner struggle. I feel that the protagonist's casual words will make people around him obey too much. I feel like it's a bit modular. Except that the protagonist is a tool man, the protagonist sees through everything. I feel that this is not conducive to the development of the book.

I read this book because someone in Red Chicken commented that the protagonist of this book is a mentally ill person with high IQ. I had high expectations for it, but after reading a few chapters, I realized that I didn't think it was a high-IQ book. Even the purity of mental illness is not enough, let alone mental illness such as Zhu Jue or Brother Huozi. From now on, the protagonist is an ordinary person who can see spiritual fantasies, or a normal person, and his thinking is also normal, and he does not feel any mental differences. Secondly, let's talk about high IQ. It is difficult to write a high-IQ protagonist, and very few are well-written. But in this book, you have to say that the protagonist has a high IQ. I really don't think there is anything that shows high IQ. Let's take "The End of Ten Days" as an example. Although I didn't finish reading this book, at least the reasoning in the front is logical and self-consistent, and the protagonist's IQ is shown by comparing with his teammates. But in this book, I really didn't see how high the protagonist's IQ is. Finally, let's talk about the plot and setting. This goes without saying. Every author has his or her own set of designs. However, from the beginning of this book, I was bored by the "memory collector" and "cleaner". To put it bluntly, the plot structure and design are not very exciting. Of course, this is also because I have read too many similar novels including Infinite Stream, Hell Apartment, Tinder, and Mystery Game. In comparison, at least in the early stage, the setting of this book did not appeal to me. Of course, if the author writes some amazing wisdom in the follow-up, just pretend that I didn't say it. I just commented on the first few chapters and the plot is not very attractive. 🙂

Finally, I saw a discussion that was all about praising Brother Eggplant. It's really amazing. Brother Eggplant, I feel ashamed to say it. I haven't received any serious support, so I can only send two recommendations silently every day. Every new book by Brother Eggplant is followed and pinned to the top. I recommend and support Shadow Street and Demon Chapter. I have been reading it again recently. Compare I like the Infinite Flow World written by Brother Eggplant. I read Shadow Street written by you in junior high school, and now I have a baby. How come it has been so many years, and my favorite author is still Brother Eggplant. I will definitely read Shadow and Demon once a year. Come on Brother Eggplant, I hope you will get better and better, and become platinum as soon as possible

I watched Street of Shadows in high school and am now 27. Brother Eggplant is also constantly improving. This is the real author. Come on!

It's similar to the way Alice or Ten Days Ends. Killing games are not a new subject, but there are no bad routines, only people who can't write them. There is still a market for upgrading and killing monsters after writing them for decades. The author's writing style is online, without fancy nouns or messy Riddlers. There are really very few authors who are willing to write plots in a down-to-earth manner. I like it and hope to maintain this level.

This kind of novel doesn't require using your brain because it's all forced logic.

I read the reviews and said it can be compared to Tokazu no Tsurugi, but after reading the book, it's really the same as Tokazuzu noshi and it's comparable.

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The author has written more than ten books. Among them, these are probably the most outstanding and profound ones for most readers, Street of Shadows, Demons, Supreme Immortal Dynasty, and New World. The rest, to be honest, are ordinary and tasteless. In the infinite flow and science fiction genres, Eggplant still has something, but It's because of poor control over the details, some high openings and low moving trends. The setting in Demons where time is both life and currency is really amazing. I suggest the author combine shadow and demons to polish it into an infinitely fine work. The fantasy genre has too much nonsense and too little excitement. , Just like the quality of an iron ore in The Immortal of Weapons is divided into too many grades. I think that's not what most readers want to read. If you want to use a sophisticated and detailed writing style, then you have to write the plot brilliantly, so that our readers will feel that it is long-winded but good-looking. On the contrary, write It's long-winded, and the plot makes people sleepy, which makes readers like me uncomfortable. The dozen or so books you've written include unlimited genres, science fiction, fantasy, urban, apocalyptic, and martial arts. They are all-round but not specialized. Brother, you have been writing books for many years. Do you know what genre you are good at? I think when Shadow Street was popular, you never thought that the subsequent books would sink to such an extent. I won't go into details. I sincerely hope that Brother Eggplant's book will become popular. What I said today is all sincerity. If there is any offense, I will forgive you.