Basic Swordsmanship

The difference between ordinary people and normal authors and water gods 1. How ordinary people write: I put the battery into the flashlight. 2. Normal author's writing: I stuffed two AA batteries into the somewhat worn flashlight. 3. How to write the Water God: Now, I have an old-fashioned flashlight in my hand. Holding it, I felt uneasy. I looked at it and found that, like other old-fashioned flashlights, it had a cover on the hip that could be opened by rotating. When I opened the lid, as I expected, I was speechless when I faced the empty space inside. My brows furrowed tightly, and the feeling of wanting to commit suicide by throwing myself into a lake hit me from all directions. Because I was faced with a difficult choice - go downstairs and buy two batteries, or find two batteries at home. Where is life without trouble? Although it is daytime and I haven't had breakfast yet, as an old-fashioned flashlight, it does not have two AA batteries in it, which is very, very unreasonable. Has anyone heard of such a thing? How could I allow something that no one had ever heard of to happen? ? I'm human too! I have feelings too! ! ! It's just... Making a choice is really, really hard. When I go downstairs to buy batteries, I have to put on clothes and pants, I have to be careful that I forgot to bring my keys, I have to avoid speeding cars on the street, and I have to be wary of meteorites in the sky. Thinking of this, I am speechless... But if you look for it at home, my dear friends, after this age, who else still has AA batteries in their home? I thought about it over and over again, and was in a dilemma. I thought about it for almost two hours. . . . Finally, I couldn't help but let out a deep sigh. Well, I can only put these two AA batteries in my pocket. These two batteries were love tokens given to me by my former and former girlfriends. I thought I didn't have to make such a sacrifice, but it wasn't true. Everyone was involved in the whirlpool of flashlights and batteries. Life is a life of problem solving, and if you have an old-fashioned flashlight that doesn't have the right center of gravity, stick the batteries in it.

There must be a reason for Qiezi to write two books, or he may be helpless, or sad, or passionate, but it doesn't matter, just read it well. I believe that everyone here is a person who plans to write a book but has not conceived it well, or has successfully persisted, or has achieved success. I think you should know better than anyone that writing a book is not easy. No matter how others ridicule, as long as readers like us who can sit still still exist, the author will never extinguish his passion! Eggplant has written more than a dozen books. Has anyone ever considered how many days and nights it lasted? How much persistence and perseverance is it? Everyone will think about giving up, but if you ask me, who can persist in writing more than a dozen books? The author's persistence is valuable, and readers will value it!

I didn't even understand it and gave up immediately.

Opening a new book quietly is too much

After reading a few pictures, I felt that the preface explained all the background clearly, and the subsequent reading experience was very poor. Readers all know that something serious has happened to the spaceship and it's going to be a disaster. The protagonist returns to the lobby and begins to enter the plot world. In this way, readers will always think about what to do in the real world, and it is difficult to enter the plot game of the protagonist. If the background is not explained, the suspense and substitution will feel much better.

The pacing is wrong, the content is too dry, the protagonist is incompetent, and the key golden finger is not visible for dozens of chapters. After all, I have written so many books, and I have made all the mistakes I shouldn't have made. . .

The spaceship has been invaded and almost destroyed, but you still want to play games? ? ? Is this like being hit by a car and bleeding, but still picking up your phone and continuing to play games? ? ? ? ? ? I don't know what I'm thinking about

It was fine in the front, so why did it start feeding shit in the back? You don't use the equipment when you kill people, and you keep saying that your defense is not good, but if it doesn't work, you need to use the equipment!!! You don't want to use it, and you even pick it up for your teammates, and they leave you some money and you are so happy. What is this protagonist if he is not a pig??? He has to feed shit to the readers.

I would like to ask 1. The relationship between the title and the content 2. What is the significance of having an invasion at the beginning 3. What is the significance of the protagonist playing the game Reading a book with no beginning or end for a long time is a kind of mental torture. Setting up suspense does not mean to be mysterious.

I don't understand, why do you start with this? Either you just play the game directly, and make a routine where the spaceship has monsters? Obviously, the author wants the protagonist to grow from the game and save mankind. If the game is useful, will the engineer die? The creator of the game is dead, how can you, a mediocre person, save the world by relying on games? Isn't that the most ridiculous thing in the world?