Reborn in the Carefree Dao

This is the posture that a strong man should have when he is reborn. He has a strong mind and looks down on all living beings indifferently! Rather than forcefully pretending to be pretentious at every turn, like a nouveau riche!

After watching it, the biggest highlight is that there are no big logical problems in the plot, the foreshadowing is well connected, and the story becomes more interesting as it goes on. The male protagonist's character is both decent and smooth, and his worldliness is relatively comfortable to watch. These are the reasons why I can keep reading. There are several main disadvantages. Although he was reborn, in the early and middle stages, he emphasized that he was a loose immortal too many times. Readers have a sense of involvement and can read the rest. This kind of words do not need any explanation at all, just write the mature actions directly. There are too many explanatory texts. Although it is not nonsense, it is obviously inappropriate to write a chapter on one exercise in the middle of the plot. There is a problem with the detailed distribution. It is basically equivalent to high-quality water, and the main focus should be to advance the plot. The above two points are writing problems. In terms of plot, as the protagonist is a reborn person, the normal rhythm should be for the protagonist to make a quick transition based on experience in the early stage, treating many of the early experiences as a quick and easy transition, and then focus on writing in detail in the middle stage to portray various flesh-and-blood characters in depth. However, the pace in the early stage is too slow, and there are not many elements that readers can remember. Although the world view in the later period is well controlled and not too big, many exciting features before the ending are not unfolded, and many details that readers are really curious about are brushed aside. It is also these main problems that make this book with the potential to become a god unsatisfactory. Creation is a gamble, either to please the sinking market, or at least to be a multilateral warrior, or to write a masterpiece. It is also a pity. The shortcomings of this book are too obvious. Most people are more likely to abandon the book in the early stage, not because of the poisonous points, but because of the creative structure. I hope the author will be able to write a truly masterpiece in the future

I don't know how to express what I mean: the description of this protagonist doesn't look like someone reincarnated by a great person, trying to use some spiritual energy to practice, but the result is constant trouble. It seems that he can refine elixirs and weapons, but he always has to run here and there to collect the things he refines. I don't know if it is the best, but it is definitely very troublesome. This is still Qi training and foundation building. If he makes the so-called golden elixir to refine gods, doesn't he have to turn the plane world upside down? The so-called fast cultivation means that the author repeatedly emphasizes that it is incredible how long it takes for the protagonist to practice foundation building. But no matter how you look at it, you feel that the protagonist is doing very meaningless things.

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I can't stand it after reading the first few chapters. The whole world is full of bad guys and courageous little people, haha

Put yourself in a desperate situation and then live. The story layout is also wonderful. It's never easy to guess, which is the biggest attraction of this book. Come on! I personally don't like Wudiwen's books. The opponents in the books are always like pigs. So I really like and appreciate the book "Rebirth of the Path". I look forward to your future new works reaching a higher level. Come on 🤭🌹

It's been several years. At that time, I was still a big-ass primary school student. They are all high school students now. I have been reading Brother Hei's novels. Very missed. Thank you, Brother Hei.

Xiaohei has published a new book, Master Shishu is invincible, everyone should go support him.

After reading hundreds of chapters, it started on Hell difficulty, the whole process was dark, and there was almost no friend group. I was tortured from the beginning to the end. It was so depressing.

This is the second brush, I hope Hei Da can come back