Above the Heavens

Brother Thirteen, I love you. (I heard that writing like this can make it more refined, I don't know if it's true or not 😁)

Wonderful! The author's idea of ​​writing this book is really not bad. He did not overly insist on personal strength, nor did he completely ignore the team. The plot of Skyfire in the beginning was very good, and the current plot development is also good. I feel that the author must have laid some foreshadowing, haha, Above the Sky! Come on come on

1. The problem of enemies being too strong. The opponents I have encountered so far are several levels beyond the protagonist. The protagonist cannot cope with it simply by relying on his personal ability. He can only rely on luck. If he does this many times, it will feel very unnatural. Even if he completes the Skyfire mission, the sense of accomplishment will be greatly reduced. The same is true for the people around the protagonist. Everyone he encounters is high-level. There are several levels of opponents ahead of him, so some people question that the protagonist can open the golden finger and have the protagonist's aura, but how do the people around the protagonist survive so many Skyfire missions? Because the opponents encountered are too strong, and the others are basically the result of group destruction, and the protagonist's small group does not have any casualties. When reading novels written by other great masters, there are also level-breaking challenges, but they are not outrageous. The protagonist will not be weak, but a large number of senior powerful people will emerge and can crush the protagonist with one finger, making readers feel that the protagonist has become a supporting role. 2. The second problem is the old problem of the author. After reading so many books by the author, it can be said that this problem exists, that is, the realm is not clear. The result is that the protagonist can often inexplicably defeat enemies whose realm is much higher than his own. As a result, when the protagonist crosses the level to challenge the enemy in the future, he will think that the protagonist's victory is a matter of course and a piece of cake, thus losing the gripping tension.

What will Song Zheng learn from Ming Mo? The wheel of birth and death or the seal of immortality?

I read this book three times. . Every time I see the promotion to Zhenguo, I can't watch it anymore (I jumped to watch it after escaping from the sky fire). The various realms and magic weapons in the early stage are okay, but the worse it gets later in the game. I spend all day investigating and solving crimes. It's such a headache. It's a fantasy world where strength is supreme, but I don't know what it will become in the future. The sense of logic gets worse later in the game. . Even if you don't have a brain, you can't stand it anymore. It's such a pity that such a good writing style has written such a thing. .

After reading about ten chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The author had no idea about the length. It gives people a headache to look at it. A tree measuring one thousand feet is about five meters in diameter, and a snake eight hundred meters long is as thick as a person. The human body is eight feet tall, and the magic shadow is eight hundred feet tall. Vomited

It's very well written, don't write it again.

Damn it, as long as your brothers and subordinates are all kinds of immortals, they can save you even if they die. The subordinates mutated and went crazy and killed so many people and ate a lot of people. As an official, you don't want to kill him with a sword. Just say it's a matter of friendship. That subordinate wanted to divide the spoils when he woke up and said he wanted to be promoted. Just kill so many civilians and treat it like nothing happened? If you're into dark novels, that's fine. The problem is, you're not. Of course, I know that platinum authors won't read our comments and suggestions. I'm just complaining.

Thank you for your support. Thank you for your support.

After reading about ten chapters, why do I feel so confused? There are just as many descriptions of the main characters and supporting characters. It gives me a headache.