One Word Reaches Heaven

Stick to your own style. As a reader, I personally think your book has a unique aspect. Don't try to adapt to each reader's opinions just because each reader's opinions and suggestions are different. You will feel confused and overwhelmed in the end. Just because it's not popular now doesn't mean it won't be popular in the future. I have been reading books for 7.8 Years. Regarding books about cultivating immortals, one of the few books I like very much is "One Word Can Help the Heaven". I didn't skip a single chapter and watched it from beginning to end. This is my personal recognition, but I believe there are many readers like me! So I want to tell the author, stick to your own line, and you will eventually have wonderful results.

I read Chapter 386 with my unlimited reading coupon. I can't hold it in anymore and I'm going to complain about it The protagonist has no ideas of his own and follows the crowd. It's not a big problem. It's normal to have no control over his fate. There's nothing wrong with comparing yourself to a pig. There are thousands of people with different faces, and their behavior style is also pretending to be pigs and eating tigers. It's more consistent and reasonable, so there's no problem. But as a person who reads novels to experience the new world and new lifestyle, starting from the Pang family The poison points are one after another First of all, the enemy and the friend change. When the protagonist helps in various troubles, the enemy becomes stronger and stronger, and the helper becomes weaker and weaker. The enemy is forcibly formed. Taking the family as an example, among the four major families, the Li family has the position of helping the protagonist, and immediately becomes the weakest rookie in the four major families, with no backing and no influence. In a meeting, the head of the family is bullied by the juniors and becomes anxious. Then how can you stand alongside the others? By love? Then the Pang family, the owner of the four families, is logically the leader of the four families. After siding with the protagonist, there is only one strong person behind him, the ancestor, and three opponents from the Xu family. Then the Pang family made a big mistake when they came to power five years ago and were suppressed. The originally good protagonist came and was stepped on and hammered in the face by the Xu family. Why do you want to be the owner? What kind of boss are you? Then there are wealth, most worldviews, spiritual matters, wealthy couples are dharma, and there are many poisonous points in partners. Let's talk about it later. The wealth has collapsed. Many books have also collapsed in price, but they are inflated in value and can still be read. Forget about raising the price of this book, we have to forcefully suppress the protagonist's capital. I will say the most obvious one is to take the Pang family as an example. A stall can cost dozens of spirit stones for one item, and a meal can cost dozens or hundreds of spirit stones. Painting Saint is a casual cultivator, and he can buy materials for thousands of spirit stones. You are the head of the four major families, the largest sect outside the family, and have been operating for several generations. The protagonist can buy a fishtail lotus for a thousand spirit stones, which can be used by your family (original description), and this fishtail lotus is also a treasure of the Void Core Force (there is only one left). I won't talk about the poisonous point of expelling Lao Pang, who has been the head of the family for several years. It doesn't matter that he can be targeted by ordinary people without having a family position and status as a deacon disciple. After he comes out, he will have more than ten spiritual stones for the protagonist to go out? ? If you can't collect resources and protect your identity, why would the sect give you a name and let you go? Is it embarrassing? Calculating the wealth of a family, it may not be as much as the chef of Fangshi Inn. The cook can steal a few things in a day, which is equivalent to the owner of the family saving for several years. Those who know this is the head of the four major families in the country, and those who don't know may think he is a rich man from some village. This is just the latest example. There are others before, so I won't go into details Finally, let's talk about the partner. Let's not talk about the emotional description. It's a common problem in many books. Take Yang Power Attacks the Heart that I just read. I mentioned Yuan Yin's influence on the pill formation several times before, but I turned around and gave it to the heroine. , There is a brothel just a street away, and it is run by my own family. Not to mention moral loyalty and the like, it is an ancient world view, and the protagonist does not even travel through time. It is the world with the greatest cultivation. What grudges do you have against her? Would you rather be a bad person practicing cultivation than spend a night next door? I can think of it with my buttocks, and later I will write a lot of stuff and stuff to compensate, and I won't even write it like this in a novice article The first hundred chapters are okay, a little bit toxic at most, but starting from the 200th chapter, it's a mess, and the setting is a mess

In terms of the breeze blowing through the leaning bamboo. To be honest, I'm sad +1 The writing is really overwhelming. Why has Rebirth attracted so much attention and so many die-hard fans? Xiaohei, have you ever thought about it? Because you have been telling everyone stories one after another. The essence of your novel is the love, hatred and resentment of little people in a big environment. The more minor characters you write, the more fleshed out the protagonist will be. How many people can speak of being reborn? What about a word? The middle state is not good, and everyone can see that it is not good. I don't know how you view this situation. The state is not good? It doesn't matter, you can change it, but losing readers is difficult to recover. I told you before that you can try to write a whole world, and the books are not even remotely related to each other, but I think you probably didn't listen. Do you know why I suggested this? Because the development of the world view is a very cumbersome process, it is necessary to make everyone accept your settings and understand everyone's behavior patterns. This is actually very troublesome, and if you are not careful, you will make mistakes and mistakes, and you will make big mistakes in your writing. A book will be discarded as soon as it has too few subscriptions. We are all helping you make excuses, saying that you also have to support your family. But if every book ends in a hurry, you will only lose fans instead of gaining them. In fact, you were my favorite author from the beginning until you shrunk the plot of Xiaoyao, and there was no one else. But the sudden drying up of the plot made your whole persona with me a lot more pyrotechnics, but some things also collapsed with it. My previous evaluation of you was to catch up with Jin Yong, but now, it really only has four words, and it is lost to everyone. Finally, I would like to say one more thing. Writing an article requires you to calm down. It is better to save more articles and then

The first part is really good, but the second part is that the author was led astray by some SB trolls... I can understand it. After all, the author worked hard to think about the plot and promote the plot, but his grades are dismal. Writing simple routine articles will be read by more people. If it were me, I would also write routine articles... It's really haha. There are no good articles on the Internet because of a group of elementary school students with poor IQs.

For example, when the dignified left prime minister returns, local officials do not escort him? The left prime minister, who can be called a prime minister, must be at least the third rank, right? According to the Tang Dynasty, the third rank of Tong Zhongshu's family usually held at least the title of minister. In the Song Dynasty, the prime minister usually went out to serve as pastoral minister. If a boss of this level entered the central government again, which one of the local prefects, generals, governors, or governors would not welcome him and send him away? The leftist prime minister lives in seclusion in a remote mountain village? A prime minister of the current dynasty, especially a prime minister who is about to resurrect, will waste his political life in a mountain village for six years? Where is the logic? Can't you just read a history book and see? Either he served as a governor with his rank, or he wrote a book about recruiting disciples, but I have never heard of a prime minister temporarily out of office and lying in a remote mountain village.

In order to show off the male protagonist, the evil godfather eats his godson, and the upright sect elder feeds him poison. It's all kinds of unsightly, and the underworld is not like this. I wrote with my eyes completely closed. I really couldn't hold on anymore, so I gave up.

"I once took people's grain," did you steal people's feces?😰😰

After reading the various chapter reviews of this book, I got the feeling that every reader of Qidian is a logic tutor, a literature tutor, a history tutor, and everything. I also like to teach authors to write books. They are all great talents.

The front is good, but the back is extremely toxic, extremely toxic, extremely toxic. Say important things three times.

The beginning of the novel is very attractive and the writing is very good. Later, Sanniang opened a brothel and asked the protagonist to become a turtle. I can't stand it anymore. Is the main character a child? Yes, but he has also killed many people. He is already considered an adult, and the other protagonists are already killing decisively. He has killed so many people, but he still feels like a pig, a domestic pig. He had no idea at all. He could see things that others could not see since he was a child. Then his master died tragically. After avenging him, he came up with the idea of ​​​​traveling around the world. Then in order to save his friends, he was used as a coolie by the copycat. You couldn't bear to see what the copycat did. You and Mrs. Yazhai, who had been patient for many years, poisoned everyone in the village. How wonderful, and then out of nowhere, you follow Mrs. Yazhai to build a brothel, and you are traveling around the world. You have been able to see things since you were a child. If you don't pursue your true energy, don't you want to become a cultivator? No idea? If you open a brothel, you are a Taoist priest. Qian, whenever you travel around the world or pursue strength, you can blossom. You have to open a brothel. Pigs are dominant only in the wild, and those raised at home are always livestock waiting to be slaughtered.