Immortal Lord Yun

If you want to reward me, as long as it's not a one-time cuteness, you can go and give Yunji a gift! ! ! The fans have the same value, and the black profits are the same! Let's open up our own circle for Yunji first! !

I have been looking forward to it from the beginning of the year to the end of the year. It is finally out. Let's build a building first.

Now that the author has the courage to overthrow and rewrite, I ask all readers to vote for it... Don't forget how much effort it took to write nearly 200,000 words. Please 🙏 everyone collect it and vote for recommendation. Finally, please spread the word 🙏🙏🙏🤝🤝🤝😭😭😭

I have been reading the book until chapter 80. Every day, 6 recommendation votes will be cast and the style will remain unchanged. I have always had confidence in Heida's books and hope that the new ones will sell well.

I like Hei Xian so much. Both my dad and my mother like his works. One day I asked my dad if he had any good book recommendations, and my dad recommended One Word. The writing was really good, and it filled all the holes. It looked very enjoyable. Later I read Rebirth of Xiaoyao Dao. To be honest, Rebirth of Xiaoyao Dao can be said to be the pinnacle of Hei Xian. The plot is gripping and I really liked it. Then I seemed to stop writing books. I went to the Tieba forum to post and asked what happened to Xian Dada. People said that Xian Dada went to open a bar. I felt so bad in my heart. Isn't it misleading for a good author to open a bar? I downloaded Qidian today and couldn't wait to search for Xian Dada. I finally found it. Thank God, I love you Xian Dada. ! ! ! !

Advantages The protagonist has a decisive character, and the plot and foreshadowing are all attractive. It is very interesting to watch. The most uncomfortable part at the moment is killing thousands of miles of monsters and piling up mountains of monster bones, but struggling to kill a wild boar king. . No matter how you play the Wild Boar King, it feels very low-level. Can't it be written as the Tiger King, the Lion King, the Leopard King, and the Snake King? !

To all fellow Taoists who have failed in their investment. Because Hei Da has high demands on himself and was not satisfied with the previous chapters and the protagonist's character, all 200,000 words were deleted and rewritten. In the past seven days after the update was stopped, I tried to find ways to exploit loopholes and updated a notification chapter to avoid investment failure. But now that I'm starting over, the previous notification chapters have been deleted, which has resulted in a direct failure of the investment. I'm very sorry! ! ! I hope you guys will forgive me! ! ! [Bow] The new first chapter has been updated. Fellow Taoists are welcome to review again~

It feels strange that after the revision, the style is completely different from before. . The characterization of the supporting characters has no foreshadowing and is a bit far-fetched, the combat power system is a bit broken, and the protagonist is too invincible. . . In addition, the plot feels too fast and the amount of information is too large. It feels like it is busy explaining the background, with almost no plot details. At the same time, the rhetoric used for modification is too frequent... Instead of doing this, it is better to reduce the amount of information and write a small but beautiful story first.

Compared with the author's previous books, this one has improved a lot in terms of writing style and plot. In particular, there are some chapters that end with poems that are really good. Generally speaking, people with poor writing skills would not dare to use this technique.

With a few teammates who are online for a long time and a female protagonist, the protagonist can have a golden finger and defy the sky, but it is best not to be omniscient and omnipotent from a God's perspective. The protagonist is too serious, too majestic and upright Yiyan's early protagonist has less toxic thoughts, and the supporting characters of Xiaoyao Dao are there, allowing them to be online for a long time and grow together, plus Heida's story, I can't think of a reason why it is not popular.