Immortal Lord Yun

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I waited until chapter 80 before reading the book. I cast 6 recommendation votes every day without fail. I've always had faith in Hei Da's books and hope this new book will be a bestseller.

I love Hei Xian so much! My parents both love his work. One day, I asked my dad for book recommendations, and he recommended "A Word to the Heavens." The writing is truly superb; he fills in all the plot holes, and it's incredibly enjoyable to read. Later, I read "Rebirth of a Carefree Path," which, to be honest, is Hei Xian's masterpiece. The plot is gripping, and I really loved it.

Advantage The main character is decisive, and the plot foreshadowing is captivating; it's quite a good watch. What I find unpleasant right now is... They slaughtered a thousand miles of demonic beasts, piling up mountains of demonic bones, yet they expended so much effort on a single wild boar king. No matter how much they praise the wild boar king, it just feels so low-class. Couldn't they have written it as the tiger king, lion king, leopard king, or snake king?!

To all my fellow practitioners who have experienced investment failures. Because Hei Da has high standards for himself and was not satisfied with the previous chapters and the main character's character design, he deleted and rewrote all 200,000 words.

The redesign feels strange; it's completely different from the old style. The supporting characters' personalities lack development and feel somewhat forced; the power system is inconsistent; and the protagonist is overly invincible. Furthermore, the plot moves too quickly and is overloaded with information, seemingly focused solely on setting the scene, with little attention paid to plot details.

Compared to the author's previous books, this one shows a significant improvement in both writing style and plot. In particular, the use of poetry to end several chapters is truly impressive; most writers with less skill wouldn't dare to employ such a technique.

It should have a few teammates who are always online, and a female lead. The protagonist could have overpowered abilities, but preferably not an omniscient, all-powerful figure with a god-like perspective. The protagonist is too serious, too idealistic and righteous.