There’s Demonic Energy in My Left Eye

The writing is quite good, but the style is terrible. The whole thing is just awkward, and there's no variation. The supporting characters are always arrogant, and the protagonist has to be incredibly wise, like a three-year-old. I don't think many people enjoy this kind of book. Reading too much of it will make you stupid.

Why write paragraphs describing how the girl is? I hear these phrases like "pretty face, beautiful eyes" dozens of times a day. I don't understand what's gotten into authors these days. Writing about harems or harem stories would be better than this endless description of the girl.

That world is quite novel, but the process of showing off is a bit embarrassing. Aside from their limited experience, I suspect the NPCs there are less intelligent than a six-year-old. You can watch it without thinking, but if you're going to be serious, then don't watch it.

I'm sick of this kind of opening. They're constantly exaggerating how dangerous the environment is, yet they don't seem surprised at the appearance of an ordinary person. Is this all the quality they've got? Don't get me wrong, I'm not talking about this book, I'm talking about the entire Qidian platform.

This plot is so cringeworthy, the characters are portrayed as if they have no brains, it's absolutely ridiculous.

Chapter One: The Power of a Divine Book! This book is terrifying beyond belief! Chapter Two: Foundation Establishment, Golden Core? Mid-Rank Demonic Beast? Goodbye!

"The Barefoot Doctor's Handbook," "A Friend to Dual-Use Military and Civilian Personnel," "Militia Training Handbook," "Shenyang Military Region Militia Cadre Handbook," and "Extremely Powerful and Practical - Unrestricted Combat Techniques!" Simple, practical, high-quality, and collectible—highly recommended!

It's been almost two years since you retired from writing. I wonder if you'll continue writing in the future. Wishing you a smooth and happy life.

This attempt at being pretentious is so awkward. If you can't write pretentious stuff, you might as well not write it at all.

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