Transmigrating Simultaneously, My Cheat Only Arrives When I'm About to Die

This is so classic! The Substitution Technique is used as a space-time ninjutsu, and the Clone Technique is used as a Shadow Clone Technique. 🙂

Since there's already one character, I suggest adding Demon Slayer, God of War, or Douluo Continent; the author will definitely become popular.

Damn it! It can't even share basic essence, energy, and spirit! And you dare call it "cross-transmigration"? Cross-transmigration is supposed to be the upper limit of sharing; at the very least, you must share spiritual power. This sharing is discounted! If you don't like this type of cheat, you don't have to write it! You wrote it and then messed it up, sigh!

The author's writing style doesn't immerse the reader in the story, but rather constantly reminds the reader that this is just a fantasy.

What are the first two pages about? It's all narration or inner monologue. You might find it funny, but the reader might find it unbearable.

The fact that the cheat system wasn't strong enough is both a problem and not a problem. But the forced buff in chapter 30, along with the introduction of a spatial spirit, is a real blunder.

What's with the "10 and 11" thing? Kakashi's father died before he was six years old.

Why can you use other ninjutsu while in the Eight Gates state? I didn't see you change the Eight Gates settings!

Author, could you please stop with the alternate character settings? It's making me uncomfortable! 😅

Isn't the progress too fast? Most of it is already written before it's even released! What are they going to write next? Are they really going to make Demon Slayer and Douluo Continent the main focus?