Honghuang: Joining the Chat Group of Beauties from Myriad Worlds from the Start

Is it belittling Honghuang or exalting Douluo? What kind of bullshit logic do you write without reading it? A three-year-old child can write 🤫

In the prehistoric times, there would be no mortals without cultivation, especially the protagonist Jianmu Branch.

I practiced in seclusion in the ancient times, and all the people in the group died. Not to mention that the life span of the people in the group was longer than that in the ancient times. I couldn't read this book.

The people in the group are of no use except being a harem

Pangu Kaitian, at least until the emergence of the human race, there were no mortals at all, and at worst they were all true immortals

No need to read the content! Just look at the introduction and you'll know what it is!

Su Yaoyao: Chen Chuan, you actually started a harem in the group, I want to kick you out. Ding! Su Yaoyao system administrator has been released!

When I saw that I met the time traveler senior after leaving the dojo, I didn't want to watch it anymore.

Well-written chat group articles... all have something in common. 1. Groups are generally newly opened, with few or even no people. (Why do you think it is written like this? Because readers need to slowly expand, rather than being forced into a bunch of things at the beginning) 2. A good chat group article is not afraid of fans that readers do not know, because chat groups generally add people slowly, and people who are added will also be roughly introduced. 3. In a good chat group text, the people in the group are either vivid or have few roles. The author usually portrays characters that are in line with the original character and logical. Naturally, according to the character and logic, the more active roles are, the more vivid they are. The less active ones have fewer roles but are also very vivid, because they are combined with the original characters. Look at this book again... When you enter a group, there are a bunch of people... It's like the beginning. Pig's trotters' character has not yet been well-characterized, and a group of supporting characters pop up. You are not writing a group portrait article... The logic behind it is difficult to complete, "In the beginning, Pig's knuckles are in the group. Why didn't these supporting characters have any ideas when they were in Huo Huo, and they only popped up later..." Or "A big boss came into the group, and none of the group members responded at all, and they all chatted about their own things..." At the beginning, there were all kinds of chats in the group. Do these people just chat in line with the original characters? Because there are other time travelers, the character design is biased? Laugh…

It is said that it takes 500 years for Su Yaoyao to enter the Xuanxian. My dear, if you retreat to a 10 Yuanhui once, Su Yaoyao will become a heavenly immortal, and then go out to wander a few Yuanhui... Does the author know how long a Yuanhui lasts? One Yuanhui = 129,600 years, this book has too many flaws